| "Time, Fault and Out" Reviews/Comments [ 101 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jupitorknight On: January 23, 2006 10:18 EST
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ohhhh now there's an interesting ending. I figured Zech's would be waiting in bed or with dinner, very surprised, but what an evil way to end the story. I enjoyed this chapter and can't wait to see the next, If you update say....tomorrow I'll give zero a carrot :)
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Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 22:30 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic so much.
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Reviewed By: Inulovr16 (not Logged In) On: January 18, 2006 22:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic just as much as i love the first one..no make that i love this one more. the humor is soo good i cannot get enough of this fic..i can't wait to see wht is going to happen next..remember to always have fun writting or don;t write at all..^-^
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Reviewed By: Jupitorknight On: January 14, 2006 01:32 EST
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Very impressed, but what a place to leave it off at. I'm in shock, I was leaning on the edge of my seat and then as I read the last sentence I lost my balence and fell in the floor. It was to funny. You have very good description skills. Thats a poor way of saying it, I feel what you write, I feel my gut clench as the horse goes over the jump, I feel the panic that the rider feels, and the relief as well.
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Reviewed By: JupitorKnight On: January 10, 2006 10:36 EST
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Excellent chapter you had me on the edge of my seat. I was gripping the mouse so hard I thikn I left dents in it. You have a very good way with suspense. I'm impressed. I have also come to learn that some of the Quarter horses that we use for Rodeo out here are sometimes used in jumping. They don't jump here in New Mexico but do alot of jumping in Oklahoma.
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Reviewed By: Jupitorknight On: January 01, 2006 05:50 EST
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We call what you call a gooseneck a 5th wheel here in America, I have lots of friends who transport horses, and cattle, and lots of them go out and camp as well.
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Reviewed By: WickedGame [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 16:16 EST
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I read equinity and then continued on to this, so i am technically reviewing both stories here. i really like them. it is nice to see the maturity portrayed, and the technical knowledge you have put to use. I really love that you have the knowledge to write about all this, it makes your work seem a lot more in depth and thought out, instead of being mindless drivel. the only complaint i ever had about equinity was that you used the horse vs rider analogy of them "being as one", or various other terms over and over. It was a bit repetitive to hear that everytime Duo watched Heero ride. But otherwise it was completely original, and refreshing. hope to see an update soon. btw: since you skipped two years in between stories, does Duo like to be on bottom at all now? did he ever escape that particular fear?
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Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2005 16:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The first thing that i must say is that i'm very thankful that u made it so that annomous people could leave a review, b/c i always have problems with the logging in and then leaving the review..so thanks for that..Next i just wanted to let u know that this is coming along so very well and i'm very happy..Oh and i'm just loving Norbutts..can't get enough of him..can't wait to the next chap. to see what Duo will do with his lil friend..One last thing..Where the heck could Heero have gone at such an important time..lol..hope u have a Merry/Happy Chrismas and a wonderful New Year..^-^
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii (not signed in) On: December 23, 2005 02:01 EST
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can't wait to see what happens next
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Reviewed By: law916 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 10:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do not have the words to explain how much I enjoyed reading "Equinity" and I think this sequel is and will be just as magnificent. You are truly a gifted writer, with a style that is truly special. I'm looking forward to your next update.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2005 09:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! sequel!! keep going!!!
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii (not signed in) [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 09:20 EST
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another great chapter, keep them comming!
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Reviewed By: DesiredFAITH [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 16:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im sure that you will hear a lot of this... But, I am very glad that this story has arrived. I cannot wait to read more. Keep up the excellent writing.
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 15:05 EST
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i'm happy that the sequal is out. can't wait to see what happens
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Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 08:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*hearts* I've been waiting so long for this fic to arrive. What a thing to wake up to. It looks great so far.
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