| "Violation of Honor" Reviews/Comments [ 497 ] |
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Reviewed By: annnn On: July 27, 2016 17:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ABSOLUTELY STUNNING STORY
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Reviewed By: millinna On: September 10, 2015 22:43 PDT
Comment/Review:
IÂ&Aci rc;´ve read about half of this and Im
realy liking it so far. Exceptional writing, realy. I just want to
point out a small error. When a woman is menstruating,
she´s NOT having her fertile period.
They are just not the same. A womans is fertile about 14 days after
shes had her period.
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Title: 39
Reviewed By: grimmichi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2013 19:53 PST
Comment/Review:
yay! Oda is dead too!!!! and they got married! O_O you are still going to post the last chapter right? Right? Please? I have to know what happens!!! |
Title: 38
Reviewed By: grimmichi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2013 18:51 PST
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finally he is dead!!! |
Title: 31
Reviewed By: grimmichi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2013 19:09 PST
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don't get me wrong, i am glad that Inuyasha has feelings for someone other than kagome, but it kinda pisses me off that he just passed her off and isn't really thinking about her at all. I mean she is his best friends, seems kinds cold, even in the face of his new romance. |
Title: 30
Reviewed By: grimmichi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2013 18:11 PST
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YES! finally that bitch is dead!!!!! and what a nice punishment too! but what happened to Kagome and Miroku? why were the holy people the only one's affected? |
Title: 28
Reviewed By: grimmichi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2013 14:17 PST
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yay!!! a much better reunion then the last! |
Title: 26
Reviewed By: grimmichi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2013 12:15 PST
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*pout* no reunion yet.... but at least kagome figured out or has her suspicions of who her silent lover is.... |
Title: 25
Reviewed By: grimmichi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2013 11:04 PST
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O_O poor sesshomaru.... I hope kagome and sessh make up... I wonder how Uchuu will react when he sees that his fellow prisoner is THE Sesshomaru. I also wonder what will happen when Kagome shows up in the western citadel (if that is where she is going) when she goes to give Rin Shin.... |
Title: 24
Reviewed By: grimmichi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2013 19:22 PST
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GRRRR why do you always do that! it is sooooo frustrating!!!! why can't you let just 1 thing run smoothly between Sesshomaru and Kagome?! AND you are going to bring Oda down on her village, she doesn't even have her eyesight back yet!!!!! your story may be very good good, but it is often, as I said, VERY hair ripping frustrating! |
Title: 21
Reviewed By: grimmichi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2013 09:20 PST
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THOSE FOOL MONKEYS!!!!! Uchuu warned them! and they still fell for the bitch's trick and from the sounds of it let Iku escspe!!!! grrrrr so damn frustrating!!!!! but, Go Yumiko! |
Title: 20
Reviewed By: grimmichi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2013 08:34 PST
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hahaha according to the herb woman, Kagome's most recent journey has led her in a complete circle! I wonder if she will get back to the village before Inu or at the same time... maybe you plan on having him escort her home... how did Sayu become blind when she was a child? you know I am most eager to see what becomes of the barrier situation. If they go through the hole then the monkeys can use it as a bottle neck and kill the enemy in smaller more manageable numbers... |
Title: 19
Reviewed By: grimmichi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2013 00:29 PST
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SHIT! NO!!!! please let it be a trap! now that the outburst is out of the way, WHY are you so damn cruel! she is sooooo close to getting her eyesight back and he isn't even going to be there? and hasn't he thought of the fact that she might realize he is one and the same when they meet again? she has felt his power, his body, seen his hair (kinda), has a decent idea of how tall he is, how does he think that she won't find out sooner rather than later? |
Title: 18
Reviewed By: grimmichi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2013 12:44 PST
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ummmm I thought the general consensus earlier in the story was that having sex would take away her miko powers... so if they didn't get taken away but mixed with Sesshomaru's power... what is going to happen to it? will it still be usable, stronger, weaker, completely different? I am glad that shippos and rin got out of there, but what about Ginta and hakaku? |
Title: 17
Reviewed By: grimmichi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2013 11:38 PST
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DAMN! they did miss her and sesshomaru is about to leave Kagome before she knows its him!!!!! |
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