| "Time, Fault and Out" Reviews/Comments [ 101 ] |
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Title: ch15
Reviewed By: priscel _ =^_^= On: March 13, 2006 10:34 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yea Duo! kick Relena's tail!...cat vet ..
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Title: Time, Fault, and Out
Reviewed By: Noraniza On: March 13, 2006 08:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, that Relena bitch needs to go, period!!! *frown*
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Reviewed By: Kimpisces(not logged in) On: March 06, 2006 19:53 EST
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Uh oh, this is pretty bad. I mean, Relena is definitely interested in Heero and I have the feeling that whenever Heero's over there, all of a sudden Relena will have nothing better to do than watch him ride. I just hope that Heero finds some way around that. Update soon, I absolutely love this fanfic ~KIM~
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Title: Hello!
Reviewed By: ShinigamiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2006 03:30 EST
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I have to say i started to read Equinity only a few days ago and now I'm up to speed on Time, Fall and Out and I have to say, I love the story! It was really refreshing to read a story that has more plot that sex scenes (don't get me wrong, I love those too, and you write them very well). Also, I love the realistic pace of your story. Keep the chapters coming!
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Reviewed By: Jupitorknight On: February 21, 2006 10:23 EST
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ohhh your not going to make relena go all crazy over Heero are you. Have her threaten the relationship between he and Duo??? Can't wait for an update
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Reviewed By: Inulover16 (not logged in) On: February 07, 2006 02:33 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HE HE HE!! I just loved the new chap..looks like Heero had a great time and Duo learned how much more Heero loves him..anyway I would agree with what Treiz said about Tarus...My friend once had a horse who did a face plant at a show and just cut up its leg, but besides that the horse had trouble jumping and it took a long time for the horse not to not need such a diving force to get over the jump..plus my friend broke her leg and had to get better before she could ride her horse Suki..Oh! I really loved the ending..can't wait to see what will happen and how Heero will say..I just wanted to THANK YOU on how fast you have been updating the fic..^-^
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2006 17:58 EST
Comment/Review:
please continue!
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Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2006 09:49 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool chapter. I hope Heero doesn't have a heart attack over the question Treize posed. BTW have you thought about introducing Zechs to Trieze in this fic? As always love the fic.
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2006 16:27 EST
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great chapter! please update i hate cliff-hangers!
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2006 16:00 EST
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I know you never answer your reviews, and that's fine, but i just wanted to tell you what a great job you're doing with this story... i followed you on Gundam Diaries, and I';m glad that you're accessible here too.
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Reviewed By: Kalico [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 13:53 EST
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FOrmalities, Formalities! Let them all be damned. i suppose you can guess that i hate to review. It's not that i pratically don't want to although a lot of time i don't...it's the time factor that bugs me. college ensnares my time thus i either read on the run and blast all formalities (reviews) or i save fics that might be interesting for later and then forget the review those fics which i have read. well, i suppose you aren't that interested in all i've said so far...lol...i wouldn't be either. Review: I like your fic a lot. it's high in my books. i've read basically all of your gundam wing fics and one-shots that i could find and yeh...i didn't review a single one. like i said, i save and read. maybe i will review them all one day when i have much more time to dwaddle. you are pretty talented.anyway gatta babe...lata.
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Reviewed By: Jupitorknight On: January 23, 2006 10:18 EST
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ohhhh now there's an interesting ending. I figured Zech's would be waiting in bed or with dinner, very surprised, but what an evil way to end the story. I enjoyed this chapter and can't wait to see the next, If you update say....tomorrow I'll give zero a carrot :)
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Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 22:30 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic so much.
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Reviewed By: Inulovr16 (not Logged In) On: January 18, 2006 22:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic just as much as i love the first one..no make that i love this one more. the humor is soo good i cannot get enough of this fic..i can't wait to see wht is going to happen next..remember to always have fun writting or don;t write at all..^-^
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Reviewed By: Jupitorknight On: January 14, 2006 01:32 EST
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Very impressed, but what a place to leave it off at. I'm in shock, I was leaning on the edge of my seat and then as I read the last sentence I lost my balence and fell in the floor. It was to funny. You have very good description skills. Thats a poor way of saying it, I feel what you write, I feel my gut clench as the horse goes over the jump, I feel the panic that the rider feels, and the relief as well.
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