| "Live and Let Die (Part 2): Awakenings" Reviews/Comments [ 151 ] |
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Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 08:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH, i love this story its so good, but from the look of it , it isn't finished so can't wait to see your next capter or story!
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Reviewed By: Kierra W On: April 24, 2006 02:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*laughs* Again, poor Sesshomaru! He'll never get any sleep at this rate! *snickers* And thank goodness he's spared the embarassment of explaining the birds and the bees to Rin! Or worse, Jaken explaining it! *shivers* Great chapter, keep it up! ~Kia
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Reviewed By: KILLFRENZY On: April 23, 2006 17:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is indeed one of the best fan-fics I have ever read, and I read a lot. I must say that you have made Sesshomaru (sesshy, fullfy ^_^) out to be one of both honor/honour (depeding on where you live) and integrity. Whether that is good or bad, I cannot say, but I can say you capture much of his personality well. As for the reproductive talk between Kagome, Sango and Rin, you saved one of the favored 'bishies' from the one of the few, yet most effective 'torture' topics. I would have liked to see that happen, with Inu watching and laughing as his 'supierior' brother is falling victom to a conversation.
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Reviewed By: FarAwayEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 12:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh dear. Poor Sesshomaru should invest in ear plugs, don't you think? It might help him out in the long run, before he loses his sanity. As for Miroku, what did he expect? Sango to talk about how huge he is and how that turned her on or something? Sheesh. What a hentai. I felt so bad for Inuyasha, having to hear all about babies and periods and the like. He should have expected something along those lines, really. I mean, after all, Rin has a lot of questions, I'd think. She doesn't get to see girls very often and I don't care how much Sesshomaru knows, he's still MALE and that means he won't understand or know all of those things. And Jaken's just useless when it comes to such matters. Nice having Inuyasha lay down the law on how far our monk can go with Sango, at least for now. And he didn't stutter even once! I was proud of him. I have to wonder, though, with Kagome's new abilities, she had to know that they were in the other side, listening. Maybe that's why she decided to talk about how babies are brought into the world? It's just a thought. I can't wait to see what you do next. Just don't torture Sess too much!
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 11:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again you wrote a great chapter. I love the "birds and bees" talk between InuYasha and Miroku. This story just keeps getting better and better, also thanks for the quick update that keeps me going I look forward to your next update keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 11:24 CDT
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Yea I love this story YOU ROCK I can't wait till you update again
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 11:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know that I have been bad for not reviewing before, or if I did, for it having been so long ago. I only have the energy to keep up with reviewing a couple of fics at a time, but I just wanted you to know that I am really enjoying this fic and actually put it in my favorites when I found out that I would get notification. The events are well paced, the writing easy to read, and you make enjoyable reading about the smaller events. I love this last chapter as you take something fairly minor and jump back and forth, thereby keeping us from getting bored. Sesshoumaru's discussion with the headman the next village over was very well done. Ooh, Inuyasha turning various shades of red was so funny. However, he did learn a lot from his brother. I don't know when I will review again, but hopefully it will be a better review than this one. I try to do a good job. Authors who work hard to produce quality work, deserve quality reviews, though even the shortest review lets one know that someone has made the effort to let you know that they are enjoying the product of your labors.---Just a side note, the previous chapters with the bear and snakes were very exciting. Hopefully, I'll get to review some of your earlier chapter. Excellent work, Snow
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Title: All Caught Up
Reviewed By: FarAwayEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 00:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Boy, that was a lot of fun chapters there. It's nice to see Sess's good nature shine through without compromising what makes him who he is. I like how shy Inu is about being Kagome's mate, unless they're "busy." And nice touch with his handling of Koga. I can't wait to see what happens to them next!
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Reviewed By: Kierra W On: April 21, 2006 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*laughs* Poor Sesshomaru!! Great chapter, keep it up!! ~Kia
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Title: sleep? Never!
Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 14:13 CDT
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i highly doubt sesshy's with for sleep will be granted! if inu and kags had such a relaxing day, what better way to end the night? such a beautiful and romantic chapter. i liked how you didn't rush into having sango and miroku have sex. you really showed how insecure sango is with herself as a woman. she can slay a demon without blinking an eye, but men make her uncomfortable. it's also nice to see inu and kags have real time together. it's so hard for them to have couple time or talk time with the others around. and shippo! so cute! i only hope it lasts when everyone returns and he doesn't get jealous all over again, especially with how close inu and kags tend to get with each other. until next time! your minion awaits.
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Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 13:27 CDT
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I love this story You are a awesome writer all the fics rock I can't wait to find out what happens next
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 11:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and this chapter..Keep up the good work,love the double lemom. Update soon
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Reviewed By: FarAwayEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been meaning to catch up with the story here for awhile. I'm sorry I haven't been keeping up! Stupid homework keeps getting in the way. Anyways, I just picked up with the chapter where Koga shows up and the priest tries to steal Rin. That man is LUCKY Sess didn't just cut his head off with his whip. Yeah. I don't think he'd be a happy doggie demon lord(ooo he'd kill me for that name) if someone tried to do that! And nice show of Inu's new abilities forming from his connection to Kagome. Nice touch. I'll try to read the other chapters over the weekend. Boy am I tired of homework! ~Far Away Eyes
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Reviewed By: demoncatkuroro [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 20:43 CDT
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update soon! the story's really catchy!
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Reviewed By: inu hanyou nikkie On: April 20, 2006 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter, Literary Goddess!! Wowszers!! What a range of wonder writing and emotions with a brillant blend of descriptive details!!! I give you shout outs of Kudos and You Totally Rock!!! I enjoyed it very much. I liked how Sango praised up Kagome's cussing the priest out. Kagome and Inuyasha should feel proud. She can Cuss!! giggles. I thought it was a great touch to include the underhanded and very cowardly method the men and preist used to get Sango and Kagome. That was wonderful and realistic!! And Poor Kirara ... I think... I'm not to sure.. I guess poor because she couldn't help but man what a way to be subdued!! laughs. Catnip!! Thank you and THANK you for that wonderful and delightful touch!! I liked that you included Kirara in the deviousness of the priest. (at least she wasn't harmed by the priest and sutra.) I loved the interaction between Sesshoumaru and Rin and Jaken. That was sweet. And thank you for building the family ties between Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha. thank you. And the love scenes with Kagome and Inuyasha as hot and touchingly tender as ever!! This story is so exciting and so attention grabbing. I swear if it was a book I really wouldn't be able to put it down. I thrill to see the next chapter!! It was so like Inuyasha to offer his help to bring the village head to the cermony. What a grasp you have of all the characters personalities!! So true!! So realistic!! I wonder if Hojo is going to finally get it through his thick skull that Kagome doesn't want him and will Kagome get a backbone when it comes to overly pushy friends from her time? And what will go on at the secret Hot Spring for our most favourite couple? Hentai thoughts abound!! Please keep up the most excellent work and thank you for sharing this story with us!!
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