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 Reviewed By: dbc13  On: February 12, 2006 20:25 EST
Comment/Review:
That was an unexpected twist! I liked it! Can't wait for the next chapter when we get Kankuro's POV, that's bound to be funny! Keep it up!
 Title: Day After
Reviewed By: RazZadig [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 12, 2006 04:46 EST
Comment/Review:
Liked this chapter even better than the awkward/realistic lemon chapter. The sibling reactions seem very in character and so does Lee's preoccupation the 'day after.' How will he ever focus on work again? I know I'd have trouble. Can't wait for the next section!
 Reviewed By: dbc13  On: February 06, 2006 19:54 EST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow. That last chapter was really good! You said the lemon would be awkward, but I didn't think so! All first times are slightly weird, and you did a great job of portraying this. I love how blunt Gaara is it makes me die of laughter! You are a really great writer! Keep it up and please update!
 Reviewed By: Knight_Of_The_Wolf  On: February 05, 2006 18:13 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You are an amazing writer! I've read a whole bunch of fanfictions before, searching through all of fanfiction.net and mediaminer, but i'd have to say that your story rates number one in my top ten list! The story is completely orginal, and i love how you took the time to make the story evolve, not to have Lee and Gaara jump each others bones after the second chapter. I love how there is an actual plot to the story, and not just one giant lemon. I love the character developement that you've created as well. The fact that you've taken Lee and Gaara straight out of the manga, and you didn't really change any of their characteristics, even though they are a few years older. Lee's need to work harder, to prove himself, and his loyalty, i think you've shown that very well in this story. And Gaara, though still as brooding and silent as ever, he's got a bit more depth to him now. He's learning, through Lee, that there can be more to his life, that he doesn't have to be in his boring, safe zone all the time. I love how he's become more curious and protective! Overall, you've done amazing work, and I can't wait to see the next chapter!
 Reviewed By: Meandering [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 05, 2006 06:28 EST
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Oh my God, I logged in... Bah, am slightly disappointed you aren't going to continue KakaIru. Ah well, you can find alot of the fluffy lemons around if you know where to look, and sometimes you just want plain old sex that is Perfect and has a little less of the mind searching. Your Hot moments, however Hot, are still intelligent and sometimes you just don't want to use your brain. This chapter was nice. I liked it, even though Lee was inside Gaara, you still get the feeling that Gaara is in control, and in character. You got the adolescent sex thing done pat - with all it's fumbling funnies. Lee's attitude to sex is very like my attitude to lemon in fics. 'But wait - it's not realistic - Aww come ON already!' Would like more Gaara/Leeness, as opposed to Lee/Garaaness, but having new chapters from you always makes my day.
 Title: SQUEAL!
Reviewed By: Silver Rain [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 05, 2006 03:29 EST
Comment/Review:
HO CRAP THAT WAS AMAZING! You are like...GOD! ::clings j00 intensly:: YOU ROCK!!
 Reviewed By: Meanderingwhoisnotloggedin  On: January 26, 2006 03:13 EST
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Er--- and I forgot. Any chance you could bloody well continue on your Iruka/Kakashi fics? Because Gai/Kakashi hurts my poor little mind
 Reviewed By: Meanderingwhoisnotloggedin  On: January 26, 2006 03:12 EST
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I've been reading all your chapters up till now, but I don't believe I've ever really commented, have I? Well, let's see, for starter's, I dare say you've glued me onto Naruto, but I doubt I'll ever be able to enjoy the anime - not without the Lee/Gaaraness. I don't think I could take the Sakura/Lee after this fic. Alright, let's see. You've already had enough 'OMG, this is soooo great!!' reviews, so I'll just... I'll just... what is there to say besides 'OMG this is great!!!'? I love the part with the dates - extremely funny, and very sweet. A few chapters before this, you had something to say about who would be on top - and I still think it should be Gaara, though you might wish to make it Lee. I know that in the other fics, Wufei etc (strong, able, very bossy men) were all the ukes, but I don't think Lee is very much like them. Probably for their first time, he'd insist on Gaara being on top. It's what'd he'd do, really. And no matter wonderful Gaara is becoming (hah), I can't see him being so sweet suddenly as to allow Lee to bugger him first. Gaara's wants may not be numero uno to him now, but there will still be shreds. You don't shake off a 'tude like that so easily. Gods, this was long. Anyway, update soon!
 Title: WHOOOT!
Reviewed By: Silver Rain [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 23, 2006 23:37 EST
Comment/Review:
PLEASE KEEP GOING! This is going so wonderfully, and I'm absolutely ADDICTED to it!! ::squeals::
 Reviewed By: Inarae  On: January 22, 2006 21:18 EST
Comment/Review:
Whoo-hoo! I wondered off into other fandoms for a while, but this was a great thing to come back too. A wonderful couple of chapters--I LOVED the last one from the point of view of Gaara's bodyguards. Thanks for writing and sharing!
 Title: ROFL
Reviewed By: Silver Rain [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 21, 2006 03:36 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
HOLY CRAP! This is like the BEST story I've read in a HELL of a long time! YOU MUST KEEP GOING! YOU MUST! I'LL GIVE YOU MONEY! ::wails:: PLEASE!!!! You've inspired meeee! ::runs off crying:: -- To visit Silver Rain's DA Gallery, Please go to: http://reigningfyre.deviantart.com/
 Title: yo
Reviewed By: Gloriastone  On: January 21, 2006 01:46 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hahaha this was great!! I'm so excited. when I had first read this story I thought that it was over. Then I happened to run across it again and I realized another chapter. HAPPY!! I especially love the latest chapter. I thought the whole bodyguard thing was hilarious. I've read quite a few Gaara X whoever stories out there both on FF.net and mediaminer. And personally I think you are by FAR the best at protraying Gaara's character. I love the way you make him 'better' but still rather messed up. You also do a great LEE. Well anyway great job. I love this story and hope for more soon.
 Reviewed By: Yui_alex  On: January 15, 2006 18:45 EST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
At fist I was a little disappointed that you did not wrire a new chapter, but as I kept on reading I became more and more intrested. Even if I really love your story I think it was a good idea to write something like that. In the beginning I was a little pissed because those people spyed on Gaara all the time, but now I find it a little calmig that there are someone watching over him, and that there are some body outside the family who care about Gaara, even if its their job. Hmm, I wonder what Gaara and Lei would had done if they knew they were spyed on, well Gaara probebly knows about them... cant wait till next week whan you are updating (^_^)V
 Reviewed By: yui_alex  On: January 11, 2006 15:40 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
"its getting hot in here, so take of all you clots", I really do hate this song, but I thought it would fit, not that I hate the story, far from it I LOVE IT, from the beginning I loved it, and I'm still loving it. So they finaly got to some of the sexuall parts, and I must say it was hot. Usually I like it more if they are more oral (speaking, nameyelling, oh god...ect) but you did not do this and for once I'm gratful for this, now it could be funny if Gaara had been a yeller in bed, but it would had seen a little out of character, so in ways I like it when you made him still be the Gaara we know and love. Beside the story became more real, becasue what you read in fiction is often way too ______ahhh can't find the word, anyway you story is more down to earth and in doing so I feel like I read a real story not a fiction... please do update soon, I'm soo looking forward to the rest. (^_^)V
 Reviewed By: Itaika  On: January 10, 2006 19:34 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Man I love you. -cuddles- This story got me into the GaaraLee pairing and now I just can't stop. -laughs- I can't wait for the next update!
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