| "The Seduction of Urameshi Yusuke" Reviews/Comments [ 163 ] |
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Title: Izzokay
Reviewed By: Shiela On: December 03, 2006 10:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. This story is the BEST YusKur fic I have ever read. It's okay if you kinda went AWOL. Believe me, my readers on FF.net are about to lynch me and then burn me alive using tiny matches. But I hope you get everything out soon, we're all awaiting all three announcements with baited breath. Good luck and I share your pain! Sun-people unite!
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Title: Chapter Nine
Reviewed By: Kin-chan Pandun [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 05:49 CST
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Fantastic chapter, as always. And so HOT, too. I really enjoyed it. Also, I'm feelin' some sympathy for Jo, do you think that you could incorporate him into a smut scene like the "snapshot" before you end the story? I mean, the parts from Jo's POV would be arousing as hell because he is SUCH the bottom, and he'd be there in the room with Kurama being all gorgeous and slave-like (but only to Yusuke) and Yusuke being, well... Yusuke. All Dominant and forceful and shit. It'd be all Jo's wet dreams come to at once. That's my argument, anyway. >>>>> The threesome scene was delicious. I love the bits from Hiei's POV, and I love that Hiei was so fulfilled emotionally and physically from their activities. Will Hiei be back for more sporadically? You made it sound like he found bottoming so arousing that he would definitely want more of it (which he would only feel comfortable with Yusuke and Kurama for). >>>>> Thanks for writing, Kin.
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Title: heyy
Reviewed By: Sprinda [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 19:21 CST
Comment/Review:
hey I have been waiting please write more please?
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: Sprinda [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 18:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it and when are you gunna up date? Please I want to know the secnod half of Kurama's punishment. Please
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Reviewed By: marie antoinette On: October 15, 2006 00:02 CDT
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Never had the guts to write a lemon...I think you have enough for both of us. This is an awesome story. Its wonderfully written and I always have a hard time finding stories to read that are so...professional but fun at the same time. Your one o those few authors that make me smile when you have an update......... Where's my smile??????
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Reviewed By: Mary Kroll On: September 13, 2006 10:17 CDT
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There's only one problem with this - it renews my drooling eagerness to read new chapters in this series.
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Title: Hi!
Reviewed By: OrlandosLover09 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 18:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love your story its absolutely delicious! I was wondering if there were going to be anymore KuramxYuskuexHiei
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Reviewed By: k-girl17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2006 09:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was great and i hate hiei uke storys i can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Homage to wonderfulness
Reviewed By: carlie On: August 15, 2006 11:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay i've never done this before so i hope that ten means good. i've read adult and publised (sp?) authors before and your sex scenes kick all of their asses. please write more more for i'm a huge fan of yusuke/kurama. so thank you for all of your incredible writing abilities. please update, carlie PS- you are a wonderful writer, but so you so pairing for other anime shows/manga? if so, what are they?
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Title: O_O
Reviewed By: mysticneko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2006 01:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa.. I had a huge puddle of drool when I read this. I read it when the email notification first came out but didn't have time to review. I felt You deserved a review from me though. =D It was soo hot. I think you've outdone yourself Koga. I think you should be nice to Jo and let him have a little fun with Kurama and/or Yuusuke. That would be cool. Oh yeah, and for your comment in the end. Unfortunetly, I haven't had the time to find any YxK on here, besides yours. T-T It's so sad. I wish there was a character search engine like ff.net had. That was so handy. Have you been able to update on aff.net yet? I don't know if they're up and running yet. I'm going through withdrawls. >_
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Reviewed By: inuzumarose On: August 03, 2006 09:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have REALLY enjoyed this fanfic. You are an extreemly talented writer, and there are a few things you could use if you ever think of continuing it in depth: When is Shiori-san getting home? she could catch them in some sort of comprimizing position which would be very amusing for quite a lot of people. Maybe not totally full out, but you know, doing something mildly emberassing for Kurama's mother to see. I would also like to see Yusuke and Kurama go on a date. They could go to a rave or something and Kurama could get into some kind of trouble. Your choice of course. This story is great, but could benefit a lot from utilizing other things then mind blowing sex. (not that i have anything against mind blowing sex.)
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Reviewed By: Lareina On: July 30, 2006 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... That was amazing. Your amazing talent never ceases to awe me. What I found really enjoyable about this chapter was the beginning. You really seemed to capture the tension and nervous atmosphere of the situation. Great job. Another thing that this chapter has going for it is that you have a little relief from the sexual nature of it. Kurama mentioning something as mundane as changing the sheets, or him and Hiei getting slapped for arguing; It gives the reader a break before delving into the next nosebleed initiating scene. I can't speak for others, but I know that without those little things then this chapter would have been a bit overwhelming for me. Overall, great job. I eagerly await the next instalment. And I mean EAGERLY.
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Title: 9
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 11:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG...that was INTENSE...I LOVED it, and the ending was just WOAH!!! Oh man, I LOVED IT!!! I just loved all of it, I was wondering how you were going to give attention to 2 uke's w/only one seme, now I Know!!! LOL THANKS:D Oh Oh I can't wait to see what Yusuke has planned for some of those toys he bought, and if Hiei is going to be a regular part of their play!
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Title: "Crawl to daddy, my little firefly" ( Chapter 9 )
Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 15:12 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor Jo, I'd be praying to God if I was you too. Hiei I like your nickname it fits, Firefly. Cute. Go Yuusuke! That was a good detraction. I bet that if Hiei finds another to be fucked by, this is going to be his refence and its going to be really hard for anyone to measure up. If Jo gets to have a threesome with them he never will find anyone that will best. Oh I wonder what all the stuff Yuusuke got is? Whoa they so needed that slap. Well Hiei is a 'Fire' Demon. Of course he's going to be hotter. and well about being tighter well it is a first time uke. Hey when is the black chapter coming up or Makai? reactions when he dies and comes back again a demon. What the sex is going to be like with Kurama scared of Yuusuke dieing. The impact it had on Kurama, showed in the love-making. Hell maybe even the impact it had on Hiei.
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Title: I Love this fic
Reviewed By: LadyShadowDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 11:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you finally updated. I have throughly enjoyed your story many times and can only hope that you continue it. I think that you are very talented and envy your creatvity. Will Hiei join again, will Youko make another appearance, and what about Kurama's "punishment"?
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