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| "The Phoenix Blade: Time Lapse" Reviews/Comments [ 452 ] | | Pages (31): [ « ‹ 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 › » ] | Reviewed By: Krami [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 15:29 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was sorry to hear you were sick. Very nice chapter, though. I was going to write a chapter for my story, then got involved in yours, now my mind is completely blank again! Shows you're a good writer, eh? Update soon!
| Reviewed By: QueenTatooine [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 14:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing story, I love the way you have kept true to the story while changing slight things, and some major. This is a wonderful story and I am looking forward to more. ~QueenTatooine
| Title: Congratulations!
Reviewed By: tootalltygerlily [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 23:51 PDT
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Congratulations, your story has been nominated for "Best Romance Fiction (Inuyasha/Kagome)" at the Feudal Association. Voting will be held through May 1st, 2006 and winners will be notified shortly thereafter. Feel free to join our group and/or help us spread the word about our group! The official website for the group - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ The yahoo group where nomination/voting takes place - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ If you have any questions, feel free to email Dark Avenger (the owner) at inuyashasbytch@gmail.com
| Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 00:53 PST
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All I read was the lemon, starting at "She exhaled a sigh, and the rest of the tension evaporated from her body." I really liked the fact that he transformed and didn't really notice it. Anyway, the reason why this lemon was being read, is because you have been nominated for Best Lemon Scene at the Feudal Association. http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ Congrats and good luck! ~Dark Avenger The owner of the Feudal Association
| Reviewed By: Crysalie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2006 21:54 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this is user Knock-on-Wood...well, sort of. I changed my name! This is my new account that I will be using becaue I wanted a new, more original username. :) Anyways, so awesome chapter! And wow...I feel so bad for Inuyasha, but its nice to see that he's determined to get things done. I have to admit, despite the whole sadness after the massacre of the bandits...I loved that river scene! :D Loved how you warped it! Anyways, awesome job! Can't wait for the next one, which I am pretty sure will be amazing since all of your chapters are! Take care til then! *bows to your greatness in appreciation*
| Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2006 17:39 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AH, most excellent chapter. Hell, I don't mind Demon InuYasha one bit. In fact, I love all three sides of him...Human, Demon and Hanyou. Though I think Hanyou InuYasha's my favorite. You did a wonder job with the battlefield scene. And the part where she realizes WHY the high collar she wears. Love your portrayal of Sesshomaru, as well. The one part that I loved the most was when InuYasha was speaking to Kagome afterward and asked her, "Bitch of my heart…what did I ever do to deserve you?" Call me sappy, call me mushy, call me whatever, I dunno, I just loved it. Ah damn, I need a booster now. Think I'll go back and re-read chapter forty-three while await your next update.
| Reviewed By: Krami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 23:45 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how you use the $20 words. I might not can understand them half the time, but I still like them lol..update soon!
| Reviewed By: Knock-on-Wood [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2006 16:33 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...excellent chapter! You are quickly rising up there to being one of my favorite authors! :D I just love how you manipulate everything into something different and yet still kind of in the same realm of the Inuyasha anime universe, too! Anyways, wow...I am so looking forward to seeing how Inuyasha reacts to turning full-demon and everything...and I have to admit, I really have been dying for Yashita and Kagome to meet face to face to see how they act toward each other. Although, I would find it a little odd if Kagome suddenly felt bad about kissing him since she got over that...but I guess that could be understandable because of everything that happened since then. :) Anyways, great job! Sorry for rambling here...I really didn't mean to. Take care! And please update again when you get the chance...I'm so looking forward to seeing what happens next! :D
| Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 21:39 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry, I forgot to put in my ratings. *insert cheezy grin here *
| Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 21:37 PST
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Test-driving the lemon? In a well? Interesting to say the least. Lmao! Can't actually say I've done that one, though wouldn't mind trying, lol. Hats off to Nokomarie the Snake for test-driving the lemon! LOL! The entire well scene was great. What can I say, I'm a hentai. Ah, excellent story. There are a few stories on here I wouldn't mind seeing put in anime form, this being one of them. This version would play out a whole lot different to say the least, ne? Update when you can.
| Reviewed By: Knock-on-Wood [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 15:52 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow..excellent chapter! :D I especially love that little end scene and its nice to see that Miroku and Sango are finally clean with their feelings! :D Great job! Can't wait to find out what happens next time...so until then, take care! :D
| Title: Roar! Or should that be purr?
Reviewed By: Licentia poetica [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2006 16:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I thought I'd just run through a couple of chapters early this morning, and ended up reading the whole thing. If I don't get my taxes done tonight, it will be all your fault. Fun story! I like how you've made Kagome strong; interesting that you've chosen to make her Inuyasha's equal or better in battle mode, whereas I chose to strenghen her through the spiritual time lord route. We both like her stronger! I like the interplay and tension that Kagome faces with modern/past Inuyasha, and you've developed her character's reactions to the manga canon story quite well: they're believable and understandable. Just curious, though, why you have chosen to largely keep to the manga time line and story line, replaying the scenes based on Phoenix Kagome. I think that your storytelling ability is strong enough to wander more from canon than you do. Let the inner beast free more! Just a thought... Thanks for entertaining me today, even though I'll regret it later...taxes, bleah.
| Title: Chapter 43
Reviewed By: GgBg [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2006 10:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Girl, you do not know, but I was Kinda upset with you due to the fact that Yashita was not getting any action in this fic. But then you gave him the chance to make out with Kagome and see his side of things and I was okay with you again. I mean, it is him in the past and the future and it is not right to ignore your man in one world and not the other. Face it, if our men looked like Inuyasha they would be naked with us all over them more than any one could count. Even though I had oral surgery on Monday of this week to cut out a decayed back molar with a root canal, I still would have been all over him like an Armani suit!!! Great chapter by the way, I so love it when Kikyo gets her just desserts for fucking with someone elses porperty!!! It should happen more ofter...maybe she could be scared spit less while running away from some trouble she has caused; and she could miss the tree that just happened to jump out in front of her and commit...clayicied??? Is that even a word? If not I just invented it! I love being evil!!!! Keep the entertainment coming, I just love it...oh also, there can never be too much sexual happenings between Inu and Gome just so you know, and I look forward to each and everyone that you incorporate into your writings. Thank you so much for all of the entertainment you provide to your loyal fans! GgBg
| Reviewed By: Silver Angeliss [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 20:25 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome as always! I love how Kagome attacked Kikyo and showed Inuyasha who was boss! She's a tough chick who knows what she wants and I definitely could take a page from her book. See ya next chapter!
| Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2006 10:41 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHH, not-so-delicious torture. It sounds like all hell is about to break loose. Poor Yashita and POOR Kagome! The decisions she has to make...talk about heartbreaking! I will writhe in agony until the next update...lol Can't wait!
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