| "Never A Bride" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: sarah-slutz@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: Sarah Slutz On: December 12, 2007 10:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it! Romantic but true to the characers. I loved the interaction between the family members. Great story!!!
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Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 18:16 CDT
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I can't believe I hadn't read such a wonderful story!! Everything about it was just perfect! ^_^
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 17:11 CDT
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OMG - this fic is filled with pricelessness! Trunks is the perfect - annoying - big brother. He just couldn't wait to burst Bra's bubble. Bra's reply to Vegeta, "Just because you stomp around and say something loud doesn't mean it's true, Daddy," is perfect. It describes him to a T. Wasn't it cute how the two kids jumped on the opportunity to use a "bad" word - over and over? Leave it to Vegeta to come up with the most direct solution. So what if it was the most unattractive as well... I can see Bulma giving all that up for him. Who wouldn't? ;) And darn you for making me get all teary-eyed when Vegeta opened that door! I thought he might have something up his sleeve, but it still took my breath away. What a beautiful fic. Congratulations!
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Reviewed By: SaiyanBeauty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 17:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WONDERFUL! I give it a 20 out of 10. Hehe! It made me laugh and even tear up! Vegeta was so sweet and I loved it. The ending was classic... What can I say?! I'm gushing over here. Its a very good story and I loved it!
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Reviewed By: mmmanga On: January 29, 2005 19:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! You made it sweet but still in character! That's tough to do with these guys. Great job!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 09:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good story from a great developing author. It's easy to see why this fic took first place. You have a fresh, not so jaded view of our favorite couple and that shimes through in your writing. Great job, Lisa. You should be proud.
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Reviewed By: silver unicorn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2004 22:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so sweet!!! this was a great story of bulma and vegeta!! great JOB!!!!
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Reviewed By: Darke Angelus [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 08:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really great read- I can see why you won the competition! Congratulations!!!!
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Reviewed By: Blue Siren (Too lazy to log in) [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 14:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought I left a comment this morning^^ Anyways, evellent fic! you really deserve your place.Is not always easy to keep the Ouji in character, I thought you did it beautifuly.
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 23:01 CST
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You posted it! I'm so glad mm.org's formatting is back on the game....oh yes, the *fic*. You know I find this an absolutely delightful story. You hit all the good notes--and I've got a soft spot for post Buu,for the character of Bra, for your snazzy dialogue--oh and yes, I got the Sinatra reference!!! My daddy plays him nonstop in the car and my kids love this song! A well-deserved win in the Salon B/V fic contest! Heh, and I'm still smiling over "Pan in a dress." :-) :-) :-)
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Reviewed By: roseofvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 12:54 CST
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I absolutely adored the fic. There were some classic moments in the fic....all of Vegetas actions were in character. And I felt Bulma's anger when Vegeta seemed ready to not go through with the civil wedding. Absolutely a marvelous fic.
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Reviewed By: Bulma16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 23:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, it was good! I want to say cute, but that's not the right word for this. At first, when they got to the courthouse and Vegeta said he couldn't do this, I was ready to be outraged, but thank goodness he was just messing with poor Bulma's mind instead, LOL. I really loved this fic Lisa! Great job! ~Claire
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