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| "Diplomatic Relations" Reviews/Comments [ 157 ] | | Pages (11): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 › » ] | Reviewed By: Honey Sue [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2005 10:58 EDT
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Haha...its rare for a gaara/lee fic but i really love it!...update it asap!*thumbs up*
| Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2005 11:25 EDT
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Beautiful. This is the most precious chapter of them all.
| Reviewed By: inarae On: October 02, 2005 13:32 EDT
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I have mentioned how much I love this fic, right? I just can't seem to stay away. Your characterization of Lee is so wonderful. He's like the kind of brave, honest, optimistic person we all wish we could be, but still awkward and obnoxious enough to feel real. And Gaara...he's the same. So messed up but still fighting, like the best role model ever, the type of person you just can't help admiring even as you want to recoil in disgust or cuddle him to your chest in pity. I was even disapointed to see Lee back in Konoha because it meant less Lee and Gaara. Even though I love Naruto! Really great fic. Thanks for writing and sharing.
| Reviewed By: melaniesoong*again On: October 02, 2005 09:32 EDT
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I still love this fanfic, every time a new chapter is out it just makes my day! ^_^ Wow, there was lots of angst in the last chapter (#5), and although I simply love your comedy, I like the angst just as much. Aw heck, I love your action scenes, too. ^_~ I can't even give you constructive criticism because I can't think of a way this could be better. And the way you sloooowly build up tension, how Lee and Gaara's relationship evolves so very slowly and interstingly .... I love that, too.
| Reviewed By: pixiesmith On: October 01, 2005 18:30 EDT
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Another wonderful chapter. I like the way Lee's trying to learn about Gaara (and succeeding), and I like intelligent Naruto in this one. Look forward to more humour!
| Reviewed By: Tawni On: September 29, 2005 10:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Maldoror! We don't know eachother, but I've been following your "Freeport" and "Source of All Things" stories from the gwaddiction website for a long time. In fact, I suppose you could say I've been a huge fan of yours for a while through Gundam Wing fanfiction. So, imagine my surprise when I discovered my roommate reading a Naruto fanfic written by you! I've only just started reading Naruto fanfiction, and so far I'd been going through a small string of rather dry, dull stories. Reading this fanfic was like a breath of fresh air to me. Your grace with characterization is astounding. You have such a deep grasp on so many characters, and the way your develope their personalities is a talent I can only aspire to achieve. Finding you on this site was like recovering a dear friend, if you don't mind my saying, even though I don't claim to know you. So, in essence, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this fanfic and your other work as well. In my opinion,though your story lines are always fantastic, your character-devlopement is what sets your apart. I feel it to be the signature of your writing style. I can't wait to read more of your work in the future! Thank you so much!
| Reviewed By: LeviathanDrgn On: September 28, 2005 22:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for writing a Lee/Gaara fic, they're so rare! Why can't more people appreciate this pairing? To me, it seems more plausible than Gaara paired with anyone else. Anyway, your characterization of both Lee and Gaara are perfect; you seem to really have a feel for Lee's enthusiasm and Gaara's apparant indifference. The storyline is great, and I love how you're taking it slowly and easing them into friendship first, considering how hard it is for Gaara to forge relations with *anyone*. I'm looking forward to future chapters. I can't wait to see how their relationship progresses, so please keep writing!
| Reviewed By: inarae On: September 26, 2005 20:23 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Again, you rock! Loved the chapter. Don't know how you managed to get them so perfectly in character...wait, let me rephrase that. I don't know how you managed to give them so much character--I like them more than I did in the original!
| Reviewed By: pixiesmith On: September 24, 2005 17:02 EDT
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LOL. I'd like to see a cat tap-dancing. I adore the way the relationship is evolving. I'm voting for a lemon!
| Reviewed By: chibi_libra810 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2005 12:31 EDT
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...like the feeding of the birds, Lee being all shocked at Gaara missing the sparring, the fact that Gaara admitted he'd miss the sparring and the Kestral being petted. Wheeeeeeeee~! Yours Spazzily Shabz [libra_lemon@LJ] (I totally have to keep up at the kakairu comm man :/ *iz bad at being a multifandomh0r*)
| Reviewed By: chibi_libra810 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2005 12:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Okay so I've been totally lazy and not reviewed so far but dude your fics are amazing. I'm a total (even if I cringe at the term :P) fangirl of Freeport and when I got the email notification about this fic, I had to head straight over and read even if it was 2am or something at the time. I love the characterization, the way you're showing the interaction to explain their respective personalities and habits. There's no waste of space describing childhoods and such, you've played on the audience's familiarity with the canon and built an incredible intro for what looks to be an excellent story. Mad props, babe. I especially love that Lee isn't too over the top, I know we've been given such a loud version of him in the manga that people sometimes overdo him without properly looking into his motives and his principles. Sure he's a nice guy, but he's learnt a lot from Gai and applies that how he see's fit. I am woefully in love with your Gaara *shameful* He's so perfect. The glimpses into his mindset, the adorable way that he doesn't really fathom that people could like him for who he is. It makes me jig about in unholy glee. I do not like that I am running out of space to review now, better wrap it up. Um particular points that made me all jiggity were when Lee first spars with Gaara, lmao the whole situation was just ace. I think there were a bazillion little things in this chapter alone that made me happy -- carried on in a seperate comment omg *facepalm*
| Reviewed By: cloudnomi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 18:50 EDT
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Awesome story. I demand more, MORE! Okay, okay... I don't wanna be too pushy. But yes, anywho. Love the story, and I can't wait to read what happens next.
| Reviewed By: inarae On: September 19, 2005 23:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this! Great story. I hope it's still being written (I forgot to check the date) I love fics like this, and yours is excellently done. Thanks for writing and sharing!
| Reviewed By: melaniesoong [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 17:22 EDT
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Greetings from Germany! I'm still reading your Naruto fics, in case you remember me from my last review. ^_^ It's strange, I usually don't read anything in the Naruto fandom at all (although I liked the anime), your fics are the only exception. Well, I'm afraid to say I'd even read your fics if you decided to only write about the Care Bears from now on.... Anway, I like this fic a lot, (your) Lee really is very refreshing and cute as always.... and Gaara ... is still a mystery to me. ^_~ What rating do you think this will have at the end, R, NC-17? Heh, I'm just curious because you wrote the rating would go up. Well, I hope you'll write more and have fun doing it.
| Reviewed By: pixiesmith On: September 18, 2005 17:06 EDT
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Wah! Too good. I wanna read more! And yeah, I'd like an explanation for Temari's outfit against sand storms too ^_^
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