| "Live and Let Die (Part 2): Awakenings" Reviews/Comments [ 151 ] |
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Reviewed By: inu hanyou nikkie On: April 11, 2006 12:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am back again. And I had just finished reading the next two chapters (3 and 4) and I must say.... WOW! Literary Goddess has done it again and written another two chapters of glorious brillance!! What a story this is turning out to be! What an awesome sequel!! Heck it doesn't feel like a sequel!! It just flows so prefectly together!!!Go Kagome for creating the barrier and blasting those evil men! pouted a little that she didn't singe a certain attackers naughty bits. I was upset that the others left her all alone with no help. I agree they should have left Kirara and Shippo with Kagome. Proceeds to smack Sango and Miroku upside the head-Baka. I loved when Inuyasha comforted her afterwards and her saying only he will be the one to touch her. It was heartwarming. I really like the way you are bringing mind powers into this. I think that is really cool!! I also liked that Myoujou came to Kagome call. I hope they will have a lasting friendship with her. I laughed when Myoujou carried those men back to the village. I like that they will be punished. I can't wait to see the downfall of Koga. Will Kagome take the stand up for Inuyasha this time in the fight? And Sesshoumaru.. Is he harbouring a hidden talent? Mind Powers or a relative who can teach them? I wonder will Kagome be able to use her powers to temporarily transform herself into a youkai or hanyou when the need arises? Will Inuyasha be able to control his youkai side and will he be able to transform into a dog form? And poor Sesshoumaru... he had to wait until Kagome and Inuyasha finally finished for the time being and consent to talk to him. He must be floored at the want those two have for each other. Also thank you for having Miroku being an experienced man - he was after all found by Kagome and Inuyasha in a brothel. That is such a realistic touch. and so true to character. Lots of writers tend to make Miroku a virgin, all bashful and clueless. The hotspring scene with the fundoushi- that was a cute and sweet touch - loved it! You are such an awesome writer!! and your story so rich, vibrant and flavouful!! So wonderfully exquiste!! I really do love reading your stories!! Please keep up the most excellent work and You Totally ROCK!!
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Reviewed By: Danny Girl On: April 11, 2006 10:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You hit this one out of the park (yes I'm a baseball fan) I love it ....Please update soon
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Reviewed By: nikki (kagomegirl) On: April 11, 2006 10:18 CDT
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man this story is great!!! pls continue. oh yeah will you let me know if you are going to do a sequel to blood and tears.
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Reviewed By: inuhanyou fan On: April 10, 2006 10:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well wat can i say my favorite author finally made a new story. I was looking foward to this sequal to Live and let Die. I just hope that this story will be longer than the first part of the story. I will be watching this story very carefully like i do with all your stories and i can't wait till you update. I also can't wait till Kouga tastes the sweet rejection once he finds out that Kagome and Inuyasha are mated. I really hope that you will update soon i will be checking frequently and keep up the fantastic work.
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 18:07 CDT
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I like it - well, them actually - the first story and then this sequeal. I'm looking forward to see where you take us.
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Title: frani1375
Reviewed By: frani1375 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 15:35 CDT
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Your story is really excellent. One of the best that I have read to date. I really love the fact that you make Kagome strong. I can't stand it when I read stories and she's all whiney and helpless. Anyway, great chapter. Update soon. Updating is what I should be doing with my stories. :P but I'll get to them sooooon enough, lol.
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Title: Wow, can you hear the sizzle?
Reviewed By: FarAwayEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 13:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My, my, those two are certainly insatiable. Poor, poor Sesshomaru. He should have just gone back to Jaken and Rin for the night and tried again in the morning instead of sitting there, waiting for it to be over. Sheesh. I felt so bad for him. It will be interesting to see how the rest of the group reacts to Sess, Rin, and Jaken's inclusion as they travel to where all those slaughters are taking place. And imagine what poor Shippo will do if they return to Kaede's with big, bad Sesshomaru! He better run and hide or be ready to show how good he's acting lately. I hope Koga isn't too stupid to try to stake any claims on Kagome. Both inus WILL not hesitate to rip him to shreds if he should. And that was so cute with Miroku and Sango. Totally in character, they're so shy, even if the monk is pushy at times. Hopefully they'll work things out soon! Stupid Naraku and his stupid curse keeps getting in the way, which is most uncool. Anyways, can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 11:03 CDT
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i just love rin. i know she only had like a line or two, but she just puts jaken in his place in such an adorable way. and the imp doesn't even realize it. priceless. a light chapter but full of foreshadowing. so much is coming that i think that chapters 3 & 4, which seemed, at least to me, to focus more on the traveling companions and their relationships with each other, are building a foundation for the group to stand on as the drama and action situations come into play. there is still so much out there with the jewel shards, the priest, kouga, naraku, and yes, i think even kikyou, that the group needs to build their trust in each other back up. this also allowed for sesshy to come in and offer his aid. it's kinda nice for kouga to admit he has no idea what the hell is going on even if it was only in his head. and i'm proud of shippou. while the kit seems to be a bit in left field right now, i have no doubt you'll have him come into the fray again. until next time, your minion will patiently await.
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Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 10:52 CDT
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Awesome I can't wait till you update again this is getting good
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Reviewed By: Danny Girl On: April 09, 2006 10:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As with your other stories...I just love this...update soon please
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Title: thanks
Reviewed By: viz On: April 08, 2006 11:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for updating. I can't want for the other chapters. Update soon and thanks again
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Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 22:36 CDT
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nice chapter! it felt just a little rushed, but after reading it again, that almost fits, kind of nice aspect of your writing. thanks!
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 20:42 CDT
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bandits, and bears, and bares...oh my. well, calling out so every demon in the area could be a nasty little problem. if sesshy heard them and he was headed towards the village...did kouga hear them too. oh, that would not be a pleasant wake up call at the hot spring. or if the evil (i meant misguided) priest got to the village and tried to purify kouga. that would be a blowto the wolf's pride to have to be rescued by inuyasha and the gang. so many possiblities. and poor miroku. if only he could take to inu about women without getting too perverted. the monk could learn alot from the dog. with so many choices i can't wait to see where you go with this next. your minion will patiently await more.
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Reviewed By: kokoro no miko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, you've done it again. As always, the lemons are both amazingly erotic and incredibly sweet! I'm looking forward to seeing what other new abilities the pair develop--and wherever will they find someone able to guide them in learning to refine and control them? I'm thinking that it's a good place for Sesshoumaru to come into things....I mean, they're going to need some serious help, especially given the power level that Kagome is showing: if both Myoujou and Sesshoumaru could hear her call for help from those kind of distances, what other attention could she inadvertantly attract? I'm willing to bet that we haven't seen the last of that horrible excuse for a priest. I can hardly wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: FarAwayEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a cute chapter. I can't wait to see what happens when Sesshomaru catches up with Inuyasha and Kagome. I hope he does keep away long enough not to witness, well, you know. Neat way to show how Kagome's growing, but I can't wait to see what Inuyasha's gained from her. It's gotta be something that's very cool. I hope that Miroku and Sango can work their issues out. Nice touch having the monk realize that Inuyasha's not always had that easy life. I thought it was a great emotional growth on his part. Hopefully he'll have the guts to tell Inuyasha some of those things, too. It'll be interesting to see if that happens. And I hope that Shippo will continue to behave, or we'll boot his behind to Uncle Sess's place where he can find out what REAL pain is. Well, update soon. I can't wait to see what you have.
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