| "The Seduction of Urameshi Yusuke" Reviews/Comments [ 163 ] |
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Reviewed By: anita003 On: April 18, 2005 22:26 CDT
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Mm, my god! That was HOT! I really, really like how you build up the sex scenes with all kinds of foreplay; it makes it soooo much better! Really, I bow down to your lemony prowess! Ah, and it's even Yusuke/Kurama, one of my favorite pairings! I, too, have always seen Yusuke as seme, although I think that your story plays it all out wonderfully in that at first he is submissive because he is unsure. And now Hiei joins the mix, hmm? Can't wait to find ouy what you're going to do with him, although I do hope that Kurama will wake up in time to be included! I've always thought that there was too mcuh competition between Hiei and Yusuke for a relationship, kinda like putting two alpha males together ::smile:: But, I think that adding Kurama sorta balances out the tension, like he's the piece that makes the whole dynamic workable. Ahh, this review is getting way too long! The short of it is, adore the fic, adore the sex, please post more soon and I can't wait! Lovely job so far!
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 16:19 CDT
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This is the first K/Y ha, ky...anyway fic that i have every read, and i have loved it so far!!! Please throw Hiei, I love him too!
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Title: Utterly Amazing
Reviewed By: Kurai eclipse of evanescense [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 18:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU MUST....I REPEAT....YOU MUST!!!...and Hiei into the picture....OMG would this make this story even more wonderful than it is....[if that is even possible]...what an absolutely FANTASTIC CHAPTER!!!...major props to your daughter for that well-written fight scene.....and continue on!!!...and don't forget to add Hiei into this sexy mix!!! ^O^!!
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Reviewed By: jo On: April 09, 2005 01:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please bring hiei into it!!! PLEASE!!!! PUH-LEEEAAASSSEEEEE!!!!! and i think that hiei should be on the very bottom... sigh, i just love it when the tough ones get taken. *fans self* i absolutely loved it!! omg! it was so hot! so fucking HOT!! and hiei and his sexy, tight, little ass is going to make it even hotter! update soon and i will love you forever and ever and ever!!
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Title: Awesome!!
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 21:23 CDT
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This story is no less that awesome i absolutely love it in every way. Its kinda like one big lemon and me being the hentai that i am deep down i loved it and I loved the way you handled the relationship between yus and kei usually it ends up with them fighting but yours was nice. Okay that was a little unexexpected there at the end but it was great all the same so if you wanna add hiei in there I say go for it. Why not add one more hot and sexy guy? lol Anyways keep up the the great job and tell your daughter that the fight scene was good too and Ill be sure to check out her stories and your other story. Okay please please update soon cause I gotta know what happens next. Buh-Bye ^__^ ^__^
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Title: Recent Yaoi Convert
Reviewed By: Kitsune_Rose On: April 06, 2005 18:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Wow. Wow. I am literally speechless. I'm not much of a Yusuke/Kurama person, but your lemons kick ass. And now that Hiei is here... I'm scared to think what will happen next. VERY scared. But fear is a good thing sometimes. In all my scant nine months of reading yaoi, this was probably the most well written I have seen. I hate to be retorical, but... WOW.
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Reviewed By: anaheinthal On: April 05, 2005 18:43 CDT
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THAT WAS PERFECT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You added Hiei into the mix, like you mentioned, which is even better!!! Is Hiei going to become a 'lover' as well?
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Title: Finnally A Fic with Great Grammer
Reviewed By: MirrorSoul [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 14:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The first thingg I noticed was the great grammer. I could not find anything on my first read, and I do not uspect to find any on future reads. Great Job with the Spelling and Grammer. I also liked how you went into detail with descripitions. It lets me know exsactly where the scene is, and what is there. Yet it leaves some minor thoughts to allow the reader to have personalization of the story. Also you did not rush and took your time, and at the same time you were not slow; making the reader wait for the story to progress. This is not easy to do, and you did wonderfully. In YOAI there is only so much that can be original so that is why I gave you a nine in that sector. But still quite original. The sex scenes very passionate yet not rushing. Very Good. Overall I love this tory. P.S. I would like Hiei to join the mix as a second uke.
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Reviewed By: Miko Yasha On: April 03, 2005 13:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW.......That's really good! ^_^ If even you don't add Hiei (hoping you do), it's still really-REALLY-REALLY hot.
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Reviewed By: Despisethefools On: April 03, 2005 08:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoy reading this fanfic, please keep going!
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Title: YUM
Reviewed By: Silver Reon (banned) On: April 02, 2005 19:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very,very,very nummy yes nummy. I am so entralled. I got better at writing and I'm so impressed. hehe. I can't not wait for another hentei goodness chapter! ROCK ON!
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Reviewed By: hColleen (I should be asleep, so I'm not logging in) On: April 02, 2005 01:06 CST
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Ye, gods...that was....wow....I'm gonna need a couple of showers for that one...oh, hell! T'any rate...y'know how I feel about Hiei in the mix...you were wonderful enough to review a little story I wrote over at AFF (totally made my week, by the way :D ) [to jog your memory, it was a little three way with Kurama Yusuke and Hiei...totally plotless...same pen name as here] Anyways...wow...now to have happy dreams...
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Title: oh wow
Reviewed By: Shadow Jaganshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 23:21 CST
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Hi! This is my first time reviewing this story... or anything on mediaminer... Just wanted to tell you that I love this story and I like how you write... I'm high on lemon... This story seems to do that to me... I go around giggling for a while and end up having random flashbacks to the story in the middle of class a week after reading it... Or a month... Anyways, if you can put Hiei in it, I say, by all means, do it! Hiei rocks! *snicker* Poor Yusuke. Screwed Kurama into total oblivion... Well, again, I love this story and look forward to your update! ~Shadow, the unstable pervert
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Reviewed By: RebelByNature -tolazy to sign in- On: April 01, 2005 18:54 CST
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Yeah let's get Hiei into the mix! This is a great story and i love your lemons. I can't believe i didn't find this story sooner. Great job!
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Title: injustice!!!!!!
Reviewed By: sessys grl On: February 08, 2005 21:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how could you have just stopped there????? it would of been funnyer if Hiei had been the one to interuped them. i can just see him with a look of compleate shock on his face right before he falls of Kuramas bedroom window sill. bwa ha ha ha ha !!!!!
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