| "Without a Lullaby" Reviews/Comments [ 78 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kinoko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 12:45 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed the coupling chapter as well as the way you portray Kagome. Many authors take Kagome to the extreme 'subordinate' or 'submissive' attitude, or the other extreme of absolutely being a bitch. You however have taken both and made her into the person she really is in the anime-- bitchy at times and submissive at others. On the other hand, sometimes I have trouble seeing Sesshomaru doing the things you discribe in your story, but given the circumstance you've placed him in, I agree with the way you portray his actions and thoughts. Good job, and keep it up! -Kinoko
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Trin71 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 00:53 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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HEE HEE! I couldn't help myself...I had to laugh while reading this chapter. I found so much humor in the arguing (Mainly on Kagome's part). I could imagine her giving him heck and not understanding why he treats her so. ^_^ HA HA! I just love your style. You've got these two characters pegged so well. Both are so stubborn. ^_^ Kagome seems to be more of a hot head then Sesshy though...which...isn't too far from the truth in the series themselves. HEE HEE! He seems to be able to control his anger for the most part...until Inuyasha comes around. ~Rolls eyes~ Brotherly love. ~Snicker~ ANYHOOOOOW, Sesshoumaru sure knows how to win a fight...doesn't he? ~Snicker~ BTW...Yes, I realized I had misunderstood your meaning in that chapter, but...I figured you'd straighten me out. HEE HEE! I was a bit confused, but left it up to my own mind to make heads or tails of it...and that was the best I could come up with. HEE HEE! The story is still awesome. Regardless of error. ^_^ My apologies to you if this chapter wasn't intended to be funny, but I seriously couldn't help myself. Very good chapter. ^_^ Looking forward to next chapter. (As always! ^_^)
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Reviewed By: Kinoko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 20:21 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually write huge reviews for stories I read, however I want to get back to it, and I'm simply writing this because you asked me to. I really enjoy reading, and since I enjoy it so much, I've read pretty much all of the IY stories that are of high caliber, so when I came across yours I was instantly intriged. Good job on capturing my attention! The plot is one that I like and that isn't dramatically over done (as in there aren't that many stories like this one) and in this quality I applaude you. Well I'm going on with the story and I promise that I'll review again. -Kinoko
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Title: Trin
Reviewed By: Trin71 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 18:18 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Silly me didn't see the new chapter until I had already posted review. Soooo...I will review on the present chapter. ^_^ HA HA! Silly me! AWESOME LEMON! ~CRIES~ I'm so darn happy for Kagome and Sesshy! ^_^ Hopefully nothing happens to mess it up for them now. HEE HEE! GREAT WORK! Looking forward to next chapter. ^_^
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Trin71 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 17:46 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I had to reread your story because it had been a while since you were able to update...and I realized, all over again, how I got hooked on your story to begin with. ^_^ You seem to make things possible for Sesshoumaru's character. Even though we know he would never bare his soul like he is in your story...you make it work so well. ^_^ Yet you stay true to his original character. I LOVE THAT! ^_^ I understand what pyrokitten68 meant about the rape scene, but I understood the part as...he healed Kagome's body (Which means that he repaired that part of her body as well?)...after he had stabbed her with Tokijin. I could be wrong however, but that is the way I interpretted that part of the story. Maybe our author can enlighten us about that part, but I still think that that is what was meant. ^_^ Sooooo, Sesshoumaru saw her as being a virgin all over again??? ^_^ Anyhow...I still love your story a great deal and can't wait for next chapter. You have really good writing skills. You know how to describe things and put a vivid picture in the readers mind. Keep going and good luck! ^_^
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Title: Without A Lullaby
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 13:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: amazing work
Reviewed By: pyrokitten68 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 00:41 EST
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Wow! such a beautiful story. I really appreciatet how realistic you show Kagome and her feelings to be after what happened to her. Just one question..I thought Sesshomaru knew that Kagome had been raped, then why didn't he know that she wasn't a virgin?...Anyways..beautiful story hope to see more updates from you soon...btw..sorry to hear 'bout your troubles..hope they are getting better for you...ja nai
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Title: Welcome Back
Reviewed By: harpersong [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2006 22:24 EST
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Still here, still interested. =) Feel free to update as often as you like, I know it'd make me happy. hehe I really like your story, I'm looking forward to see where it's going.
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: Trin71 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 23:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was hoping you were going to be able to continue your story. Excellent story! ^_^ Sorry to hear about the troubles you were having prior to your posting of the newest chapter, but I was so pleased to see the chapter when I signed online today. ^_^ GOOD WORK! KEEP GOING! By the way, you sure haven't lost my attention. I periodically check for updates on my favorite unfinished fanfics. This one was one I have been so impatient for. HA HA HA! But, well worth it, I assure you! ^_^
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Title: Without A Lullaby
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 15:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Without A Lullaby
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 14:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Without A Lullaby
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 19:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Ray-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2005 20:03 EST
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Sesshy is so kawaii! ^W^... What happens to Miroku, Sango, and Shippo? I know they're far away, but Can't they look for Kagome? Poor Inuyasha...
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Reviewed By: Inuyashalover4life [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 18:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this story i cant wait to find out what happens its very good
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Reviewed By: LunarAlchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 17:33 EST
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Great fic so far. Really enjoying it. I love seeing Sesshoumaru come undone. :-)
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