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| "Without a Lullaby" Reviews/Comments [ 78 ] | | Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] | Title: Without A Lullaby
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2006 22:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
| Reviewed By: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com On: March 15, 2006 15:55 EST
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well done. not many authors can keep me on a sess/kag fic for long, they almost always make sess ooc, or kags sees inu/kik together and runs off..i loved the ending too, so sweet and fluffy.
| Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: Trin71 (Not signed in) On: March 15, 2006 02:05 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story from the first time I began reading it. ^_^ I still think words alone can't describe how delighted I am with your creativity. You made the impoosible, possible. ~APPLAUDS~ Very tastely written. I encourage EVERYONE to read this story. One of the few truely UNIQUE written Sesshoumaru and Kagome fanfics! The wish, that was a nice touch! ^_^ ~GRINS~ So, does that mean you will write another story that begins with them meeting once again in another lifetime? ^_^ HEE HEE! Kidding! Congrats! You're an incredible writer! Keep going! I would love to read more of your work! Good luck and thank you for giving us such a wonderful story! ^_^
| Title: BLINK, BLINK
Reviewed By: Trin71 (Not signed in) On: March 12, 2006 21:46 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMG! NOOOOOOO! Not a CLIFF HANGER! LOL! This was pretty good. You have my attention. Continue... LOL! (BIG HUG FOR CONTINUING STORY) ^_^ I read last chapter, but I was in such a hurry that day that I didn't take time to give my thoughts on the chapter. ^_^ I was saddened by the fact that her friends had been...well...you know. (SNIFF, SNIFF) Of course, this chappy she wants...REVENGE! ^_^ ~GO KAGOME! O.o Just watch who your using your powers on...ok?~ LMAO! Anyhow, you still have me on the cliff looking over its edge. LOL! But, I'm waiting patiently for next chapter. ^_^
| Title: Without A Lullaby
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2006 15:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
| Reviewed By: YourSqueaker On: March 06, 2006 22:39 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You suck. That ending was so unexpected. It was wonderful. I must know when you write more. *drools* Must have more. It's really great, Luna. Really. But that turn of events.. You're going to have to explain the whole dance of the dead thing to me later. lol. Love ya.
| Title: Without A Lullaby
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 18:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
| Title: Alive (Ch 27)
Reviewed By: Kinoko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2006 13:18 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm... strangely enough I find myself at a bit of a loss for words by which to address this last chapter (see title). I never have a loss of words... how strange. Now you've seen a side of me that most authors don't get to see because I always have something to say to get the gears in their heads turning, however, I must be expeirencing a brain fart right now. HOW WEIRD! Oh, and who is Madoise? I'm very curious to know! ON A SIDE NOTE: Yes, you do well on 'bending' Sesshomaru's character reactions to the situations at hand, I simply was attempting to explain the difficulty behind it since I have decided to make Naraku one of the main characters in one of my stories, believe me, it's tough. I don't like the way I've portrayed InuYasha, but I think I can make amends for it later in the story, not that this should concern you, but since I have nothing else to talk about I just threw it in there. Can't wait to continue reading, - -Kinoko
| Reviewed By: Kinoko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2006 12:56 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a pivotal point of the story, though short, this changes things so dramatically from here on out, my goodness you move so quickly! (not that that's a bad thing, no, it's quite good... something that I should learn to do with my own fanfics -_-*) Perhaps it's my damn period, but I'm trying oh so hard to keep from crying it was so touching... damn knot in my throat. Aside from this.... I'm glad that you take note of the feedback you recieve, and I agree, an author puts their heart into their stories-- a good author anyway (I've seen a few that are, unfortunatly very dissapointing and distasteful). I'll write another review in a minute, I still have to finish the other chapters you've posted. Be right back, -Kinoko
| Title: PhantomAngel
Reviewed By: PhantomAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2006 11:15 EST
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i never really read Sessho/Kag pairings before this, most of the ones ive seen...is just too unrealistic. but youve captured the characters perfectly, and the way you brought them together works. not many authors do that so well. xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com
| Reviewed By: its all good On: February 28, 2006 05:48 EST
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nice keep up the good work
| Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Trin71(Not signed in)) On: February 27, 2006 10:31 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I am very pleased with this chapter. Yes, quite short...and yes, very significant. ^_^ I'm glad you did this chapter. It doesn't matter the length of this chapter because even in the short length of it...you have said so much. ^_^ I think Kagome needed this more then anything. To sort of...put Inuyasha to rest...in her HEART and MIND. I'm not quite sure if I understood what you were going for, but I will tell you what I thought you were shooting for when I read it. I think you were putting Kagome's mind at ease. I felt that she couldn't move on with Sesshoumaru due to the fact that she felt she was doing Inuyasha a great dishonor. With his approval...she could move on. She was able to tell him that she still loved him...even though she had fallen in love with another. (Even if it was his brother. HEE HEE!) ^_^ As she should. She can't mourn him forever and be unhappy. Inuyasha wouldn't want that for her. After all...he loved her. ^_^ Kagome also saw for herself...Sesshoumaru's true feelings for her. YAY! To some...it may seem small, but the fact that he showed her that type of emotion...it can only mean one thing. ^_^ HEE HEE! ~BLUSH~ ~BIGHUG~ I have thoroughly and completely enjoyed your story to date. This, I am now certain you are aware of. HEE HEE! I am looking forward to the finale, but also a bit saddened as I always am when a good story must end. I want the end to come because I am most anxious to see how it all falls into place, but at the same time...I wish for more. I am looking forward to reading your newest that you have written, but I will wait until this one is completed. ^_^ I wish you luck...as always...and will see you next chapter! ^_^
| Reviewed By: DeadlyMomo On: February 27, 2006 01:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this chapter =) and I love your author note. It's nice to understand how writer feel when they publish a story of their fantasy and have people give encouragement. Also agreeing upon the fact that it really hurts when people trash your writing style and story when you obiously have worked hard on. Like the saying goes "If you have nothing good to say, don't say anything at all". I agree with that this is an important chapter. One, in my opionon, is that Kagome has closure with Inuyasha near her death. Seeing that as long as she's alive and with Sesshomaru, she's home and feels that she belongs there =) If I remember correctly, when Kagome got severely injured, she saw red eyes..is it Naraku? One thing I think doesn't exactly make sen- wait, nvm. I get it. What I was gonna say was why Kagome thought something like "Where's Sesshomaru when you need him". I've just remembered that Kagome was with Miroku, Sango, and Shippou before.. Cya soon! =)
| Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2006 23:17 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update ASAP!!!! GREAT STORY!!! 1 OF THE BEST!!! ^_^
| Title: Without a Lullaby
Reviewed By: pyrokitten68 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2006 01:52 EST
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Once again you have delivered an amazing chapter. It's kinda sad that to hear that the story is going to end soon, but alas, all good things must come to an end. Still sad though. I am glad that you are inspired to take your talent beyond just writing fanfiction. What you have is indescribable..seriously...I hope your dreams of writing a book comes true, I don't doubt that you will be successful should you choose to go down that road. Anyways enough of my rambling...Great story and I look forward to seeing how all of this plays out.. Best of luck and Keep writing!!!
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