| "Hamtaro: Little Hamsters, Erotic Adventures" Reviews/Comments [ 143 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ahh, sweet love... On: May 17, 2003 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are SOOOOOOOOO awesome!! Your my hero! Write more is all I can say! PLEEEEAAASE write more,I've gotten to where I cant sleep at night! Whew, ok, to hyper, Sorry bout' that. You have really got a knack for the sexual writing. But... its hard to imagine hamsters with breasts... Forget I said that, it might mess up your writing. The story is flowing very nicely, and now I can't decide which is my favorite. I'm a VERY harsh reviewer, but I just cant say that there's anything wrong with it. From a fellow writer (a very good one at that) I am jealous of how you can combine sex with romance so well!(Cept'ch.9 o' coarse, but it was the kinkiest one!)
P.S. I've seen your reviews, and you need to be more harsh! Those losers are nothin' compared to you! |
Reviewed By: Hirokiri__Batosai On: May 17, 2003 16:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, you are excellent!!! I've never given anyone such a high score! You're my hero! Please keep putting your amazing talent to good use!
P.S. Be more harsh on your reviews. |
Reviewed By: Story Reader On: May 15, 2003 08:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Make this story more erotic & enjoyable. |
Reviewed By: Cool On: May 13, 2003 07:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Write something nice about Boss & Sparkle erotic story. |
Reviewed By: Cool On: May 06, 2003 07:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Now I'm quite pleased with that story you created,but I need to say the next story be very nice & erotic, so pleased write a very nice story. |
Reviewed By: Mitsukai William On: May 05, 2003 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best chapter yet! Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Story Reader On: May 04, 2003 06:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
I would like you to write about Boss & Sparkle next & human threesome erotic story. |
Reviewed By: the old, wise, and wrinkly hamster On: May 02, 2003 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is great!!! i must see more!! keep writing. cya
P.S. i am changing my name to moogle64 |
Reviewed By: NiceHam On: May 02, 2003 06:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
I would wish that you would write about Boss & Sparkle as well as human threesome erotic story.
Thank You. |
Reviewed By: LS On: April 30, 2003 00:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantasmo! Or nice one. I think those four of from the first move, am I right? Lucky guy, at least for now. Anyho, I also saw the epsisode with Sparkle, so I now know who she is as well.
Again, nice story and kudois for the ummm... nevermind. |
Reviewed By: Spoiler IX On: April 28, 2003 02:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Needs to check his spelling better. And there are much more interesting ways to write a sexual scene that the porn industry basics. Scripted style is too hard to follow, interest gets lost easily. |
Reviewed By: Undercover Ham-Ham Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2003 10:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
So far I am satisfied with so many people coming to read it! I would enjoy more comments and I am working on the next chapters, but you must be patient and NO comments on who to do next. I now have enough feedback and have decided the story's path, and I hope you enjoy! Please keep reading and give me feedback on how you like each chapter! Thank you!!! |
Reviewed By: Cool On: April 27, 2003 06:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
What you think if you could write about Boss & Sparkle love & erotic story? It would be nice. |
Reviewed By: HamFan On: April 25, 2003 08:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Now this time is Boss & Sparkle turn in love & erotic story, this going to be nice |
Reviewed By: xan nova On: April 23, 2003 15:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehe I loved this!!!!! |
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