| "Live and Let Die (Part 2): Awakenings" Reviews/Comments [ 151 ] |
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Title: great stuff!
Reviewed By: ObsessedInuyashaFan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2010 17:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg.. sorry i have to leave a short review but im PLOWING through these chappies like crazy. STILL LOVE IT! great job. omg awesome. and the part three is open in another tab now :D thanks for continuing still! :D
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Reviewed By: Nay-the-demon-slayer On: January 24, 2009 01:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent fanfic, as per usual! i really enjoyed this fic! it had so many moments that had ,me at the edge of my seat, and others that just made me go "awwwwww". perfect balance of excitement, romance, and comedy. i will certainly be reading the 3rd part! Keep up the good work :D
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Reviewed By: ShadowBullet [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2008 22:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.... yet another great story. As I was reading this, I couldn't help but be reminded of The Lord Of The Rings. Not saying that you copied it, but the way the plot was set up reminded me of the trilogy. This story is as good if not better than the first. I can't wait to read the third part, but I have to ask, Is the third part the last one, or are you going to make a fourth one?
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Title: miss
Reviewed By: nescafevh On: May 27, 2008 10:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've just finished reading all three parts and I loved it! That twist at the end, my god! I'm a writer as well but compared to yours it's crap!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2007 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
amazing story... really liked it... i've read this a couple of times before but only now am i leaving a review - sorry... anyway good job... great work...
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story!!
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this story is very well writen. It was so fun to read it!! it rocked!!! I'm gonna start reading the next part right now!!! yOU'R THE BEST!!!
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Reviewed By: theknightcallsmyname [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 19:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just finished reading this story for the second time. I thoroughly enjoyed it once again, and I'm looking forward to reading the third part!
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Reviewed By: BrokenAngel1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 15:57 CDT
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omg. awesome i love this series. i can't wait 2 read the 3rd part. i'm startin it as soon as i finish writing this. i'm completely in love with it so far. i can't wait 2 c what naraku tries. ur doing fantastic right now. keep up the good work. i've loved all of ur stories so far.
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Title: Spell Check Results...
Reviewed By: Sweet_lil_Nani On: April 20, 2007 20:05 CDT
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OMG!!!! I haven't finishd yet, but since I usually do spell check to read the fic better, thought I'd tell you how much I appreciate the fact that you have such wonderful grammar!!!! I found one in the entire number of chapters I have read:leaped. I've looked it up, it should be lept, but, hey, I Font Color LOVE this story! (Especially the lemons) Oh, and I think it would be better if you didn't use THIS SESSHOMARU. He says I...
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Reviewed By: crc31789 On: August 19, 2006 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Originally I wouldn't have given you such a high rating for your style of writing. But I'm really enjoying reading your story and now I really like your style. Also, I applaud all of your creativity with this story. It's a lot different than other fanfictions than I've been reading and it's very enjoyable! I can't wait to read the next part, which I'm going to do right after this! As for the actual story, I haven't found a SINGLE Inuyasha fanfic that wasn't a lemon, or at least lemony. I don't enjoy reading that, it makes me uncomfortable (I feel guilty, like I'm polluting my brain. But it's been so polluted already that I'm not embarrassed by reading it, I just plain don't like to). There are times when I felt like the story would have been better if they had just stuck to cuddling instead of having sex. So it'd be nice if there was more non-sexual cuddling in the story. They should be content sometimes without going that far. I really think it's a lot more romantic that way anyway. :/ I think you have justified their behavior by saying that it's normal for Youkai's to mate until the female gets pregnant and that because of the blood bond both of them experience that instinct more strongly. So I guess I can let it slide. But I still would prefer if there were more sweet, cuddly scenes. ^^ On the subject of the blood bond--that is a REALLY awesome idea. It's very symbolic, very personal, and very romantic and sweet. It's the way they feel about each other on their deepest level. That is so... meaningful. I'm glad you came up with it, and the sentiments you chose are perfect, particularly since you had Inuyasha think of her as "Savior" and "Home" ^____^ Is Kikyou going to reappear and die? I'm kind of sad that she's been so bitter. She's really not so bad in the manga, I've always felt sorry for her. Well, I guess I'll find out what happens in the next part. I'm really glad I found this fanfiction once it was mostly done. Yay for me! I don't think I would've been able to stand it if I'd found it before you'd written this much. Would've been torture! Torture I say! ;)
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Title: wow!!!!!!
Reviewed By: dimitri1217 On: August 13, 2006 03:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow you must continue writing i have fell in love with the wonderful stories you tell i swear it is magic what you do absolutley beautiful keep it up if you want to email me my email is jsairforcef15@aol.com i wil leave suggestions and help with editin i love to read and i am a poet so i also love to write but your style is pure genious
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Title: plz!!
Reviewed By: Witchlit [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2006 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i still gotta read tha last chapter but plz tell me ur workin on a part 3 *bats eyelashes and gives u a hoping expression* well yeah tha story iz AMAZING my personal favorite!!!!
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Title: This is good
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 16:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oi plz tell us that you are working on the third live and let die! I love both of them. I like that sesshomaru and inuyasha are brothers now. Sango and shippou better learn that Inuyasha does alot for them and if it wasn't for him they would be dead. and am a bit dissapointed in sango she needs to have sex and stay out of everyones bussiness! I so happy that Kaede and Miroku are so much more smarter. they don't give Inuyasha credit thats due to him. cause ya! don't know anything about him. can't wait for the thrid book to come out.
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Reviewed By: Lady_Ceri (offline) On: June 16, 2006 16:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read nearly all of your fanfics. I almost cried when you ended 'Blood and Tears.' I loved 'She's Like The Wind/The Power of Love.' And I will be going crazy waiting for you to write the third part of 'Live and Let Die.' I'm so glad I found your fics. They're absolutely wonderful.
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Title: Nice finish
Reviewed By: FarAwayEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 23:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice finish to this story. I like how you wrapped up several of the plotlines yet left it open enough for us to see what might be yet to come. It'll be interesting to see if Shippo goes along on the next trip and if so how he'll behave. Will he in turn take lessons on his youkai powers from Sesshomaru and Inuyasha? It'll be interesting to see how Miroku and Sango work their issues out, considering they are unable to really have sex until Naraku has been eliminated from the picture. Sango really has to deal with a lot of her resentment, and while she seems to have apologized and come to grips with Inuyasha being Kagome's mate, I have a funny feeling it's not the last time she'll be pretty upset and possibly lash out at Kagome, or even Inuyasha. Miroku MUST get over his tendency to flirt with and grope other women if he ever wants Sango to be willing to be with him---even if they can't take that big step towards sex. It'll be a nice way, I think, for Inuyasha and Miroku to bond, if he and the hanyou were to talk about what's expected of a man, at least somewhat. You've already set some of that up, so it'd be really nice to see how that develops. It might also make them more willing to trust one another with personal problems rather than just fighting together. I am also curious about the training that Inuyasha and Kagome will undergo. What other abilities are they hiding and how will they factor into their battles and travels. Nice hint there that Naraku will know about their mating. Lord only knows what type of twisted ideas he's coming up with to use that against them. I do think he'll be in for a bit of a surprise, because while that bug was watching them, well, you know, they never said anything about their new gifts. I don't think his new advantage will be worth as much as he thinks it'll be, but that could just be me. As long as they don't have control over those abilities, I guess it's possible. I do have to wonder, though, will Kikyo ever show up? And on one final note, nice touch with Kagome showing off a little to Grandpa. Silly old man oughta know when it's best to leave alone.
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Reviewed By: Inuashley [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 10:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story, I love the story line, also Great Lemonade. I have read lots of your stories and though this one is the one I chosse to review, the other ones were great also. You have a good imagination.
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Title: Live and Let die (part 2) Awakenings
Reviewed By: inutama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 17:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked your story, it had a strong plot and hope part 3 will come out soon. inutama.
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Title: The Grand Dungeon Master
Reviewed By: Hosagi Matissmo On: May 29, 2006 06:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A really well written story. I cant wait to see whats in store for Part 3.
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Reviewed By: inu hanyou nikkie On: May 27, 2006 14:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoot!! Whoot!! Kudos!! Cheerio!!! Whoot!! Bravo!! What an awesome chapter and a spectular end to the second book of the series Live and Let Die!!! You are sooo Totally AWESOME!! You rock Literary Goddess!! Though I am fairly sad to see this book end I cheer to see there will be more!! This is quite a pleasing and wonderful style that is going on!! I can't rave enough about your style, stories and talent. Damn that Miroku is at it again. He is going to overstep his limits with Inuyasha's tolerance pretty darn soon if he doesn't smarten up fast. I can see Inuyasha whipping the stuffing out of him to make his point very clear and have Miroku start being respectful towards him. And man is Sango ever seethingly super jealous of Kagome and Inuyasha's unwavering commitment and devotion to each other. Perphaps she should talk to Miroku and make it clear in no mistakable terms how she feels about his lack of respect and devotion to her. I appluaded Kagome for telling Sango off Loved the comment that she expected that kind of cruelty from Miroku but not from Sango. That finally hit Sango a little too late. I also cheered that Kagome reminded Sango why Inuyasha had Kagome curled up with him. And Wow to Miroku for also reminding Sango why they have to be better about this. And the love scene was sooo touching. Inuyasha can be tender and gentle at times (though.. don't mention it within earshot of him). I enjoyed Kagome's comment to the others afterwards as well- don't knock it til you tried it. lol.. that was great!! And the reunion with Shippo was sweet. I think maybe he is starting to accept the facts and coming to terms with it. Thank you also for having Myouga pop in with more information. Nice touch!! I liked how you had Grandpa behave. You never cease to amaze me with the accuracy you have with capturing the characters personnas. WOW!! I wonder if Inuyasha will bop Grandpa on the head one of these days. I wonder what new adventures and trails will Kagome and Inuyasha go through in the next book... Please Keep up the most excellent work!! Can't wait for the next book to start.
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Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 08:04 CDT
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LOVE IT!!!!!! Sango needs to learn how to shut up.So........ update soon!
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Title: Whoa!
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 19:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please 'del' may we want more! Thank you!
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Reviewed By: OpinioVana [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 10:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always I love your work. I can't wait until you have the inspiration and the time to start Part 3.
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Title: Loved it!!
Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 09:31 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, I LOVE your stories! What I love -the most- is your characterizations. The way they grow up, the way they interconect, their feedback. I LOVE your Inuyasha cause -with you- he is so natural and, at the same time, so Inuyasha. Love the way you "worked" Shippo, Sango and Miroku. I think that Sango can really be so dense and obsessed w/her "friendship" disregarding limits and rights. I think that this issue is not over... things do not end so easily! Hopefuly the 3rd. part will be up soon, ne?! HAHAHAHA... take the time you need but know that here you've got someone waiting anxiously f/your next post! Congratulations! Mage
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Title: KOnnichi ha
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW AWSOME OJB I LOVED IT WOOT WOOT WOOT! Can't wait for the 3rd part ^^ Woot, I loved the whole part were Inuyasha & Kagome came becak and it turned out that Sango & the guys probably heard them *SNicker* awsome joB!
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos (nsi) On: May 22, 2006 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
squeals with glee! this was an awsome end. foreshadowing bugs anyone? i'm loving how well you are capturing the characterization of everyone. i can completely see sango as being in character with her comments. she was raised as a slayer after all and she watched how much kagome hurt with inuyasha running to kikyou. she's not an easy one to convince that people (or half demons change) miroku loves her and wants to marry her and he still can't keep his hand to himself. the good thing there is he's maturing wonderfully and provides a wonderful grounding point for sango. and shippou! he's trying so hard in that breif moment but i'm sure it'll slip every so often. he is just a kid who was spoiled for quite a while. and poor gramps. his paltry powers are no match for the mighty hanyou! so much to look forward to in a next installment. will the third book be the last or will there be more to come?
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Reviewed By: KhayenRose [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love your stories! Cant wait for the next one! Keep up the Great work
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Reviewed By: jammies2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 20:23 CDT
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Cool chapter I am sorry to see this is the last chapter but I look forward to the next part of the series. I am sorta upset that Sango can't let things go and keeps saying things. I know she thinks of Kagome as a sister but she is taking things a bit too far. Thx for posting
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Title: OHAYOU FROM JAPAN!
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH! Another awsome chapter, I loved it so much, guess what I'm in Japan right now, woot it's awsome i love it, and your story also lol anyway nice job continue asap WOOT!
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Reviewed By: GuardianOfTheShikonNoTama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 06:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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My gosh, this story is so ausom, But if you dont continue it soon, I may just die from bordom! Please update?
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