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Title: Without A Lullaby
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2006 20:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: ~Tear falls~
Reviewed By: Trin71(Not signed in) On: February 23, 2006 23:33 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OK...first of all...you know I love your story...I think I made that clear by now. HA HA! Second, you deserve more then a small amount of encouragement that I give you. I do find your writing very well thought out and quite interesting. You really do have a knack for writing. Hopefully you will go far with your skills. ^_^ I love stories with love, tragedy, angst, humor and anything else you can throw at me. ^_^ I intend to read your other stories as well, but I have small amounts of time lately due to my job. ^_^ Extra hours at work means less relaxation time for me to sit and read. I have many stories I would love to catch up on...yours and one other that I HAD TO catch up on, right away. HA HA! Ok, now...my review on this chapter. ^_^ Very good! I had been anticipating this for a while now. FINALLY! Kagome admits it! (For those of you who haven't read it...I will let you find out for yourselves. HA HA) I felt I could actually feel Kagome's pain in this chapter. I also feel for Sesshy. How could anyone not? ~Tear~ Kagome finds herself in the same situation as Inuyasha. ^_^ nice that you point that out...how she realizes the similarities. ^_^ I have always said that I felt bad for Inuyasha everytime Kagome would get upset with him in the actual series, but...I felt just as bad for her too. Neither could feel the others pain because all they saw was their own...for the most part. What was very noticable is the fact that they grew to love one another. Regardless of their trials or jealousies. ^_^ Now...Kagome feels what Inuyasha felt. ^_^ I am very pleased with this chapter. ^_^ GOOD JOB! Your last remark leaves me to believe that Sesshy couldn't have been too far away. Maybe he heard something after all? ~SNICKER~
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Title: Hmm
Reviewed By: Whiteraven08 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 14:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay some more chapters if you please itll make it all the more fun! She still misses inuyasha and thats okay i know how she feels.
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Reviewed By: mirokusgirl (not on-line) On: February 22, 2006 12:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wonder what Sesshomaru is going to say???? is this really the end! It can't be! even if it is, it really is an awesome story! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Kinoko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 13:57 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In response to your comment: Totally agree with your interpretation of the situation of the two main characters personality portrail. Sesshomaru is in no way a weak or shy character, he is, in my opinion, too much to handle, and that's the reason he makes little appeariences in the anime and in the manga. Too much of Sesshomaru would undo the air of mystery, unfathomable power, and simple yet complecated arisocratic-ness of his personality. An audience can only handle so much of him-- so even in the InuYasha movies when he is one of the main characters, the creator made an ingenious effort to give the audience Sesshomaru, in all his glory-- only she gave it in frequent little bits, spacing out his appearences. This leaves us authors who want to feature Sesshomaru as the front man to our fanfiction in a predicament that the creator had never placed him in-- and that is that the focus is on him, therefore there are no side story 'fillers' to space apart his reactions or how he will respond to something that may 'bend' the way he usually acts. That's why so many of us have trouble portraying him correctly-- simply because he's the main focus of the story rather than a side story character-- and because he's the main focus, it also makes us have to use our imagination to try and predict the way he would respond given what the creator has given as backround information. Woo that was long! The same is for all other characters that aren't main focus characters like Kagura, Kanna, Naraku, Koga, Kagome's family and the likewise. Aside from all of that....... The recent additions to the story are wonderful, the part that really stood out to me was when Sesshomaru compared Kagome to art, a poem, a painting, silk, and a fine wine that flowed through his fingers in the finest of ways. It was beautiful and skillfully written, showing off his intellectual and creative appreaciation for beauty. Well done, keep up the good work! -Kinoko
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Reviewed By: koniko chan On: February 21, 2006 11:10 EST
Comment/Review:
^^ How sad! this story had me hooked I was crying so hard when you got to finally show us how he died! keep up the fantasic work. lol love the kag sesshy fights ;)
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Title: Without A Lullaby
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 16:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Anime_hunney [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 12:10 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I reallu love your story! You did a great job! Ohh and please write more!
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Title: Without A Lullaby
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 12:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Rinseternalsoul
Reviewed By: Rinseternalsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2006 22:58 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've really enjoyed this story. I've cried and laughed and shivered through it all. It has been heart wrenching and tender and sexy. Really a great fic. I look forward to more. Rinseternalsoul
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Title: Without A Lullaby
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2006 17:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: YESSSSSSSS!
Reviewed By: Trin71 (Not signed in) On: February 15, 2006 17:01 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know you're amazing...right? ^_^ If you don't know that...then let me tell you...YOU'RE AMAZING! Yes, yes, me likey the lemon...me likey a lot! HEE HEE! Perhaps she is dead? HEE HEE! HE SMILES! YES! I love the torture you put her through for Sesshoumaru's satisfaction. HEE HEE! I can almost imagine a sheepish grin on his face once he knew he had her where he wanted her. LOL! GO SESSHY...GO! ^_^ I certainly do love these two characters together. So much fun you can have. ^_^ See you next chapter! ^_^
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Reviewed By: mirokusgirl (not on-line) On: February 15, 2006 13:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was sooo HOTT! I'm absolutely loving this fic, you have to update more!!! More More! Sesshy is sooo freaking sexy!
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Reviewed By: Deadly Momo On: February 15, 2006 02:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(evil submit thingy cut off my review) Happy Valentine's Day =D
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Reviewed By: Deadly Momo On: February 15, 2006 02:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Happy Valentine's Day =D
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