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Reviewed By: Sessoluv On: February 16, 2006 08:51 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not sure if u r still interested in reviews since your done wit the story, but i LOVE this story! In case you dont know yet, in some of the newer inuyasha eps. Naraku goes through this transformation thingie and is now able to kill Kikyo, AND HE DOES!! I was cheering so loudly even my cat looked at me like i was crazy!! i hate Kikyo too, if you didnt notice. Ja ne!!
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Title: ForgetMe Not
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2006 13:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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Reviewed By: Dawnray On: January 22, 2006 08:28 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well done with this ficcy! I very much enjoyed it! *wink* Though I don't find good romances between those types of characters very much these days, this one was an exception! As for the idea of a sequel, i thought maybe you could try for a little fun story about what happened to them over the next few centuries, and into the the days when Kagome can go and see her family again. I think alot of people would enjoy it! Anywho, wonderful job on the fic, and I can't wait to se what you come up with next! Ja Ne!
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Reviewed By: BeAuTyNDesire094 On: December 22, 2005 21:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I just wanted to say that that fanfic was really really really good. I'm not very fond of Kag/Sesshomaru stories, but that one was really good. I would read it over and over agin if I had the time. It was sad how it ended with Inuyasha being hurt by Kagome not choosing him, but he deserved it by deceiving her and choosing to save Kikyou. Keep up the good work!!!!!
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Title: Just a thought
Reviewed By: #1Kagomefanatic On: December 22, 2005 21:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was the best fanfic I ever read!!! I have an idea for the sequel if you haven written it yet!!! After the baby is born Kagome should be kidnapped by a member of a rival tribe! And of cource Inu need to get a hookup of cource and It would be perfect if it was Kagura! The reason bieing that she always seemed to look at Inu strangly in the episodes! Just a thought! P.S No, I am no a letch like that Damn monk1 the name is because Kagome is my favorite cherecter! sorry about my crappy spellling!
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Reviewed By: SexyV On: December 05, 2005 16:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love your story. If there is a sequal you should make it about there children. Everyone would be split up by then.You should make Sango and Miroku be in there middle twenties with their children too. And Inuyasha finally finds someone. And all of there children have a new foe. And they and their childrean would have to come together. And it would be a lot of problems but still good. But wonderful story anyways. It took me a couple of hours to read it but i read non-stop anyways.Bye.
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Title: Very Well done!
Reviewed By: kagome_higurashi_jewel_detector90 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 09:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent job! I loved it. Keep up the good work. And if there's another story I'll be sure to read it. -Kagome Higurashi
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Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2005 13:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I'm so glad someone on kagsess yahoogroup was asking for help finding this story! I truly enjoyed reading each and every chapter and hated to see it come to an end, but the ending was the BEST! Excellent work! Bravo!!!
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Reviewed By: chibirin8 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 03:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the story I thought the ending was so cute and Im so glad kikyo die with so much pain I hate her so much another thing I really like was not something that was in the story but the disclaimers I thought they were so funny. and I also think a sequel would be cool but I dont know what you could put in it maybe some that goes on about how everyone likes are and if inuyasha finds anyone. IDK well anyways I hope to read more of your work.
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Title: Kuroi_Kumori
Reviewed By: Menna Saleh On: November 13, 2005 16:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this Fic! You really r creative! Oh, don't worry, ur lemon was fine. *wink* between all the first time lemons I've read, beleive me, urs is fine. Keep on writing! Uv got talent!
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Title: Forget Me Not
Reviewed By: Fourth_Child_Of_Destiny [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 21:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let me start by congratulating you on 34 beautiful chapters!I loved this story from beginning to end.I'm very suprised at your creativity and originality.I've never seen quite a Sesshoumaru/Kagome plot like this one before. I know this story has been completed for over a year;I just stumbled upon this gem less than three days ago.I could not stop reading this! Every chapter was so elaboratly written.You wrote each part so well! Sesshoumaru was indeed the best characterization,mainly because he's so difficult to figure out!I think you did this part wonderfully;I can do nothing more than admire you and hope to learn,so that my story can be half as good as yours! Kagome could not have been done better,either. You showed her noble heart,pure feelings,and intentions for everyone.The Naraku scene touched me so,and when Kikyo took Kagome's soul back with the help of the Shikon No Tama,I felt distress.You really know how to wrap a reader in this story! Koga,Kagura,Kikyo,Naraku...they were all so greatly written!In fact,this seemed to be written as if it was part of the Inuyasha series!I have not hesitated into suggesting this story to every Sesshoumaru/Kagome lover I know! My respect for your work and you,as the author, cannot be expressed by simple means like these. I can only hope I shall one day be as great as you.My last words before this space is over: Know that this was a beautiful piece. You should truly be proud! Sincerly, Fourth Child of Destiny
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Title: Yume's Most Awesome First Fic!!! ^-^
Reviewed By: angelicflare [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 10:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic was the most awesome fic i ever read!!!! I loved every thing about it even the its and a's & the's. I just loved it it was so good that if u woulnt have said so i would have believed that u wrote many other fics before this one! Forget Me Not is now my most favorite fan fiction! Keep up the good work! ^-^
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Title: A Interesting Fan Fic.
Reviewed By: Rachel Zuniga On: August 21, 2005 22:24 PDT
Comment/Review:
Well the story had a good combination of action and romance and a bashful ending that can make anybody blush.
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Reviewed By: AZN GrrrL On: July 24, 2005 10:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it!!!!!!! I might have said this to someone before but, they didn't continue THEIR fanfic so I take it back and now here it is to you:YOU NEED TO GET THIS PUBLISHED!!!!!!! YOU"D MAKE MILLIONS!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh and for the sequel i have an idea! I don't know if the sequel was already made or not but, if it wasn't then take this as a sugestion! o.k. I thought the first few chapies should be a humoungous flashback being discussed by non other than the famous couple! It should state their anticipation for their first child and Inu should get a new love! And kagome should've sealed a powerful demon, only to be awaked by another demon they later work together to try and kill the prince of the westernlands because of his feared demon and miko blood(of course the whole awakening part should be after the flashback). And right in the middle of the finle battle there new baby should be born with powers far more than any evil and its pure!!! of course having her parents and sibling being killed won't do for this one!!!! and ends up saving everyone! even if you don't use this i just wanted to get these ideas out now if only your story was the actual show's plot!!!!!!!!!
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Title: =)a kawaii lemon...
Reviewed By: DarkAngelTwilight*DAT* On: July 21, 2005 17:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of the best done sesshy fanfics i have ever read(not to mention the longest) i had no problem with the lemon, it was excelent. i was brought to tears by a couple of parts. and histerical laughter in others. overall, it was most enjoyable. especially the ending...kawaii!!!!also please email me at lovechihaya@excite.com id really like to exchange ideas with you. i am currently writing a fanfic as well....based on sesshy.
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