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Title: WOW UR REALLY GRATE THIS WAS AN AWSOME STORY AND U ALREADY HAVE A SEQUAEL!!! IM A FAN OF MOST OF UR STORYS! ok....so i only read 3 so far but give me a break u write long ass storys and i luv yah for that! (AS A WRITER!!!! (0.0) NO WRONG IDEAS PLEAS
Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 20:46 CDT
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MWAHAHAHAHAHA ...im weired......(0.o)
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Reviewed By: crzy for ur fan-fic On: June 16, 2008 00:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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this waz a very good and intresting story and ur a mean very mean cliffhangerss u better have a second story explaining her father and how kikyo gets her revenge that would be awesome if she went crazy...though...she was already a little off and then she finds out about her father dude why am i telling u how to write ur own story im sure u have ur making a compelling story chow now and hope u come and write even better and more dramatic storys cuz u have a lot of talent lookin foward to readin more of ur work!!!!!!!!!! chelsea lugo
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Reviewed By: pretty_princess_2k6 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2008 13:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVED IT! This is goin' onto one of my favorites. So far, I have like 4 of your stories as one of my fav'. Lol, you're amazingly talented. I hope you can write more stories because I know I'll miss this after I read the rest of your stories. Keep up the good work! =D
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Reviewed By: Vejhed [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 22:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!!! I love that song so much!!!!! It's one of my favorites!!! Also, great story. I've had it on my favorites for a few days now.
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Title: Continuation-of my longest review ever
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 06:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok this is officaly the longest review I have ever writen yet...I have never had to go to a second thind to write on....o-well but like I was saying....I hope you have the next story coming up soon...and Miroku and Sango are going to be a couple....I so happy...those to are always suppose to be together.....so I have a question are you going to find some one for Sessy for the next story.....I hope he finds some one nice.....same with Naraku...this may be the only time ever say that but Naraku in this story desurves some one good....please say you have already started the other story....and thankyou for writeing this story...I was realy someing to make me write a review this long just think of that...hehe....ok...I'm done now...thanks again.....Nyuka......P.S. I remembers something when I was scoring you and its the reason I gave you and 9 on creativity.....I don't know why but this story realy reminded me of Nany mac fee...exept that it wasn't the Nany the Owner got with and they were his children....ok never mind this story is totaly original and I change my answer to a 10 ....so eggnor the scoring you got a ten it was just my stupened mind making connections....ok now I'm realy done....Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 06:05 CDT
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Ok just a warning I have alot to say and I hope 4000 words is enoph....hehe.....I started reading this story because you suggested it from your other fic and I was all like I'll check it out, it sound like a good fic......I was sooooooooooo happy when I looked at all the chapters and the last once said end chapter befor I started reading it.....because what I realy love to do if find realy great fic's that are already finished...then I don't have to suffer when the story stops and I waiting for the next chapter update.....I have to be honest with you I am not the best reader in the world and I very slow at reading but I will say this when I started reading this I read it for almost three days strait exsept to get a phew hours of sleep and my family so cruly draged me a way to go to the movie theators...*sigh*.....I don't want to sound like a perfectionist but it realy started to bugg me when I was reading in meny places that it would make sence for and 'in' there was instead a 'on'...I don't know if that was your intention but I'll tell you after reading 61 chapters of that it was starting to drive me crazy....hehe...............ya know I don't hate Kikyo from the series, I realy feel sorry for her but its the fic that I read that realy make me hate her.....I would say about 95% of Inuyasha viewers hate her and the other 5% don't hate her because they have pity for her....what do ya think of them numbers?.....hehe......I thought it was koo that you made Naraku the Hero...he realy doesn't get to be the hero that often....mostly because he is the Ideal bad guy....hehe....with Kikyo by his side.......ya know what I notice is that you made the real brother of the character there cousin....did you do that on perpous...well of course you did your the author any ways......I realy want you to know what this fic did to me I was paranoied for the charaters....*sigh*...I realy get caught up when I'm read fic's....at points I was laughing, and sighing, and crying, and heart broken, and nerves, and peranoied, and times I felt like shoting the Author...no affence I mind you......like after got hit by that car....How could you do that to my heart I thought I was going to die when You had Kagomes dream sequence....I was like no, no this can not me he can't be dead it just wasn't right.....I was ten seconds from turning of my computer and erasing this story form my fav's, just out of pur pain for Kagome and Inuyasha, the reason I didn't was cause I scroled down to check on how meny chapers were life and since there was to meny for him to have died and not enoph for me to call it quits I dissided to keep read....and boy I was glad I did....I was glad that Inuyasha didn't die but was in a coma insted, but ooooowwwww...Things just seemed to get worse befor they got better and I was so angree...there as even a moment that I had to get up and pace my room and say out loud to my self all the stuff Kikyo was about to get away with...(this was after she told the doctors to unplug Inuyasha and she had the Shikon Jewel and was heading to her fathers lawers office).....I was so grrrrrrrrr angree......I also thought my hear stoped when Inuyasha got hit by the car right after he said thouse thing to Kagome.....O my gosh I was...I don't know I had alot of thing going on in my head....soooooooo did Myoga and Keida (I don't think I speld those right o-well) get their Jobs back??....I shur if they hadn't already then they soon would...XD....Ya know about the sequal are ya going to be writeing soon since its summer or have you already started ....I'll check it out....that was tarible how could you do that right at the end of the story that is soooooo not koo....Inuyasha and Kagome need to be married and her father is alive and needs to go talk to her....how could he fake his own death like that....and didn't in the begging you say that he died 3 years ago and that they just found his will...ya might want to fix that...hehe....I don't know if I can fit the rest. |
Reviewed By: Inuyashalover41000031AKA rad coco On: May 16, 2007 17:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this story a wile ago, and i absolutly loved it! please mail me when you write the reveiw, my e-mail tinkerbelljr10@comcast.net thnkx ttyl Inuyashalover41000031AKA rad coco
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Reviewed By: silvermoon maru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 22:46 CDT
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So good so far but at the end of chapter 26 you said that Yuka is married with Hojo and in an earlier chapter you said it was Ayumi... Well I'm not done reading yet... I'm having so much fun with this fic =)
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Title: update please!
Reviewed By: heather_12 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i love the story and all but this is killing me to have to wait this long for the next chapters i am also reading open your eyes and suddenly love and i read a few others but i like suddenly love and there's something so special about her i know you have schoool and everything but its the march break can you update there's something so special about her and suddenly love and if you have time open your eyes i check mostly every day to see if any of thoose three have been updated but usually none thanks for the cool stories to read i really enjoy them:) yah if you could do a squel that would be soooo cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thanks again bye!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 04:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this!!!!! i was in tears when i thought inuyasha was dead!!!! thank god he wasnt!!!! and dam keep writing PLEASE you have to T-T n ha YES kikyo in jail hahahahahahahaha
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Title: Cheesiest Smile
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 21:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the not ending so much that I couldn't stop grinning if I wanted to...lolz...it made my heart soar so high! Can't wait for the summer and awesome job making Kikyo pay badly! Maybe in the sequel she can figure a way to break out of jail and get revenge on the happy couple!... Just a thought...tee-hee* So evil! Hey AWESOME JOB again times a million and you should recommend my newest creation to your readers... just a thought, that's after you check it out yourself thought- okay I'm rambling again and like I said the sequel would hold so many things and I hope your arm gets better with therapy! Much love!
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Title: I FRIKIN LOVE IT
Reviewed By: Kawii-Love [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 17:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol love da kids they were on point!!! lol and inuyasha is a ditz..wow well love the story please update soon!
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Title: AWSOME!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Kikyo~Must~Die On: January 28, 2007 22:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I CAN"T WAIT TILL SUMMER!!!!!!! I"ve looooove this story and i know i'm gonna love the sequel, I love the twist you put at the end, totally awsome, start writing the sequel sooooon pleeease *Puppy dog eyes* I love all your storys and i can't wait to read the next one!
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Reviewed By: 2qt4uboi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 18:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THE LAST CHAPTER!!! I ALMOST CRIED! THANKS FOR REVIEWING MY STORY TOO! MAKE THE SEQULE COME QUICK!!!
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Title: Amazzzing
Reviewed By: BrittBratt On: January 23, 2007 16:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cant tell you how happy that chapter made me lol im so glad he woke up!!!! Update soon please =]
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Reviewed By: 2qt4uboi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 23:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANK YOU FOR THE SEQULE!!! BUT KNOWING YOUR STORIES YOU WILL PROBLAY GET INTO THE SEQULE AND MAKE IT LONG ILL LOVE IT ALMOST AS MUCH AS THE ORINGAL!!! I UPDATED MY STORY READ IT PLEASE!!!
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Reviewed By: ashpea124 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 16:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is such a good story i love it!!!update soon
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Title: AWSOME!
Reviewed By: Katelynn On: January 22, 2007 12:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY LORD that last line is PRICELESS! I love it. And a sequal! Oh my gosh I can't wait! Hurry Hurry!
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Reviewed By: CVA On: January 22, 2007 11:36 CST
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You have to write some more. Please!! I love this story!
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Title: *Dancing In My Boy Shorts* from Excitement!
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2007 23:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The title describes exactly what I did when I was reading this chapter! Who knew that Kagome and the family could do so many crazy things inside of a hospital for peet sakes! I nearly died from laughter and couldn't stop squealing and snorting from every sentence that past... YAY! I'm getting a sequel! lolz...I can't wait for the next and finale because judging from what Inuyasha said it's going to be the major turning point of this entire story! Kinda confused about that sentenced after Kagome got the results that said something about Ken, who was talking there and what did they mean? Would that be uncovered in the last chappie? And what did Sango and Miroku do while away and how bad was that boarding school the youngins were forced to go to? I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THE LASTEST UPDATE! Here's to good cheers and rest- get alot while you can- and AWESOME JOB!
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Title: OH MY WORD!
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 09:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHY?! WHY DOES THIS HAVE TO HAPPEN TO THE DEAR AND BELOVED INUYASHA!? I nearly cried after the first few sentences and then I remembered that you couldn't be that evil to do that to Kags. Sequel can so happen anytime but as long as there is a short one it'll be good...that all depends on how this ends, right? lolz...something must be done, Inuyasha should just wake up right before the doctors pull the plug and Kikyo must fall! I can't wait to see what the next maybe 2 chapters will hold... great job, relax a bit whenever you can and get enough rest aside from school! GREAT JOB!
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Kikyo~Must~Die On: January 19, 2007 01:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh, i almost cried when i read the beganing, you scared the crap out of me on that oe. and Kikyo is such a bitch i mean dang how could she kill Inuyasha ,please update sooon and don't kill inuyasha pleaseeeee, i love this story and the plot i have been hook since i've started reading this story it is soooo freakin awsome please update soon and please please do a sequal please!!!! Update sooon, peace!
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Title: PLZ A SQUEL!!!
Reviewed By: 2qt4uboi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 23:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLZ OR I WILL CRY NOT REALY THOUGH!!!
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Reviewed By: animaygurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 20:19 CST
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this just keeps getting better and better!! i would love it if you did a sequel, i can't believe the stroy is almost finished!
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Title: EEEEK!
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2007 07:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved it until i got closer and closer to the ending- That was the most appropriate title for the chapter! HOW COME KAMI GOTTA WORK AGAINST KAGOME AND INUYASHA! It's no fair! Could Miroku and Sango use this time to patch things up for good? What's gonna happen to Kikyo and did Naraku find his freedom? Who did Sesshy hook up with? OMG only 2 chaps left and so much stuff- a short sequel pretty please- or maybe a sequel that's a one-shot - this story can go onto so many other levels! Loved it and can't wait for the next update!
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Title: THE Big SHIBANG!
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2007 05:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally the moment we have all been waiting for... the truth and the BIG SHIBANG! How is Inuyasha going to ruin Kikyo for the rest of her life... I gotta see this next chapter as I sit so close to the computer screen and on the edge of my chair... awaiting the resolution but there are so many untied endings but luckily like you said 3 more chapters should cover it! AWESOME JOB...can't wait!
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Reviewed By: 2qt4uboi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 22:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for reading my story! It means a lot because your like my FAVE writer EVER you are even better then famous ones! Your stories ROCK!!! I LOVE them!!! This story better have a sequel or I will be so DEPRESSED!!! Make The new chapter SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: phathod [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 02:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story delivers an amazing storyline, and intimate character emotion, the characters are completely fleshed out and allow the reader to get inside the character's head. My only gripe is that character and story development occasionally are not fleshed out and major scenes seem to fly by. Ex: The hospital was a very quick scene and should have been much more intimate with the condition of Kagome's amnesia. What caused it? Head trauma, mental oppression of memories? Fear? Other than that this story is a must read for any true lover of the Inuyasha series. *10/10*
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Reviewed By: Kikyo~Hoe~Must~Die On: January 07, 2007 22:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINALLY!!!!!! Man i thought Inuyasha would never figure it out, i'm soooo happy and please update soon i can't wait to read what Inu does, update really soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ashpea124 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 00:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it sooooo good i dont want the story to end. plz update soon i love this story it is so intresting
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