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Title: Time, Fault, Out
Reviewed By: Noraniza On: April 24, 2006 11:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GGGrrrrrrr, i wish i could just strangle that stupid bitch Relena,...*growl*... Will be lookin foward to your next chapter when Duo will kick that pink menace out for good,...*evil-grin*...
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Title: More please!
Reviewed By: Julianna 32 On: April 23, 2006 10:54 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OW I'm so anxious! Nothing against Relena, but THIS Relena deserves to suffer!!! Go Duo!!! Scalpel and all! I love this fic and the way you always treat our gorgeous couple with so much love and care! But I wonder what's going to happen to Heero now that he's injured! He was just selected on the list for the Nations cup team! Ow man! I hope this doesn't ruin his plans...damn Relena! Some people really... Great chap!
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Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 20:39 EDT
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*Sniff* poor Taurus. I love this fic soo much. I can't wait for Duo to lay into the pink parascite. A humerus break is very painful. I did that last August. I ended up having surgery on it. I hope that Heero's will be okay.
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Title: Thank you!
Reviewed By: GW_ShenLong [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 11:37 EDT
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Many thanks to all of you who have dropped a comment in on this fic so far. I do appreciate each and every one of them. Duo and Relena will be running into each other very soon and the fur is set to fly once they lock horns. For those who were wondering about Zechs and Treize; the muse informs me there will be something stirring there. I'm sorry to all of you who liked Taurus, i didn't want to write him out like that, but the muse insisted and it is a vital part of the overall plot line. There's some more angst to come, but I do promise this fic will have a happy ending. For now though, I'm off to write part 24. Thank you all again for your encouragement and kind words. *hugs and Gundam Pilots to you all* Shen. ^_^
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Title: MORE SOON PLEASE!!
Reviewed By: Misslady (not signed in) On: April 21, 2006 19:44 EDT
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OK WOW poor Heero and Duo. If I were Duo I would just bitchslap Relena and get it over with. Please keep up the great work. This story is awesome!! THank you for all your wonderful work!! Misslady
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: tataliny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 17:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so so glad that you updated. I was waiting for this chapter. I am seriously hoping Zechs and Trieze get together; and I am hoping that Duo brings the Pink Harpy down a notch. I love how Heero wakes up and says that Relena is not is partner. That girl is seriously dense, why does it seem natural for Heero to call for Duo if there was nothing happening. I think Relena needs the CAT scan. lol Please update soon. I'm greedly. I love a good story. Thanks, Tataliny
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Reviewed By: Harmglo On: April 21, 2006 16:54 EDT
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Wow, you keep dishing these chapters out so fast!! I'm so happy!!! Thank you for the wonderful chapter. I can't wait to find out how badly or not so badly off Heero is. And I hope Duo manages to control himself when he catches sight of Relena. Oh, boy. Can't wait to see how Relena's going to react to being snubbed by the medical staff as well now that Duo's orders in regards to Heero's treatment have been solidified. Woo hoo! Continue with more soon!
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 14:14 EDT
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great chaper...very emotional i can't wait to see what happens next. i hope hero's ok
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Reviewed By: Mavorick3 On: April 18, 2006 17:26 EDT
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This was a very emotional chapter. But more than anything, I'm anxious to know what happens with Heero. Though not in nearly as devastated by the fall as poor Taurus was, his injuries sound pretty severe. Head injuries especially can be nasty. He's lucky his helmet remained intact. Anyway, update soon please. I'm desperate to find out how Heero is...and how Duo's going to react when he gets to the hospital. *grins* That's going to be good, I'm sure.
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Reviewed By: Kourutusunie (not logged in) On: April 17, 2006 23:03 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMG!!! Can I have some more please?! Like soon?!!!! have to know what happens to Heero? Does Relena try to get in the way again?
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Reviewed By: Mina121 On: April 17, 2006 19:05 EDT
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Oh, my. What did Relena do? She's horrible! And despite everything, she has the audacity to continue her fantasy over Heero! *rubs her head* You've done a wonderful job in getting me to dislike her, which takes a lot of good writing to accomplish. This was a very angst filled chapter. The whole scene with Treize and Taurus was heartbreaking. Hopefully, he'll have Zechs in his corner soon for comfort. ^_~ And poor Heero! What really is the extent of his injuries? They sound so severe. *grins evilly* I do hope Relena sticks around long enough for Duo's appearance. She's so arrogant I don't doubt it. Poor fool. Can't wait to see the explosion. Anyway, thank you for the wonderful chapter. I'll be waiting for the next installment to be sure. Good luck and happy trails.
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Reviewed By: AvEry On: April 17, 2006 18:08 EDT
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Okay, being that murder is illegal just about everywhere, is there any chance of sometime of catastrophic event that can occur that can destroy a certain 'pink cow'? Relena single handedly destroyed a life - poor, poor, Taurus - and may have robbed another of his future. I have to tell you this, I can't wait til the next chapter when Duo gets to the hospital. Relena'll be lucky she's already in a medical facility! Although this chapter was so very sad, I was happy to see the spark between Treize and Zechs. I so love those two together. Anyway, I digress, good luck with the next chapter and thank you for getting this one out so fast. Hopefully, the next one will be upon us just as quickly. ^_^
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Title: Time, Fault, and out
Reviewed By: Noraniza On: April 17, 2006 14:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAArrrrgggghhhh, i'm gona kill that pink bitch,...*glare-at-said-pink-bitch*.....she is one veeerrryyy annoying brat, and i hope Duo will give kick her pink ass good and hard when he arrive at the hospital,...*evil-smirk*...
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Title: PLEASE UPDATE SOON
Reviewed By: Misslady (not signed in) On: April 17, 2006 13:37 EDT
Comment/Review:
Okay so much angst. My heart is pounding!! Is Heero going to be ok? Is Duo going to kill Relena? Poor Taurus!! Poor Treize!! Relena should stay away from horses. Please update soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Sayo~chan On: April 17, 2006 11:51 EDT
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omg! you cannot be serious!! ::sobs:: if you make Heero have amnesia and fall in love with Relena, i will never forgive you! lol j/k keep up the good work i love the story so far!
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