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Reviewed By: BlizzardAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2009 20:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I absolutely love your story! It is written so well and took me on a awesome ride. I see you haven't updated in a long time so I do hope that maybe you'll come back to it but the way you ended it was pretty good but you said tbc...! lol anyway, i spent my whole day off reading it so please if you have anything down on the next chapter, please put it up...just finish it because its one of the best that I have read and the story unlike any other. Great job so continue!
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Reviewed By: shinkamigrl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 05:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was really good! You absolutely have to continue! Please?
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Reviewed By: AmeMaru [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 03:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, I don't see the review that I left last time, so here it goes again. It's been well over a year and I'm keeping hope alive for a update to this story. I absolutely love it. Great storyline, writing style, and ideas all mixed in together. I just love it. Please update.
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Reviewed By: SMO [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 02:01 CDT
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Yay, you updated! Another great chapter. I'm so glad Heero is alright. I dont wanna see Duo become a lab rat, and none of the others ether. If Duo goes back to Earth what will happen to Bethor? Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 11:18 CDT
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*huggles ceedee* so oo glad you updated!! I'm so glad that Heero made it. And I loved how you worked in that scene from when Duo rescued him in the series. At first I felt a little confused reading it, there was no transition or hinting that Duo would repeat the words he's said back then. maybe making so that he walks in remembering this and then have him repeat a part of it. hmm... what a promise Duo has made. I really don't want to see this fic end, but i would love to read more of your works so keep writing *smiles*
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Reviewed By: SA198 On: August 01, 2005 00:01 CDT
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Pretty neat storyline. Characters are so cool. I love this story!!! You've got to update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2005 22:52 CDT
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YAY!! Another chap, you don't know how long i've been waiting for you to update! I really like this alot and i'm sorta sad that something could tear Duo and Heero apart. I don't want him to become a lab rat but i don't want him to leave Hee-chan either....UPDATE!!
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2005 12:57 CDT
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oh my god you have to continue... I really want to know what happens.... I wish I could write lke this...please keep going
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Reviewed By: priscel *whines* On: July 08, 2005 17:19 CDT
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*whines some more* update soon!! miss this fic!
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Title: HOW DARE YOU!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 18:19 CDT
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Oh my god! You just left Heero alone without any help at all? That's low... bad... and I love it... keep typing please, I want to see this to the end.
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Reviewed By: Dream Keeper On: May 12, 2005 03:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH. MY. GOD...You so can not leave it there!!! Please update? As in soon? I love this fic sooooo much. I haven't read a fic this good in a while. Please update soon?
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Reviewed By: Snuggle Ninja On: April 25, 2005 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the fic so far, keep up the good work. I gotta ask though, where did you get the information on the angels' names?
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Reviewed By: Alexandra242 On: April 25, 2005 07:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was rea;;y good i lloved the part where duo had just woken up from being in an a coma and went to his quarters and heero was there and things progressed and i hope you continue please its really good and i especially like how they are inhanced thats really cool
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Title: 14
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 06:36 CDT
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whew! I thought we were at the end of things the way they were talking. Oh man Heero! And why did Wuffers have to go on add that 'if' in it, *growls* Duo is worried, if is not something you wanna hear when you're worried about someone making it. Oh I'm suprised that no one laughed when Wufei said something about him flying. The way he said it, it seemed that they weere meant to laugh. Maybe if he said something like breath fire *snickers* And HEY when Did Heero get off ship and what was he doing out there with all those peopoles!? They were talking about what to do with the Karem *is that right* so i don't quite get why he was out there. Hey are they going to check out that galaxy to see if there's any thing left of the Karem's home world? More please!!
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Reviewed By: Allial On: April 22, 2005 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In a word- marvelous! It is an exceptional build into the plot, and is an incredible read!
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Title: Future of the Past
Reviewed By: Ita-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 23:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such great style of writing you have Charlize-sama,..i'm totaly in love with this awsome 1x2 fic f yours,..*ssighhh*... Wish i could write as good as you though,..*pout*..well all in all, a very kick ass storyline and a fantastic writing style. keep-up the good work and please continue soon!! \/^__~\/ P/S:poor Duo, i hope Heero is gona be ok.!!T___T!!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 14:15 CDT
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Did I ever tell you how much I love this story? You have such a wonderful writing style. But why the cliffies?! You're killing me here! Still love it though. Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: silver ferret [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2005 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best story I've come across in a long time. Found it a few days ago and couldn't stop reading. It's sparked several conversations with my friends over space and time travel (total nerds i know). Just want to say again...AWESOME STORY! oh, and that cliff hanger...pure evil (brilliant)
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ah! How could you just leave it like that? Horrible...not the fic, of course. What's horrible is the fact that it was a cliffie. I love the fic, though, so please update soon!
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Reviewed By: yukina189 On: April 09, 2005 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh man this is defidently one of the best Gundom Wing fics I have ever read,hope you can update soon.
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Title: Gotta love it
Reviewed By: Asaka_Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 10:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent! This is a very original plot, and I love the fact that you kept the characters personality the way it should be. Duo isn't a homocidal psycho, Heero doesn't moon over Duo like a teenaged girl, Wufei is brisk without being an asshole, and Quatre dosen't act like a 4 year old. Love it!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama (nsi) On: March 29, 2005 19:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn good fic! God I have to say this is the best fic I have ever read!! Keep up the good work and Update soon. You're killing me with suspense!
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Reviewed By: Shini On: March 27, 2005 01:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is a great fic! It's relaly original and it's interesting to read! You're good with the cliff hangers too. Keep going with the updates and such and keep writing, you're really good!
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Reviewed By: priscel--- On: March 26, 2005 18:44 CST
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I'm speechless. Update gotta see how they fair now that Duo's out!!!! Pleazzzzzzzzzzeeeeee!!
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Title: Iophiel
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 22:42 CST
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Glad to see an update kiddo! Jeez, this was one intense chapter. What with all those Xetoins Duo had to fight and then the conversations he had with the others over the com. It must have been pure torture to go on after Heero said that. It was one of those good/bad things as he learned how to control his "gift". When he came up against the queen, I just love how you showed her attempts to manipulate Duo's mind. Too freaky! How exciting that the others may have some latent... talents. Love your beta's comment! Ewww.
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Reviewed By: Jukebox [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 15:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a fantastic story - very well written & quite enjoyable. Looking forward to the next update.
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Reviewed By: priscel--- On: January 29, 2005 00:03 CST
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ch.11... i just knew there had to be something errie about those food stores...
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Reviewed By: Shaeric Draconis [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2005 15:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent. I can't say much because words fail me and the action was perfect. A story that can keep me riveted to it and to hell with every thing else has got to be excellent. I was on the edge of my seat wondering what the hell was going to happen next and I had to stop myself forcefully to just rush to the end of the chapter to see what happens. Love this story and your writing talent is great. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: dk_joy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2005 09:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! Keep writing, please! Duo being from the future and the communication chips are so cool!
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Title: Dam what a good story
Reviewed By: Patty 40 On: January 22, 2005 23:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Have you ever read a story you wish would never end..I just have and it is this one.I am really enjoying this story and want you to update now!!!I found this story yesterday and started reading it at 6pm and kept reading to 3am and started again to at 6 pm and just now finished the last chapter at 11pm and god I just want more a lot more ..I just can't wait till your next update.I hope there isn't a long wait between chapters.. So I guess that's all I have to say except please update ..^_~
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