| "Hamtaro: Little Hamsters, Erotic Adventures" Reviews/Comments [ 143 ] |
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Reviewed By: LS On: March 30, 2003 10:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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One small point, didn't Laura go to Travis's house to celebrate his birthday? Anyway, a very sweet part... tres romantic and I like Snoozer's speech about finding someone. I guess there is someone for eveyone.
Still, I'm so annoyed that I haven't seen eps. 52 cause they keep reruning the show in my area!
anyway I still want to see what happens next... |
Reviewed By: Billy On: March 28, 2003 16:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You gotta write some more !!! Please update soon !!! |
Reviewed By: xan_nova [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2003 18:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I keep getting notifications that you updated but it seems you haven't. I love this story, please keep working on it.
Well okay, now to review each and every chapter.
Chapter 1: Very nice introduction into the world of Hamtaro. I loved how he was shy to admit his love for Bijou.
Chapter 2: I loved seeing Oxynard getting all nervous with Pepper and coming on her before he mated with her.
Chapter 3: Competition makes for wild love and in a threesome it makes for a hot time. I loved the shared Shmubby-Wubby.
Chapter 4: Confusion about love and comic trouble... the story of my life. I feel bad for the stripper ham... how about Snoozer get with her.
Chapter 5: It was sweet with Penelope's insecurities about how she looked and how Cappy was gentle with her.
Chapter 6: Hama Sutra... perfect really. I read the Karma Sutra a little. I could see those two really doing the Black Bee.
Chapter 7: Where did Boss meet Cindy? Oh well... no problem. Anyways... I love sex in the rain, the rain sets a perfect mood for slow loving mating.
Please keep writing and let me read this stuff. I am a loyal fan. |
Reviewed By: HamusAran On: March 25, 2003 13:10 CST
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Just read the last chapter, some ace writing I must say! keep writing more, its a really good fic. |
Reviewed By: Hulex [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2003 21:30 CST
Comment/Review:
Just for this particular chapter, I think it would be stronger if you leave out Hamtaro thinking, "But I do love her." Obviously he does, and I know this is an internet fan fiction, but being a fellow writer, I thought I'd help out.
Everything else, though, is really good. But that's just what I'd do...
Hulex |
Reviewed By: Pashmina-Chan On: March 24, 2003 09:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You gotta write more!!!!! |
Reviewed By: the old, wise, and wrinkly hamster On: March 22, 2003 18:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i also forgot to mention i really enjoyed that cappy and penelope chapter. keep it up! |
Reviewed By: the old, wise, and wrinkly hamster On: March 22, 2003 18:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the greatist, original work i have ever read dude! keep it up i cant wait for whats next! |
Reviewed By: WOW On: March 22, 2003 14:55 CST
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WOWWIE!DO MORE! |
Reviewed By: EWE On: March 22, 2003 14:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Do MOre |
Reviewed By: HappyD00D On: March 21, 2003 17:56 CST
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KEWL! Hamtaro and Bijou got it on Lol! Keep goin dude ;p |
Reviewed By: Xan_nova On: March 21, 2003 11:20 CST
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Why is there a chapter hidden? I wanna read it. |
Reviewed By: EEEEEEEEE On: March 21, 2003 09:56 CST
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NExt make Jingle seduse Pashmina |
Reviewed By: Mitsukai William [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 06:28 CST
Comment/Review:
This is a very good chapter! |
Reviewed By: TheMan On: March 20, 2003 12:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great work! Luv it ^_^ |
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