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 Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 27, 2007 00:59 PST
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Inuyasha is such a baka. Dumb fuck...LOL...sorry, but he really pissed me off. Too bad that Kagome didn't singe him a few times. Sesshoumaru is being very understanding. I'm sure that he is thinking very much about the future and is behaving in everyone's best interest. It's sad that those men were killed by Mukotsu, the bastard. I'm not sure how much I have or haven't reviewed, but I'll try to do better. For some reason, the band of seven never did interest me very much. I'm really jittery about the fight with Naraku and what will happen. I hope you plan a happy ending. Oh, and I love Fenik. I've probably told you that before. Just as Kagome does, I wonder if she has been keeping up with her birth control measures. I suppose there is a lot that I'm not commenting on. However, I love the story and am looking forward to the next chapter. ^_^ Snow
 Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 21, 2007 00:55 PST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I bet that whatever your foreshadowing will be just as cruel as what I'm imagining...It was nice to see a little Inuyasha pataint jerkey-ness this last chapter.
 Title: Ch 77
Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 20, 2007 17:08 PST
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Most heart wrenching words..."I'd better get a move on to complete this fic before she finishes the series!" I know all great things must come to an end, but *wwwaaaaaaa* no wanna see this end!! Ok, pulling myself together. The physical brutalization of Kags by Mukotsu was bad enough, but InuYasha's crappy treatment due to his perceived failure to protect his mate was F'ed up! He certainly has a long way to go before he is Yashita. He did give a warning, but it did not lesson the sharp edge of unwarranted insult. Kamis, I just love your characterizations! I agree that public humiliation equals public apology. I can't even imagin how Sesshy would have reacted to Kags seeking to switch packs..don;t think it would have gone over too well with his Lordship. So the foreshadowing nightmare might not be what it appears to be. Hmmmm, will have to mull this over for awhile. Knowing Kags fears/believes the trapped-in-the-jewel scenario, well, I have no idea where that thought was going so I'll let it wander. I keep forgetting Sango & Miroku tied the knot until he grabs & she doesn't beat the ever-loving crap out of him! LOL! I've done a 2nd non-stop re-read looking for any clues I might have missed, or even exist, but I get so all wrapped up (in a good way) in the story, it just doesn't matter if there are any or not. Ok, time to stop the rambling and give thanks where thanks are due. Thanks Feni for another great chapter!! And many thanks for your bunny wranglers!!
 Reviewed By: monykkka [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 20, 2007 00:34 PST
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Love this new chapter, so filled with emotions, carefully detailed and thought over, the characters so much in-character so to speak :) The problem is, i've read the other reviews and i'm telling you, they stole my ideas! Yep they did :D:D:D I don't have much left to say but keep up the good work, merry Christmas and a happy new year in case you don't write another chapter till then, and ... um.. yah, splendid chapter :)
 Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 10, 2007 14:04 PST
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I forgot to give you your gold star for how brilliantly you wrote Miroku in this chapter. I think you're the only author who has actually made me enjoy reading him.
 Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 10, 2007 08:17 PST
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Omg... so close, but yet so far! I know as it gets down to the end, you want to over-think every chapter, so I won't push you to update faster. This chappie made me want to cry! Maybe that's just the hormones... oh well. Fabulousity! Can't wait for the next chapter!
 Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 10, 2007 07:02 PST
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You know what? I was wrong. We can't make this a movie. It needs to be a mini series! I can see it all now...USA and TNT will fight over it. SciFi will melt and Oxygen will demand a copy!! It really is too good for Cartoon Network but they were in on the ground floor so I suppose you can let them have the first (and only) viewing. Then they aren't allowed to use it for whatever amount of years you choose. Yup, it would be perfect. Seriously...you should consider it. Have no clue who should play them. I'll work on that. (Or maybe we should just stick with computer animation...might be easier to do the battle scenes.) But on to the real review. These two chapters must have been hard to write, more so the last one. They were both chalked full of emotions. I can honestly say I felt every one. I could see where both of them were coming from. Kagome was in the sticky situation of having to help Koga while both brothers want to kill him; I'm pretty sure everyone traveling with them has heard exactly why his death was imminent. So she kinda embarrassed Inuyasha by sticking up for Koga. And then Inuyasha made things worse by turning on her. (What was he thinking leaving his mate alone while she was banged up?) We all expected him to sulk about it (in his own way) but if he wanted to "fuss" they could have done so in private. (I mean he is already going to look bad when it turns out Ginkotsu isn't dead...But Sess' and Koga's are...) But Yash did say he was going to do more stupid things so to be fair she was warned, sort. Actually I'm surprised that Sesshomaru wasn't personally protecting her considering...but then again he has yet to fully embrace the fact that his power will be respected no matter his choices. By the way, wonderful job on the Seven. I think you did a good job with the "rape" scene. Not as dire as the manga but better than the anime. I remember when Sess asked for her clothes to put on "more modern buckles" were his words yes? I wondered about it for a minute but brushed it off as a way to help them fit with her armor better. (There was a lot happening in that chapter so my focus was else where but I applaud myself on thinking it was strange.) I was going to comment on Kikyo but I think I will hold judgment right now. I'll wait for the "death" scene first. *looks hopeful* Perhaps you'll make her really die? Because she's not going to go quietly. And no one is allowed to kill her. And why is Kagome keeping secrets again? She knows it turns out badly whenever she does. Their latest fight, the reason Koga can't die, secret. The last battle, her "death", secret. Her staying to protect Rin, secret! (Need I go on?) Anyone see a pattern here! A character flaw, that's what it is! I guess that she is thinking about her last trip through the well or about the upcoming battle? They basically fight inside the mountain but the demons can't go in. (Though you did kill most of them...another strike for Yash) I'm going to have to re-read the stuff about Yumiko. Feels like I'm missing something. And bad Kagome for even suggesting joining Sess. But she was right. She has to think about her rep too. A private apology would be fine if they had argued privately. (guess domestically speaking things were easier with just the 7..er..9 of them. Hmm I counted all the "animals" guess I should count Feink and Roku too. 11?) She will see most of these people again (they are demons) if she doesn't show her power they won't see her as an equal to the brothers. And after all she does girls still went after Yash when she was gone? Bold & stupid courtiers. I wanted to say something else (amazing I still can't shut up huh?) but after my last rant it got booted out of my head. I'm off to re-read the story for the beginning. Love reliving my fav parts! And it flows so lovely. Oh yeah, She should have called Feink out to protect her. I would have. Miroku and Sango would have had a kick out of it but Sess would have seen him. The worst is coming isn't i
 Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 10, 2007 05:23 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Another fantastic chapter! Inuyasha can be such a meany! Can't wait for the next one :)
 Reviewed By: AKA Pirate Queen [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 08, 2007 21:10 PST
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Oh, this was a really satisfying chapter. I love seeing the various packs interact. One question: this is the second time you've had Inuyasha "leave" Kagome when she was injured or otherwise needed him (I'm thinking of the time at Fluffy's house; maybe there were others as well). For some reason that bothers me a bit -- no matter how mad he got, would he leave her to the care of others and/or potentially in danger?
 Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 07, 2007 20:02 PST
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I really like how you're taking the Band of Seven storyline, and giving it some new twists. And I loved this: Public humiliation, but a private apology? I don't think so.
 Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 07, 2007 18:14 PST
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Yeah, you updated! OWCH! If I had balls, I'd say you thoroughly kicked them with that chapter. Yikes, for a minute there I was afraid that they would have a horrible parting. Well, I guess he's had a long time to beat himself up over that one. Glad he finally said the words, though. I think that's the first time, isn't it? Oh well, what's a relationship without your occasional knock-down, drag-out? Hmmm, Yashita's looking better and better all the time. Maybe he is haunted by his guilt for being such a F#!@nugget in his youth. Why do I get the feeling that Kagome is going to need some serious R&R, a long vacation on a tropical isle with nobody but an older, more mature and very sexy (do I need to add naked?) hanyou catering to her every whim, plus some heavy-duty pampering. Hey, I can dream....
 Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 07, 2007 16:49 PST
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Oh that aggrivating hanyou! Let's go pinch his head off. Ah well, I guess he'll be paying for that stubborness soon enough, and then no doubt, you'll make me want to cry for him. I really love his and K's relationship in this. Much more multi faceted than the usual tear laden osuwari fics that seem to be the norm. Can't wait for the next adventure!
 Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 07, 2007 15:41 PST
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Oh, got a 2-fer to read. ;) Now I haven't read the Manga for the Band arc, not all anyways, so I didn't know that's what really happened with Fugly. Yea, the anime really did cover it up, which blows. Now Inu being an ass bout it? Sheesh, males. Still love the characterizations goin on as well as our ever loving hanyou-ness, lol. Now what bout these dreams again. Till next install, update when ya can! ;)
 Title: Chapter 77
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 07, 2007 12:53 PST
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It's weird, I remember reading chapter 75, but not 76, so I had to go back and browse through it. Odd...anyway, good chapter, and to be fair, good foreshadowing is hard to do anyway without restoring to cliches. I'm glad you're moving through the Band of Seven fairly quickly, I never liked them, just a bunch of cannon-fodder villains with a lousy story...
 Title: Ch 76
Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 17, 2007 21:04 PST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Mukotsu is(was - yeah!) ultra frigging creepy! Glad that pervy little fish-face is just a pile of ash. And that Kumo was brought back! Sesshy to the rescue! Funniest line...jealous of the icicle? Coffee through the nose..almost! Very tense chapter so the humor was much appreciated. Still have 'big brother' & his evil halbard waiting in the wings to make their appearance. Two down, five to go. Thanks for the update!
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