| "Weapon of Mass Destruction" Reviews/Comments [ 175 ] |
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Reviewed By: Psychlone(too lazy to log in) On: December 12, 2005 18:38 PST
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pure genious again, i love it, but to my dismay, you made naru the baf guy/girl in this chapter, was that intentional?
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Reviewed By: evilgenius On: December 11, 2005 02:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would enjoy this fic more had it actually been updated :( But it is otherwise solid!
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Reviewed By: EmperorJaden [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 13:56 PST
Comment/Review:
Well...I was hopeing it whould not come to this, but as you are taking quite some time to update, i guess it must *Releashes a speicial team of Predators, all trained in every Martial Art, and Sword Style, inculding that of the God's Cry School, and sets them fourth to The Love Hina Dimension* Update, and they'll instantly leave, and all damages repaired, don't, and horribe doom will be upon the Resisdents of the Hinata Inns.
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Reviewed By: creature formaly known as very sadman On: December 03, 2005 23:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice 2 see ur back sorry about badgering u man but u have a gift lokking forward 2 the next one from recently rehabilitated very sadman ps i read that coment reply 2 that guy where u tell not to end up like melol
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Reviewed By: Dakota On: November 14, 2005 16:39 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
really good fanfic im also a fan of motoko but i think su motoko and shinoboh should have a threesome
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Reviewed By: ADCurtindolph [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2005 20:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is, perhaps, the best Love Hina lemon I have ever read. And I have read many. Please continue this series. I can't wait for more Keitaro/Motoko action!
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Title: Groovy
Reviewed By: Lady Glass [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 21:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm totally in love with this and I can't wait to read more! I think I've added it to my faves but just in case I'll do it in a mo. Lovin the way you've set this up, it's hilarious but vair hot at the same time. Much love, Lady Glass
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Reviewed By: Samuel Kelly On: November 06, 2005 14:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, have someone do a hentai movie using this story!! I so love your work, keep more chapters 'cumming'! One more thing to mention, Su is very, VERY talented with her tongue.(As expertly demostrated in book #5 when she heard from Sarah that 'If you can tie a knot in a cherry stem with your tongue, then you're a great kisser.') A girl can really rock your world if she can turn two cherry stems into the shape of a small cactus with just her tongue!! ;-D
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Reviewed By: EmperorJaden [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2005 08:18 PDT
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Alright then, You have yet to Update, so you will now pay the Price of Wrath.....Hmm....Must think of something Motoko is scared of....Hmm....Can't think of anything, mabye Turtles...No, to overdone...I'll just use these *Raises his Army of Xenomorphs((Aliens for you out there that don't listen to well while watching the movie))* and as an added bonus..*Summons his Dragons((Both Western and Eastern type))* There, that should get you gear...by the way, Since this story is one of the best i have read, if you ever need any help with a Flamer, or idiot, or just feel like causing violence. give me a call.
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Reviewed By: JehutyKiks [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2005 07:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn your fics good. keep it up, lookin 4ward to ur future works...
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Reviewed By: KillerRabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 11:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dear god, you went far and away beyond to norm and and, im still in shock that was amazing, congratulations. i certainly like the way this story has been turning out so far, but i have to wonder, will Su and Shinobu eventually get to him? i Hope So.
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Reviewed By: Scyggy On: October 10, 2005 23:58 PDT
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Dude... all I can say is NICE! I've read many many many many(let's just say a lot of) lemons, and I've noticed that the words written hardly ever change, but somehow, someway, your writing style or SOMETHING makes this lemon(s) give off a sense of total hawtness above and beyond. Good work, dude, and keep it up. Just so ya know, Mutsumi is my personal favorite, and I patiently await her turn with much anticipation...
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Title: awsome
Reviewed By: Psychlone(Yoroy) On: October 04, 2005 12:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome, as usual, this is Yoroy, but i got bumbed off so yea, love the chapter as usual, and yes motoko did deserve that one chapter to herself, she is a goddess and she deserves her own chapter, also i am assuming, that one of these times its gonna involve all of the girls, just wonder...
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Reviewed By: EmperorJaden [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2005 12:08 PDT
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*Nods* sounds interesting that hentai game does...Wait! stop trying to distract me!....good update, and no, becasue you updated, the Predators will not attack....But update soon! or i'll come up wih newer ways of wrath!
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Title: ch.6
Reviewed By: Peacemaker [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2005 10:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good job on the Motoko chapter and I am very pleased with the final result. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out becuz I know that it will be good. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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