| "The Seduction of Urameshi Yusuke" Reviews/Comments [ 163 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ladyfox20 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 14:28 CDT
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Why won't you write the next chapter!!!!!!! I love this story and yet you don't up date. Please update soon!
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Title: Hiei?
Reviewed By: assgoblin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2005 15:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you planning on letting Hiei in on the action, then making him slowly fall in love? Or are you just going to make it a one time thing? PLEASE let Hiei in on their relationship! Think of how lonly he is. There isnt even anyone to pair him up with in the story so far. And please dont just stick him with Boton because I just can't see that pair working out. Keiko is too bossy, and Yukina is his sister! I'm not even going to mention Kuwabarra! Whatever you do, do it quickly please because this story is the best I have ever read!
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Reviewed By: Mysade On: July 17, 2005 20:49 CDT
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You know, I think I would like to see Kurama, Mr. I'm-always-in-control-of-myself, tossed over Yusuke's knee. However, let me congratulate you: out of all the lemon fics I've read, (that's a lot! lol)Yours is definately the best, without a doubt. God, I don't even LIKE Yusuke that much, and the way you described him coming into the shower scene had me drooling! It's hott, it's fun, and just the right amount of tenderness mixed in. You could grow up and write those kinky sex novels! So my point is this: YOU ROCK!!!
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Reviewed By: Shinohoshi On: July 17, 2005 06:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love your story!!!! I want you to continue this story and update as soon as you can! I love it, I love it, I love it!!!! I love the sex scenes and I want Hiei in on this as well. He deserves to be uke to Yusuke's seme. An you may as well add Kurama into the equation. And don't forget Youko. He's gotta make an appearance, too. Please update this whenever you have the chance. I can't wait to read more!!! Ja ne!!!!
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Reviewed By: oOAlexOo On: July 05, 2005 03:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy crap! Good sex scenes as usual! Who knew the gorgeous youko kurama would become uke?! And who better than Yuusuke to be seme? I must admit, your story made me love yus/kur pairings! Hiei/kur is getting old don't you think? I also have a little personal question about sex. Seeing as guys have to use lube when getting banged in the ass, do woman (when getting it in the back) have to use it too? Hope you update soon and i can't wait for that hiei/kur/yus scene!
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Reviewed By: Lareina On: July 04, 2005 19:04 CDT
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I think I like this jealous side of Kurama... Though I do think it's a bit out of character (I vote that he would be more protective, not envious), it adds a very... amusing quality to the story. Just don't have Youko injure and/or maim Hiei, ok? That would make me sad. Either way, continue the good work!
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Reviewed By: hColleen (I do well to find the review button..you want me to log in?) On: July 02, 2005 06:33 CDT
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Holy hell, woman....and they call me the smut queen...If I am the queen, you are my Goddess! I was so bummed when I got this last night (the notice) because I just cannot read this when other people are up and my computer is now in the livingroom because there was no way to get a decent connection in my room :( I had to wait until I woke up (Thank all the gods I wake up before everyone else). Okay...need to breathe...shakey hands make it hard to type... You're welcome for the reccomendation. I reccomend you to everyone who asks me for them, and I'm flattered that you have a print out of TDoD...that was fun to write 'cause I not only got to play with three hot guys, but my reviewers as well....as you know ;) Anyways...I think I should go....do something (damn I miss my hand held shower head about now! Damn having to move and all, but things are better for me now....except the reading situation of this story) I look forward to you next chapter with great anticipation. I should quit babbling now, shouldn't I? If I said luv ya, would that be weird? ;D
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Reviewed By: Shadow Jaganshi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 23:00 CDT
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So hot... I very nearly screamed when I saw the chapter alert in my email inbox... But I figured that would draw a bit of unneeded attention... Y'know... Half the time when I read this story I'm not sure I'm breathing. I kinda get lost in the story, then come back to reality at totally random intervals and am holding my breath.... and it makes me wonder if I'd been doing that for the past ten minutes... I think I was holding my breath, because it's still not quite coming easily... That's okay. I'll live. Youko next chapter? *drool* I can't wait...
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Title: 6
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was just so BLOODY AWESOME...man Kurama is POSSESSIVE..>LOL...oh man can't wait to see his little chat w/Hiei:D...oh man I LOVE the scenes w/Kurama and Yusuke...MASSIVELY HOT:D THANKS:D
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Reviewed By: Apocalypse010 On: June 12, 2005 13:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best fanfics I have ever read. Please continue with it.
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Reviewed By: Kagome-chan736 On: June 05, 2005 01:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was outrageously enjoyable. It had my heart pounding at all the sex in it. Damn, you must have an extreamly dirty mind. I envy you. LOL!!!!!!!!! I hope you write more stories like this one.
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Title: interesting...
Reviewed By: colorless egyptian [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 17:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've already reviewed. It let me stay logged in. What the hell? Oh well. Anyway, as I said before, this story has it all. Did you post this on AdultFanFiction.Net? I think I read something like it on that site. I'm not sure. On another note, you top just about all the yaoi fics I've read. Which is just about every single story. *hehe* Yaoi's all I read. *smirks*
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Title: Damn!
Reviewed By: colorless egyptian (It won't let me stay logged-in) [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 17:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so friggin' hot! I absolutely adore it! Please hurry and update! This story is hot...no... HOTTER than hell! There is my incesent babbling. Here is the actual review... Hot. Cool. Sexy. *recites* Mirror, mirror on the wall...DAMN, THIS STORY'S GOT IT ALL!!!!
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Reviewed By: lonely_within On: May 28, 2005 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg!!! that was the best hentai fic i've ever read. you've created a wonderful piece. =) continue with the good work, i'll looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: LestatsDarkAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 12:59 CDT
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ok this is the best yaoi kuram/yuske fic i've read. i love how you pulled and pushed at this lol and yuske fucking kurama unconcious was the greatest thing!!! lol god that was yummy well post more chaps and keep the goodness comming and i can't wait to see how kurama acts to what yuske said abouyt hiei. hehe this is gonna be good :)
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