| "Time, Fault and Out" Reviews/Comments [ 101 ] |
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Reviewed By: breaker99 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2013 22:59 EDT
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I have to say that I've enjoyed reading the second story of your series & though this is my second time reading this story. I have to say that I still enjoyed it from beginning to end, overall it had a amazing,unique & entertaining plot that keep me guessing while I was reading the story. After finishing the second story of your series I'm extremely excited about reading the third and last one. I honestly look forward to reading more of your future stories! |
Reviewed By: Okie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 19:01 EDT
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yay!!!! im glad relena backed off!!! and im very sorry for my lang. in my previous post *Blush* i really liked this one and equinity (?) and cant wait to start reading the next one!
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Reviewed By: Okie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2008 18:32 EDT
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gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa that skanky relena!!!!!!! i hate her w/ a passoin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! she needs to go die in hell!
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Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2007 23:45 EDT
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This arc has occupied my entire week. I now know more about horses than I ever thought I would and despite that, or perhaps because of it, I enjoyed this story immensely. It was actually nerve wracking to read some of the competition chapters, and the growing relationships between the various characters were touching, heartwarming, and quite realistic and believable. Thank you very much for writing, and I look forward to reading the next installment. Sincerely, Your most recent fangirl, Sylenc
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2007 15:23 EDT
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This is one of the very best GW fics I've read. You have managed to write an engrossing storyline and still managed to have enough details close to hand to make it "real". Since this is only ch. 38, I have to say I can't wait to finish this section. However, I do have a question for you. I grew up living near my grandparents and they always had horses, but since they were only pleasure/trail horses, they felt no need to give them a special diet, beyond some oats every morning with their hay. Could you explain what "chaff" is to me and why such a specialized diet is so important?
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: Sayo ~ chan On: January 29, 2007 22:16 EST
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i am sorry if i havent reviewed before, but i usually am reading in a rush (college student) but i would like to take this chance to say that i greatly admire your work... its well written and very interesting... i was hoping that you could email me when you post the final story? or at least email me the name of the story? thanx! squeekers16@juno.com
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Reviewed By: Dreamkeeper On: January 22, 2007 16:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have aboslutely loved this fic and the first one. I can't wait to start reading the third installation of the arch. I happen to be a horse back rider that is also a jumper and it's great to read a story that's so acurate to the sport, as well as being intersting to read in general. Thanks for doing the sport justice! Can't wait for the next part of the ride...
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Reviewed By: Innchan On: January 22, 2007 16:13 EST
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Ahh, lovely! You sure have the knack of keeping the tension tight right until the end. I've smiled. laughed and cried (and blushed ;-) ) with your stories even before the Equinity, but these two... Do you publish? I've ridden a bit myself so the terminology is somewhat familiar - allthough I learned it in finnish! :-) Have a good time writing the third part, and I'll have wonderfull time reading it. Love, Innchan
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Reviewed By: Shadow Sun On: January 18, 2007 15:23 EST
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That's an excellent, wonderful and beautiful fic. Congratulations.
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Reviewed By: Akennea Stone On: January 18, 2007 15:20 EST
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I love these fics, I've been with this arc since the first posting of Equinity and every chapter have been amazing. Keep it up, I hope to see the next installment soon!
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Reviewed By: yaruna [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 11:46 EST
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this has been a truly wonderful story :D Most certainly the best one I've read with horses and the GW boys I love it that you take your time explaining things and how you bring the plot forwards. I can't get enough of reading this story ^_^ Love it ^_^
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Title: Thank you!
Reviewed By: GW_ShenLong [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2006 08:41 EST
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I'd just like to say a quick thank you to everyone that is reading this fic. And to those of you who have left a review, please be aware that while I may not reply individually, I do read the reviews and I appreciate every single one of them. Quite often a comment left in a review causes my muse to 'think' about a possibility for the plot line and quite often these little 'tangents' my muse goes off on are sparked by something a reviewer has said. While you may not be aware of it, you are feeding my muse and for that I am grateful. There will be a third fic in this arc once TFO is finished; meanwhile, I hope you continue to read and enjoy the remaining chapters of TFO and that you will read the third fic when it comes out and enjoy that as much. It is truly a pleasure to write for such a lovely audience. Thank you again! *Hugs and Gundam Pilots to you all* Shen. ^_^ www.gundam-wing-diaries.150m.com The home of ShenLong.
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Reviewed By: heechanlover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2006 03:07 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i was on the edge of my seat. OMG!!! i was not expecting the germans to win, but then you always do happen to make a twist somewhere in the story. i liked it overall and i can't wait for more. i'll be waiting and maybe this time we can get something more. i liked how trieze only lost by such a small amount of time. my god!!! that was like wow!!!! i was holding my breath and everything. it was wow!!! i can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: heechanlover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 02:25 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
tension. so much tension in the air it's suffocating. omg. just update so we can all behappy and celebrate. i can't wait. i feel so bad for firefox and alex. i hope everything goes well for them and also for heero. i hope he goes clear on his round. well waiting for for more.
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Reviewed By: wyft [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 08:37 EST
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Wonderful! just when i've re-read Time Fault and Out till Ch58 theres another update!! thank you so much for another exciting chapter! keep up the good work i really love your style of writing!
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