| "Do You Dream of Me?" Reviews/Comments [ 76 ] |
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Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: October 26, 2004 21:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, good to know. Forgive me for doubting, I should have guessed by the title (but apparently I was out of it that day.) Mmm, the time flow and dream sensitivity, I'm almost afraid to see what you do with that. And Seth is coming in down the line? Nice. I'm taking a stab at this, but Yami's going to use the puzzle's energies to manifest his body and talk to Yugi until he has enough of his own. Wait, Yami's going to have what issues? Is it going to deal with the whole "Yugi is my master but he wants me to be his equel" thing, or the up and coming "I'm in love with him" issue? I had sort of noticed that the kitty-cat thing didn't only happen when he was asleep, but i wasn't sure. Mmm, it's almost frightening to think how they will react to each other fully awake when they are both used to dealing with semi-dazed emotion-talk. Last but not least, you get an optional huggle for updating, along with these matching Yami&Yugi Neko plushies. Until next chapter!
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Title: ::dances::
Reviewed By: The Panasonic Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 13:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::is in love with this story:: Did I review this on ff.net? I've got the worse memory in the world. ^.^ Anyway, I loooooove this story! I've got all of it saved on my computer, and I'm waiting for the rest! Long Live Puzzleshipping! ::cheers:: ~Pana
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Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: October 25, 2004 00:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I'm now convinced that everyone of my top favorite writers is on the same wavelength as me, and yes, you too are on my favorites/alert thingy. I love how this is a "What if they knew about each other from day one AU. I also like your interpretation of the characters, uber kawaii Yugi&Yami, Kenshin Yami, Anzu the way Anzu is really meant to be, and the true more open-minded Seto. Let's also not forget the whole "Jou isn't as dumb as a post, he and Honda are just the only ones with street smarts" thing. I like how very natural this all is, and how original it is, especially with the way they are learning from each other, the cuddly Yami, the talking via emotions, the whole "Yugi acts as a drug for Yami." Also, never be sad that you have to put in filler, sometimes it opens up opportunities for you. Now you said that Yami either can't tell or has difficulty telling the difference between reality and dreams, you also threw in that Yugi and Yami can see each other's dreams, along with the fact that time seems to past at a different rate in the soulroom [unless it was just that Yami wouldn't stop snuggling Yugi]. You most undoubtedly have everything all nice and planed out, but have you thought about playing around with those 3 points anymore? Just a question, and I look forward to reading future updates.
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Reviewed By: crysatl-eyes200 On: October 19, 2004 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the story i cnt wait till yami ad yugi is strong enough to talk to to each other!! Yami and Yugi are soooooo ment for each other!!! they arelike the perfect couple!
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 20:53 CDT
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Wow, what a story! It seems as though you have altered reality a bit... you are simply taking the anime and molding it to your liking, right? You changed the name of the game, but it still has the same cards and all... Please update soon, I love the fluff! Kawaii! I just want to get into that soul room and chibi hug them both!
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Reviewed By: michew [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 14:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!! this is still AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!! plz, could u update sooner tho????? n put in a bit more yami and yugi fluff????? thx!!!!! anyway, update soon!!!!!!!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Motje (not logged in) On: October 16, 2004 07:04 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
We could never be mad at you for not updating. This is a story worth waiting for and I like how it slowly unwraps.
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Reviewed By: dmyamiyugi (not loged in at the moment ^^) On: October 16, 2004 06:44 CDT
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yay, you updated! Nice chappie, please update the next chappies soooooooooon! ja ne for now! ^^
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Title: so cute
Reviewed By: wood On: September 03, 2004 10:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, i luv this story! ^_^ I'm one of those people that thinks Yami is adorable too! I hope to see more! This is a VERY nice plot, I haven't read anything like this before.....hmm, wonder why? Anyhoo,, i enjoyed reading this very much and I hope to see more soon. TTFN!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 00:15 CDT
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Kaiba...laughing? Not a good sign... Please update soon, I want to figure out what happens in Kaiba and Yami's duel!
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Title: latest chappie
Reviewed By: Motje [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 17:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the way you follow the original plot here and there. Haven't seen many do that in the outstanding way you did so. I hope you'll continue writing soon.
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Title: Please continue this
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 03:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please continue this Yami is so Kawaii. Just wants to hold Yami ** Hugs Yami tightly**
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Title: I like
Reviewed By: narutofan11 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 04:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story and look forward to reading more.I also like the fact that you have a new chapters out so offten that I don't have time to forget the plot. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: Origamigryphon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 17:12 CDT
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I absolutely love this fanfic. I was actually browsing through for some Joey/Yugi, but I found this and was hooked. It is such a unique perspective between Yami an Yugi's relationship, based on events that actually happenended in the manga/show! I canot wait to read more. I also thought you might want to know, I was riding to work today and I heard a song on the radio; Kiss from a Rose, by Seal. I never paid much attention to this song, but I heard the lyrics, and it struck me. It sounds just like Yami and Yugi's relationship! An example: There is so much a man can tell you, So much he can say. You remain My power, my pleasure, my pain! Just thought you'd like to know. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: DMYamiyugi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 17:37 CDT
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Please oh PLEASE update SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!! Gods, this is an A-W-S-O-M-E story!! ^____^ i love it! Can't wait for next chapie ^_^ Ja neeeee!!!
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