| "The Phoenix Blade: Time Lapse" Reviews/Comments [ 452 ] |
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2008 05:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another fantastic chapter, fast paced and action packed i can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 22:46 PDT
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Eww... Jak is... well, he's Jak I guess. Haha... I picture Inu biting it off before he'd lick it! Now you're really getting down to the nitty gritty... I could hear the dramatic music in my head... just before it cuts to the credits. Just like the damn show. Can't wait to see if Fluffy saves Kohaku or not (I'm guessing he will cuz he's secretly a big softie). And will they be able to catch up to Naraku? Tune in next time, er, sorry... You just left it all dramatic and cliffy.
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Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 14:55 PDT
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Well shucks, I'm in mourning over two of my favorite characters now. I'm starting to think you enjoy torturing me. But a great author does know how to elicit/strangle strong reactions out of her/his readers. Uh... very, ummm, descriptive with the whole Jakotsu bit. Totally creeped me out there. The recurring snow imagery has me very nervous over how much time is left. I continue to be amazed. I shall sulk for weeks when this is over.
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Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 11:45 PDT
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Wow--talk about your escalating jeopardies! And poor Inuyasha, molested multiple times in this chapter! I think he's probably going to want to scrub every inch of his body raw when he gets out of this mess...I also really liked the scene between Kikyo and the monk's mummy. Very nicely done!
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Reviewed By: EnergizaJenny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 18:51 PDT
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Jakotsu is a very very bad boy. More chapters pleeease. I enjoy this fic very much.
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Reviewed By: AKA Pirate Queen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 14:43 PDT
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Jakotsu, you naughty boy! Whew--didn't see that, er, coming. Another satisfying chapter, keep it up! Um, well, you know what I mean....
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Title: Chapter 81
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 14:12 PDT
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Good chapter for the most part, but Jakotsu....EEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Niiicko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 12:35 PDT
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The suspense is killing meeeee~! XDDD lol, awesome chapter. and poor, poor Human Inu.. eck.. x_x He will have nightmares for centuries!
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Title: Ch 80
Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 20:31 PDT
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Oy vey! 4 down, 3 to go...the bad-boy, the fire-freak & the queen. And you're gonna set Ja-chan loose on Human IY...eewwww! *smacks forehead* your interpretation of Kikyo's motivations are on a level I had never thought of or heard anyone else put out there, and makes the most sense considering her profession. So, we've got 3 humans from the pack in the shield (sorry IY), a highly unamused Sesshy, stinky wolf-allies, some hot inu-youkai, a pissed off priestess (or 2), and hoards of the bad guys. Looks to me like you've got the ingredients for some nasty little recipe behind your back...I expect no less! Yet also fear it somewhat, but in a good way...if that's possible. Thanks for a great chappie!
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Reviewed By: monykkka [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 06:16 PDT
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well you certainly make them longer and longer every time hehe. It's getting so damn interesting and thrilling, thank you for the little bit of good time you give us with every nice update :) Ahh can't wait for the next installment, it was even more intense than this, and i just know you'll do it justice :) Love ya!
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Reviewed By: zenia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2008 13:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo. I finally read up to the most recent chapter. XD I started reading a week ago. I really like your story so far and I can hardly wait for the next chapter. I especially like how Kagome is a lot tougher.
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Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2008 21:14 PDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Your story has been nominated in the Best Drama category. Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open from March 20th 2008 through April 4th 2008 (at midnight). Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ InuGrrrl & Inufan625 Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 05:28 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another fantastic chapter! I can't wait for the next :)
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Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 09:43 PST
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Tensions getting thick now... we must be getting closer to the end... So it's not Kikyo who finds Hakushin and sets him free, huh? Can't wait to see where this goes!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2008 10:26 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The always stubborn Inuyasha at it again. I really liked your interpretation of the Mt Hakurei events so far, they are both close to canon and don't betray the characters as you have written them. The way you have skillfully intertwined the canon story with your characters make it hard to remember where the story departs from canon. I liked how Bankotsu expressed his trust and appreciation to Jakotsu, he knows what would please his brother best. Inuyasha's searching for his mate's scent and having difficulty finding it through the scent of the poison, Mukotsu and the wolves was great. I am surprised though that he didn't try to rub her in his scent some, at least rub her against himself so his was on top. I am very keenly awaiting the next update. I was spoiled before in that I found this story after you had already written over 70 chapters now I want more quicker than you can write them. I know it takes time to write and rewrite a quality chapter so I will wait for them to come.
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