| "Live and Let Die (Part 2): Awakenings" Reviews/Comments [ 151 ] |
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Reviewed By: ~ME On: April 07, 2006 18:48 CDT
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Here they come to save the daaay!!!!! *ahem* 'Mighty Mouse' flashback @_@ and another yummy lemon. Inu and Kag's new found powers.....interesting, and I can tell Sesshoumaru will 'be on the scene' as well. What Fun!! ^_~
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Reviewed By: jammies2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 16:26 CDT
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Cool chapter. I wonder who else heard Kagome's call? Besides the bear and Sessy? I am thinking maybe Kouga? I hope Sessy will be able to help them or find someone to help them so they don't get hurt. I also liked the interaction with Miroku & Sango maybe he will get that "curse" under control. To me it seems like he lets it rule his life when it should be the other way around... he shouldn't let the curse be in control he should have more control over it. Anyway great chapter keep writing!!!
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Reviewed By: inusbitch On: April 06, 2006 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN! How do you do it?! ur fanfics are the best! MORE, WRITE DAMN YOU! WRITE FOR YOUR LIFE!
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 19:27 CDT
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wahey! A sequel! And just as good as the first. Excellent.
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Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 16:03 CDT
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waaaa!!! that is the best cliffy i have ever read!!! please update!
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Reviewed By: kagomegirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 18:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is great. i think you should continue writing it. oh yeah by the way, will there be a sequel to blood and tears? i hope so because i want to know how inu and kag and their kids will be in the future when they come of age. so pls wrote a sequel.
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Title: Awsome!!!
Reviewed By: mel f On: April 05, 2006 01:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great just like the first one. I cant wait to find out what happens next chapter so please keep up the good work and update again soon.
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Reviewed By: FarAwayEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a great continuation picking right up where the other story left off. I like how you brought in the priest's torture of another youkai. Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship is well portrayed. Nice touch with the abilities, too. I can't wait to see what happens next, and if Sesshomaru will make any apperances. I'm sure he'd be thrilled to meet our friend the priest, now wouldn't he?
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Title: great!
Reviewed By: a dude On: April 04, 2006 21:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!! plz keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^
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Reviewed By: kokoro no miko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was SO glad to see a sequel to "Live and Let Die" (happy dance)! I'm glad to see that Shippou finalloy seems to be making an effort to get his stuff together. I have a horrible suspicion that the mysterious figure that showed up at the end of ch. 2 is that miserable priest who's been causing all that trouble. I can't help but wonder if there's some connection between him and Naraku, but I think that Inu's nose would have been able to tell about something like that. It would be sweet if he got himself in a jam trying to take on Naraku and Inu & Co. had to bail his sorry ass out! I can't help but wonder what other interesting things will be developing with Inu and Kagome....
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Title: GinaCat
Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 19:25 CDT
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I love it I can;t wait till you update soon
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Reviewed By: jammies2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 19:22 CDT
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Cool chapter thx for posting. This is a great story It was great the way the village treated them good and everything. It is also nice that they understand that not all youkai are evil. I see you mentioned Kouga I wonder when he will show up unless that was him at the end of the chatper. Hope they get back soon to the hut. I am also glad to see Shippou growing up a bit hopefully it will be fro real. Update soon please
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Reviewed By: Ciji On: April 04, 2006 16:38 CDT
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I find it a bit odd that in your fic 'Blood & Tears' you seem to have no problems with Inuyasha telling everyone in the fic about Kagome being raped and yet in this one everyone is so tight-lipped about what happened to Inuyasha. If anything, what happened to Kagome is FAR more personal...
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Title: frani1375
Reviewed By: frani1375 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 14:59 CDT
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excellent chapter. update soon.
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 12:34 CDT
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Okay, now. As your writing has progressed so has your penchant for evil cliffies! Not nice. I admit my curiosity is piqued about the mind connection. It would make sense to have it with her mate, but for Kagome to also be able to tap into other youkai is interesting...Hmmmm Kouga, Sesshomaru. This could be fun. Will Inuyasha get to see if he has purifying powers when they get to the next village and run into Kouga? Oh, the humor there. 'Hey, mutt face!' ZAP! Kadak moment. I'm left wondering if it was bandits like the headman warned about or it's the priest and his new 'followers' and if Kagome will once again be able to call out to Inuyasha in her need. The thing there is, her cry for help might call to his demon blood and if the priest thinks Inu's scary as a hanyou he'd be in for a real surprise to see full demon Inu. As always your work is a joy to read and helps me to work harder on my own writing. Your faithful minion waits with baited breath.
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