| "Live and Let Die (Part 2): Awakenings" Reviews/Comments [ 151 ] |
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Title: Keep up the GREAT work!
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is GRRRRRRREEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTT!!!!!!! You are a freaking ARTIST!
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Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 11:13 CDT
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KOOL!!!!!!!!!! More please!!!!!! It would be a nice gift to a girl with a broken arm...... yeah i broke my arm on monday yes this weeks monday, two days ago, riding my bike to school wiped out.... and now i'm sitting at home with a broken arm....typing with one hand..... anyways love your story update soon!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 13:08 CDT
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a bright spot in the torrential downpour that is the burgh! why do i have a sinking suspician that the group might just get that chance to test inuyasha's new abilities against purifying arrows. the mating just seems like something kikyou wouldn't be able to resist. poor miroku, just when i think he's maturing as a man he pulls something like that. maybe you should give him to inuyasha for a while! brilliant job! your minion awaits!
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Reviewed By: Danny Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 06:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter.I love how Miroku explains thing to Inuyasha and Kagome, also how Inuyasha is showing a little fear about caves (he never show fear)and I just loves how Sesshomaru took charge and killed those demons.Keep up the great work ...see u next update
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Reviewed By: Inu hanyou Nikkie On: May 15, 2006 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy smokes.. That was an awesomely powerful chapter!! The range of emotions in this chapter!! You have done it again Literary Goddess. Created another breath taking chapter!! I was wondering about how Inuyasha would react if he was faced with the possiblity of being in a cave of any type again and here was a scene that addressed my thoughts. Thank you for having Miroku and Sango not dig into Inuyasha when he showed the reluctance with the cave and then when they woke up. It was charged with emotions. and I loved the fight scene with Sesshoumaru. That was great.. Nice touch with the horror scene- youkai eating the dead bodies.. Nice and gruesome!! .. snickers.. I was having Nachos when I read it.. wonderful sound effects.. I really enjoyed this chapter. I was impressed with Sesshoumaru's attempt to revive the lost men and when he couldn't bringing them home to be buried properly. I am sercetly happy the horses weren't harmed. silly me. I liked the discussion about Inuyasha's 'spiritual' powers. that was rather informative. hmmm.. Will Inuyasha be an idiot an attempt to take on enemies now that he has the knowledge they won't be able to land an attack on him with his new and improved aura? pictures Inuyasha in super hero tights... goes to use her inhaler when she laughs a little too hard. When Kagome goes home how will the rest of her family accept the news of the bond and mating of Kagome and Inuyasha? and what are her meddlesome friends going to do? I laughed also when Jaken passed out. Had I been there I would have a grease pencil in my hands and doodling on his face while humming happily. The little bit at the feast with Inuyasha mussing on having a mate on one side and his brother on the other was a wonderful and touching scene. One of the things Inuyasha ever wanted now falling slowly and firmly into place. He is now a part of both worlds. Very touching and poignant. Kudos!! Whoot!! Whoot!! Whoot!! Bravissimo!! Magnifico!! Though I was sorely disappointed in Miroku being gross in wanting to see Kagome naked. How swiftly and easily he forgets his promises to Sango. sighs. Possibly he will always be a worse of a two-timer than Inuyasha could have ever been. Inuyasha was torn between two women only and Miroku is torn between will he be caught or not. But this is what makes your stories so very realistic!! Your grasp of the characters personalities as if it was Rumiko writing them. Please keep up the most excellent work and I thrill to see the next chapter!! You Totally rock!!!
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Title: Adore it!
Reviewed By: OpinioVana [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! Love it! Love it! The development of characters and bonds in the relationship of Inu/Kag from the first book through this one as well as the Mir/San explorations are great! Sess seems very interested in the relationship of Inu/Kag it makes one wonder just where his mind is going… if he is drawing any correlations between their relationship and possible future relationship of his own. Another question in the back of this readers mind if how will Shippou fit into this slightly new dynamic of pack order that has been developing throughout the "Live & Let Die" story line. As usual you are a great writer and produce terrific fan fiction. I can't wait until there's an update! Update! I know you are updating rather quickly but for one who is hooked on your writing it feels like forever between postings.
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Title: please!
Reviewed By: hoofprints On: May 14, 2006 10:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello! ur work is wonderfully done! hope i can read more of it...ive red the part 1 and its absolutelly amazing...im a big fan of sesshoumaru...i really hope that ull write a fic about his luv lyf
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 10:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another rockin chapter. Will Miroku ever change (hope not) keep up the great work...update soon!!!
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: sunbeam On: May 14, 2006 10:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ive read the part 1 of this story and it was marvelous! hope you continue to write wonderful fics. plis update soon
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Title: YEA!
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 09:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah another awsome chapter I loved it soooooooooooooo, much lol great job I look forward to the next ^^
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Reviewed By: inu hanyou nikkie On: May 09, 2006 18:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh.. my.. You added poetry!! What a pleasant and beautiful touch. Ponders will Inuyash show a poetic side? Writing Haiku's maybe? Imagines Inuyasha saying some Shakespearian sonnets while wearing a doublet, collar ruff, breeches, cod piece and stocking with elf shoes and plumed hat.. then proceeds to laugh herself into a hysterial, tear sodden form of laryngitist... Well Literary Goddess, I am in awe of you!! This chapter was brillant and thank you for touching on the questions that I had from the last chapter. I loved the elder Stallion.. Yuusho. He was described as beautifully as the Stallion from Lord of the Rings that Gandolf used as his steed. Is there a web site that you used to picture the stallions from? Would they be similiar to Freeisans? I loved that Sesshoumaru recognized the Stallion that was a delightful touch. I am sooo floored by your talent and writing and story!! I don't think I can express myself properly to you about how much I adore this story and all others by you!! Lets try these... Bravissimo!! Bravissimo!! Grandioso! Magnifico! Whoot!! Whoot!! Right on!! Odoroku-beki!! Kekkou!! Subarashii! (I'd add Russian but the characters don't look right) I liked how Miroku tried to get Sango to stop and Kagome tried to stress to her that she should drop the matter. I can see that Sango is not one who is going to be able to take a hint ever. Prephaps if Inuyasha or Miroku finally gets pretty blunt with her... I was also ticked that she again couldn't resist the chance to interfere with Kagome's and Inuyasha relationship. I can see it come to a point where Kagome or even Inuyasha might tell her that she is causing more harm than Kikyou has done just to get her point across to Sango I was amazed that Miroku brought up the promise Sango made to Inuyasha after the bandits. I also liked how Sango has been subtle to Miroku about his lecherous habits. Sango certainly doesn't have a high opinion of Inuyasha when it comes to many things. She has allowed herself to be blinded to his truths by her righteous role she took as Kagome' sister and protector (heart). Another youkai attacking. hmmm. what could this be.. smiles big.. Chance to Sesshoumaru in fight mode!! yummy. Please keep up the most excellent and masterful work!! I can't wait for the next update!! and Thank you!!
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 10:40 CDT
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ahhh, my fix for your writing has finally been sated, and well worth the wait. (it just felt long to me for some reason!) i love how this is unfolding. you're really focusing on the struggle for the acceptance of the relationship between inuyasha and kagome. they always thought their friends would just agree and now they are faced with the questions and jealousy of sango. i don't think she is at all out of character, she was, afterall, raised to slay demons. in her mind she may have trusted inuyasha as a fighter or protector but not someone that could have an intimate relationship like a pair of "humans" could have. and miroku...i'm proud of the monk. he's beginning to see that while he may enjoy getting reactions out of his shy friend, when the time comes, teasing is not the best way to earn ones confidence. the struggles only make the story sweeter, a way for not only inuyasha to overcome his insecurities but a way for the others to see past the exterior and really become trusted companions. now inuyasha will have to face a whole new set of challenges with kagome's friends in the modern world. i can't wait. wonderful!
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Reviewed By: Danny Gir [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 09:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this chapter. What is Sango's problem anyway. I understand her concern but like Mirkou said she need to let it go, now.....Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 12:12 CDT
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I can't wait to find out what happens next as always it was awesome
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Reviewed By: Inu hanyou nikkie On: May 02, 2006 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Argh!! I am soo ticked now. I just want to use Sango's weapon on her. Sango just had to bug Kagome about the other night then turns around and open her big mouth to the lecher. Boy she can't be trusted with private intimate personal revealations can she? And double darn her to heck for still being Inuyasha would harm Kagome. She kept pressing the issue that Inuyasha will harm her proving that she still doesn't trust Inuyasha and still has a pretty low opinion and keeps putting Inuyasha down. I guess her training just runs too deeply to really and truly see that Youkai and Hanyou are not all evil and need to be destroyed. But Karma does work in mysterious ways. I think Miroku groping other women after what he and Sango shared was a nice punishment for her. And so incredibly true to his character. As proven when he made his first marriage proposal the next day he was flirting and trying to get with other women. His word really doesn't mean that much. I foresee a bit of bad and pretty rocky life's speed bump coming up for our travelers. Angst is good the body. Unfortunetly I know Miroku will have to open his mouth and taunt Inuyasha with the Full Moon incident. More than likely will cause a nice and strained rift between Inuyasha and Kagome and between Kagome and Sango. I can't believe she would blab that to him. Perphaps Sango should reconsider being married to Miroku.. Wouldn't that just kick him in the ego and butt. Miroku is such a nasty player and -sorry to say bit of a man whore. He will have to do something pretty amazing to prove to Sango that he loves her and will be faithful-instead of just passing it off as a curse/bad habit - it isn't really my fault for my behaviours. Though I do have my concerns that a man like him can be faithful to just one woman.... Can he really settle down with just one woman? Inuyasha is trying to trust Miroku but he knows all too well about the monk. Poor Inuyasha having to be reminded about what he is after having a moment of peace and acceptance. What a kick that was. Will Kagome be able to re-assure Inuyasha that is she truly okay and not harmed at all and that being with his Youkai self is a very good thing. Wondering if there is a Jaken butt kick in the future... But I really like how you kept Jaken in character! And you know what all this means... ne? That you, Literary Goddess, have the most amazing grasp and feel for each of the characters pretty much like what Rumiko has created. I really can't say that there is any OCC in the story. You are truly amazing!! I still am in awe of your talent!! I love this story and your writings!! Thank you so much for writing this and sharing the story with all of us!! I eager await your next update and please, Please keep up the most excellent work!!! Thank you!!! Thank you!! Thank You!!!!
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