| "Hamtaro: Little Hamsters, Erotic Adventures" Reviews/Comments [ 143 ] |
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Title: Hmm...
Reviewed By: Jonathan The Ham-Ham [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 18:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice, over all. But WHAT THE HECK did Chapter 13 have to do with the rest of the story, because I was wondering about that. It seemed kinda outta place. Just wondering! Bye! Signed, Jonathan The Ham-Ham
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Reviewed By: Kodiax On: September 12, 2005 15:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice like your other Hamtaro fiction. Iwant to read more soon. I like your stile of writing.
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Reviewed By: Jukilicous On: July 08, 2005 15:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
=3
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Reviewed By: kattx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 03:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ah, that was funny, I'll have to read more of this one I see...
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Title: long time ago
Reviewed By: Profesor Rod [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 22:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So many time has passed and it feels like other series. Lazuli has been appearing many more tough on fics, so it's a good character to retake. And the style you describe Spat's toughs it's wierd but fine (and fun). GO ON
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Title: **is speechless**
Reviewed By: Xan (not signed in)) On: December 02, 2004 17:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I reread 13 and now read 14... I realize now what happened.... god..... this is great..... I can not truely express in words how I love this story. It was well worth the wait.
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Reviewed By: Peril879 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 12:00 CST
Comment/Review:
As much as I detest a brother and sister together this was GREAT story. Wow... a Hamtaro hentai.o.oI wish there was more...
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Reviewed By: The Chaos On: October 01, 2004 11:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I lurved the last chapter. Actually, all of it was really good. Keep up the awesome-ness. ~Rika-chan
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Title: Hi
Reviewed By: Siggl On: July 27, 2004 01:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Good story! nice writing, please update soon, write more with sandy and stan favorite chapter: the pleasures of reading and temptations
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Reviewed By: ziff On: July 25, 2004 17:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was kinda sick... (favorite chapter: temptations)
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Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 19:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very, very intersting. what more can I say. ham-hams that have sex??? hmmm.I don't know what to think but what ever. It was not as bad as I thought it would be. ?_?
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Title: Hamtaro?
Reviewed By: PVX On: March 25, 2004 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hamtaro? Lemon. A normal person would have thrown up to hear about this. Jeezus Crist, that scared me. Why don't you make a lemon out of something other than small mammals? *throws up* You have guts.
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Reviewed By: Profesor Rod [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 02:23 CST
Comment/Review:
That last capter was amasing, words flowed nice... Also, I forgot to mention that my favorite chapter was Sandy-Maxwell, but also penelope-cappy. Anyway, you know well the psychology of the characters, no matter what. Keep it up.
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Title: the BEST!
Reviewed By: Xan vega On: March 12, 2004 02:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOu never cease to amaze me. I only have one question... what is that thing on chapter 13? It was so powerful and intense.
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Reviewed By: Netaro On: February 24, 2004 09:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THE BEST!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kattx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 20:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, this is flawless. It makes you feel for Harmony though, a whole lot. Okay Harmony, no more going through the motions, it's time for some payback!
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Reviewed By: Professor Rod [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 21:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, this thing is good, I like your stile. Will you do more works?
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Title: kattx
Reviewed By: kattx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2004 21:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
boy this was precious. some of it was funny as hell, but the rest was precious. anyway, as far as the ep with Maxwell and Sandy, that was aired once in japan (and my friend showed me the actual tape, she's so nice) and you're not the only one that wishes to find it. As for you wanting to use Jam and Roll, no prob, but read my other ham tale to find out their descriptions. This weirded me out at first, but I get it now. well that's about it. and it you want, send a request on a stew.
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Reviewed By: Hamtarolover96 On: November 12, 2003 19:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story! It's just that I'm more of a H+B person and other couples bore me. Anyways is I liked all couples it would be a ten story.
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Title: Yay!!
Reviewed By: Tora-Hamu-Chan-Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 14:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
I figured out my password! please!! get the next chapter out!!!! I'm hanging on a thread here!
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Title: ?
Reviewed By: Torahamu-chan fan On: October 18, 2003 14:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
aww, you bum! a teaser?
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Reviewed By: StoryReader On: September 04, 2003 06:24 CDT
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What's The Finale In The Ficiton? |
Reviewed By: An Idiot named Joe On: August 19, 2003 16:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahahahahaha! Nice, I would've never had the guts for a Hamtaro Lemon, so many think it's all about cuteness, but I guess there are more people who like moew adult themes with them than I thought. ^____________^ |
Reviewed By: LS On: August 19, 2003 08:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Not bad, never thought of this couple. I guess it's nice to do new things... One question, why doesn't chapter 12 fully load? You might want to look into it. Anyho, nice writing as always. (This is one of the few romance/eritoc stoires I read with deadacation. Anyho, I'm now inspired to write my own fanfaction, as always happens when I read something good.
Note: I read some of your reviews... and I say to the flamers, I know it's a children's show, but everyone here is in character and the materal is handled with respect... That's what NC-17 means, this story is for adults. So flamers, shoo! |
Reviewed By: Xan vega ((too lazy to sign in)) On: August 19, 2003 04:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well... as a one shot it could have been enjoyable if Sparkle wasn't the world's biggest bitch**must remember to have Sparkle killed in my rp later**. HE was just trying to express his adoration and she blew him totally off. Please get back to the story and send the AU/oneshots to a diff story. I was hope you were going to be serious about writing a series unlike my other favourites that butcher their stories once I get into it.
Sorry... Lackasleepitis is making me a bitch. |
Reviewed By: Cool On: August 10, 2003 02:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
I hope that you will write the next chapter includes Human Threesome story. |
Reviewed By: Shiny Zapdos On: August 09, 2003 07:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its Hamtaro And Bijou All The Way! |
Reviewed By: SuperWarrior On: August 01, 2003 06:42 CDT
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I would like you to write about human threesome & what's next as well as Howdy & Hannah ficiton. |
Reviewed By: SuperWarrior On: August 01, 2003 06:12 CDT
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I would request for you to write human threesome & what happened next in the story next & what about Howdy & Hannah next? |
Reviewed By: super_skippy On: August 01, 2003 01:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I have to say is.. why little inoccent hamsters? |
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