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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: spica(not logged on) On: April 03, 2004 11:21 PST
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You finished, you finally finished. For a squel, i was thinking that Inuyasha should be paired up. It's like this, Kagome was attacked by a demon while walking alone, she runs into a phoniex youkai-angel named Shou and her friend a mouse-youkai-angle Mouse. Shou saves Kagome by turning her into a phoniex demon. Sesshoumaru was grateful so he lets them stay at his castle. Inuyasha falls in love with Shou as Shippou(He's older) falls in love with Mouse. But Shou and Mouse have a secret. They are the phoniex warrior of light, dark and crystal while mouse was the warrior of love and friendship. Shou's brother, who is the villian, is trying to steal her power and, you think of the rest. This was my idea for a squel but if you don't want to use it, please tell me 'cause I may write it as a story anyways but with different pairing. Good luck!
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Reviewed By: powerpuffbarbie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 18:47 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO! You can't end the story yet! This is what i read on the weekends. Now what am I supposed to read? Well if you have to end the story I demand that you either write a sequal or more stories. Please.
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Reviewed By: Nialo On: April 01, 2004 20:11 PST
Comment/Review:
Nialo: A masterpiece! I love it! *Crys* I can't believe it's finished though. Tamashii: *Sniff* Yes I agree with her. Nialo: This story will definately remain book-marked to read many times over.
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Title: I LUV THIS FIC!!
Reviewed By: Hoshi Megami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 16:03 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I abso-posi-lutely love this fanfic!! It is by far my favorite fic ever!!! You just have to do a sequel! And I think that it should be about Sesshomaru, but there's a new villain who's threatening his family or something like that. Well, actually, I don't care what sort of sequel you do as long as you do it!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kikyou2004 On: March 30, 2004 17:23 PST
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*sniff* that was beautiful! That had to be one of the best sess/kags i've ever read. You are such and excellent writer.PLEASE write more sess/kags or anything else your brillant mind can come up with. Thank you so much for not repeating the "Inu hurt kagome so she ran into sesshy's arms and they lived happily ever after" routine. i love how you prolonged it and perfectly described sesshy's complex persona. You are a great writer!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Teesa On: March 30, 2004 15:14 PST
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*cries, and passes CF a box of tissues* It's over! It was so good... Hooray for Inu Yasha! *hugs all around* You are writing more stories right? Right? I hope so. And maybe you could write a short sequel to this story. About what I don't know, but I'm sure that you could think of something. Keep up the good work! Ja Ne! ^_^
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Reviewed By: White Angel Chi {not logged in} On: March 30, 2004 13:58 PST
Comment/Review:
SECUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (i spelled that wrong...diddn i?)
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Title: Yay
Reviewed By: EvilPixie On: March 30, 2004 12:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. Its rare to get plot but I loved it. I love Sesho and Kagome together but like plot so I am left crying usually but this was amazingly well written. Congrats to author on not going to hiatus of death like everyone else thank you bye. ;)
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Reviewed By: S1Cherry ^-^ On: March 29, 2004 17:55 PST
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*sniff* its over? *sniff..sniff* wahhhhh!!! starts wailing* I love this fic! why? why does it have to be over?!? I nearly started bawling when I read parts of this chapter. I hope you do an epiloge or something. here's my idea, do one where it's a few years later, Fluffy and Kagome have a few more kids, Miroku and Sango have a kid or two, and Inu's...just around. maybe have Inu take Fluffy and Kagome's oldest kid on a 'trip' or something... later ^-^
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Reviewed By: kid sesshomaru On: March 29, 2004 17:33 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude that was one kick ass story.
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Reviewed By: bootsnspurs On: March 29, 2004 16:17 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That has got to be the best story I've ever read. Incredible. bootsnspurs
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Reviewed By: Maliksgirl1125 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 14:40 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAAAAAAAAAAAA! I DON"T WANT IT TO END!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Zikkiri On: March 29, 2004 14:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED This fic! Probably the longest one I've read, and it only added to how much I loved it because you made Sesshomaru develope personally so well!
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Title: THE END *cries*
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru Luv You [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 10:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*cries* oh, that was beautiful! I'm inspired to draw! Oh, you asked for an idea for a sequal? how about the next kid (a she) to Sess and Kag goes out on an adventure to destroy a new evil (Kagura's kid that turns evil) Along the the way she finds a guy and falls in love with him, little does she know, he is the evil guy she is bent to kill! How's that? (people look at her like she is crazy) Well, she DID ask! Youkai, great job on everything! I love the story, and I hope you do a sequal. *cries again* Have fun and keep on writing! P.S. Sorry, I'm to lazy to sign in *sigh*
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Title: Kudos!
Reviewed By: InuSan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 10:06 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have give yourself tons of credit to pull off this whole story with such a content ending as welll!!!! Kudos to you dear friend!
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