| "Do You Dream of Me?" Reviews/Comments [ 76 ] |
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Reviewed By: day dreamer On: August 13, 2004 16:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniff* its over? thats to bad i love your story! is it based on the manga? because the part with anzu working at the burger world i distntly remember reading, and ive never watched the tv show so i cant tell! Yami is very flat and static, but hey its a fun story
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Title: All the Chapters
Reviewed By: Aria Lerendeair [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 22:39 CDT
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They are so cute together!!!!! I feel bad that Yami and Yugi are upset! It makes me want to give the both of them this huge hug, but I suppose that isn't my job. *pout* I do like the way you are writing the story and yours has been put on my favorite's list. It was the moment I read the first chapter, I've never seen a story with this kind of spin on it before, it is new and exiting and I can't wait until you have more. It is definately something I will look forward to. Please do write again soon, or I will have to console myself with reading the other chapters several times while I wait. (I've already done this if you haven't guessed.) *smile* A truly enjoyable story, please don't give up on it like I've seen other writers do, that just makes me so mad!!!!!! Okay done ranting now. Entire point of this can be summed up by one sentence: Kick ass story, write more soon!
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Title: Authoress Seeking Enlightenment
Reviewed By: Flamekaat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 02:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am very impressed with this story of yours. I like the way you portray the growing link between Yami and Yugi. It's cool. Keep up the great work Flamekaat
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Reviewed By: michew [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! i luv this!!! its sooooooo cool and kawaii!!! awwww, i luv yami!!! in this fic hes so simple yet so complicated!!! anyway, update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Koishii No Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 16:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww!!! So cyute! But Yami... Why art thou so sad? Yuugi, make Yami happy like he was before! Please? Oh, this was a great chapter, btw! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 11:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
No problem, it was my pleasure. Poor Yugi, he only wants Yami to be his friend. That's a nice gift though. V. good chapter. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Koishii No Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 02:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I lovie this so far! Yami ish so cyute when he acts all cyute and cuddly with Yuugi ^________^. Please update soon! I also added this to my favs list ^___^.
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Title: Chapter Eight
Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 20:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
I say skip several of the shadow games. I like the Death-T stuff. I read part of the ribbon stuff...I thought the teacher was Ribbon! probably should have read the whole thing, huh? Mwahahahaha, evil teacher that wears too much makeup! Hehehe...ok, I love this! And I can finally describe Yami as kawaii. ^^ They both are so cute together! Please update soon! ^-^
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Title: Chapter Seven
Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 20:05 CDT
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So Yugi finally knows what happened...and he's beginning to realize his feelings toward Yami! Yay! *laughs* Yami, a minor? A few months old? Ok Yugi...
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 20:00 CDT
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Yami=kawaii. i dunno, I'm not seeing it...though Yugi is very cuddly. Aww... Yami still insist on calling him master? Hmm...
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Title: Fifth Chapter
Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 19:54 CDT
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yay, longer chapter! Yugi, perfect? Yami has some strange ideas... but Yugi is his light after all. Anzu still doesn't believe him? Well, guess I can't blame her... Hehe, Yugi's too cute! "Oh good, Anzu! You're fine! Do you still want to go shopping?" Sweet li'l Yugi...
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Title: Fourth chapter
Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 19:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Short and sweet. meep! Yami/Yugi hug! Yugi's so cute...
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Title: Third chapter
Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 19:45 CDT
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Mwahahahaha, exactly what he deserved. Ok, so now Honda knows. Cool, Yugi's starting to stand up for himself!
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Title: Second chapter
Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 19:43 CDT
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So now Jou knows? Hmm...what was the director doing? I only know a little bit about the manga. I know he was torturing them... anyway, another good chapter.
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Title: First chapter
Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 19:32 CDT
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Ok, I'm going to review every chapter. ^-^ Ooh, cool. No wonder it's so popular on ff.net! Sounds good.Money, money, all mine!!! hehehe...ok, good first chapter.
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