| "Weapon of Mass Destruction" Reviews/Comments [ 175 ] |
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Title: though you were dead
Reviewed By: shiki On: October 04, 2005 07:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool, i was looking everyday for your update, keep the good work
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Title: Chapter 06
Reviewed By: WarpWizard [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2005 04:12 PDT
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Good job, I got a very vivid and sexy image of Mokoto in my mind. Yes, she does have trillions of fans. I'm not particularly a fan of Naru, she's the standard boring anime violent girl, mostly. Good to hear that the lolilicious members of the cast are going to see some action. Keep it up, thanks for writing and I look forward to next time.
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Title: Keep it up!
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2005 21:38 PDT
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Excellant! Good to see you updated - it's even better to see that you have maintained that level of quality that attracted me to your fics in the first place. Excellant work with Motoko I must say. The title and chapter themselves fit together wonderfully, and I thought the chapter itself was appropriate for someone like Motoko. It's gonna be interesting to see how all these different relationships between Keitaro and the girls are gonna play out. Keep it up, you have been doing an excellant job so far. Can't wait until the next update. Peace! d('')b
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Reviewed By: Ryuro On: September 20, 2005 15:39 PDT
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Ummmmm... I think I speek for all of us when I say, whats the wait for? Its been just shy of 2 months since the last update and i want to know why there hasnt been one since?!?! Please update as soon as you possibly can.
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Reviewed By: Silverback [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2005 14:24 PDT
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Wow! Ok, this is the first Hentai fanfic I have ever read and it ROCKS! I love the way you portray the characters, so true to their personalities. Shinobu is my all-time fave anime girl, followed by Motoko, so I look forward to the next installment and hope Shinobu keeps the hope alive (she always did, didn't she?) I also loved they way Mitsune discovered and thrilled in that feeling of "ownership" she felt he now had over her. That was sexy as hell. Congrats and thanks from a n00b.
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Title: Good Story
Reviewed By: tomdj1701 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 12:04 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter. Please update this story as soon as you are willing and able.
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Reviewed By: Syn Alexander [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 12:10 PDT
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This is a nicely crafted fiction, and I anticipate your next update. Now if you'll excuse me...I need a cold shower because of this. Keep it up, Syn Alexander (Pun intended)
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Reviewed By: very sad man On: August 20, 2005 20:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep writing this is great lovin u is esay cause your beatyful sorry got my medicataion from Dr. jack danials(ha) to help me deal with my antisipation makes me type like a monkey your not the type to have tama butt in on Su and ketaro time together(this is a joke i think ) keep up the good work *jump out the window laughing*
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Title: LOVE Hina indeed...
Reviewed By: Tury the Master of Mediocrity On: August 18, 2005 00:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A charred and scorched figure rises slowly to it's feet. "All things worth having, are worth waiting for... most people just don't want to. lol! You continue to improve yourself every time. The only thing I love more than this fic, is the fact that it wasn't really MEANT to go anywhere. Motoko is definitely my favorite female anime creation of all time. And if you are writing about HER, I would wait a lifetime. Props on Shinobu, by the way. Most authors just have her give up to get her out of the way; and I know you would never hurt her. Its nice to know that Haruka won't be left out of the loop, and of course Mutsumi will get her own. After all the things she gives up she has pleanty comming to her. (Yes, it's a pun. Take it or leave it). It might be an interesting idea to have Su switch to her mature form when she has her turn. Let's see... Oh yes! Naru. Well, she's had pleanty of time. She should have taken her chances when she had them. My one regret is that the scoreing only goes up to 10. "Praise to thee!!!" the figure cries as a storm pounds overhead. Suddenly a wave surges up and pulls him off the rock and out to sea.
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Reviewed By: yenom [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 03:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah what a smooth read this fix is. none of it feels forced like some of the fics out there. This bad boy just draws you in and makes you want more. All the fun he get to have in this, I almost can't wait until he just excepts it and enjoys all the ladies. But the build up is so great that the waiting is well worth it. Hope you end it with him still satisfying all girls instead of just pick one. And if he can't have them all I hope you pick a group with Shinobu, Mitsune, Kanako, Motoko, and Haruka. (listed in order of perferance) Love the kinkyness of that group plus actual love with most of them. But it is your great story so do what you feel is right and keep up the wonderful work.
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Title: Damn, man
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 21:27 PDT
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Holy freakin' sonofabiscuit...damn dude, I have no *&^%ing idea how I missed this update. At least I caught it before you updated again. Anyways, another mind-blowing chapter. No joke, this is seriously one of the best Love Hina lemons I've read...scratch that, one of the best lemons I've read period. You actually care about how you present the lemon, instead of just random sexual encounters. Keep this up, can't wait to see how you portray Motoko (I loved the way you've done the others so far). Peace, man! d('')b BTW, I don't really use the rating system anymore, but if I did, you'd get 10's across the board. Hell yea.
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Reviewed By: sarusscarveteran On: August 08, 2005 15:43 PDT
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right more these are so good
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Title: excellent
Reviewed By: gamefreak_12345 On: August 06, 2005 10:15 PDT
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another great chapter to an already great story, this story has become almost like an addiction (O.o), one of the best fics i've read. keep up the excellent work and update as soon as possible =).
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Reviewed By: EmperorJaden [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 15:48 PDT
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*Claps hands* Another good Update! I see your working in Shinobu, slowly yet stedily...Also, i am not Zeus, That is Zeus *Points, Camera pans to Zeus, whom is playing Cards with Hercules and Hades, Camera Pans back* I am Jaden! Comander in Arms of the Infinite Army! Leader of the Dimensinal Gurdians! Second in Command to the Lawmaker himself! Update soon, or Face my favourite Squardrent of the Infinite army *Camara Pans to a Group of over 100000000000000 Predators*
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Title: Fuckin Excellent
Reviewed By: MudvayneMasochist On: August 03, 2005 10:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Frickin Excellent.ONe of the best damn stories I've ever read. Truly a grand design and idea
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