| "She Who the Prophecy Foretold" Reviews/Comments [ 489 ] |
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2007 18:11 EST
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I like the ending of this, it's so sweet! And I hope you all find out what's wrong w/ your mom. I'll let you know when I post it. Still stuck on chapter 6 (not enough time to write along with everything else) and I'll try to work on it tomorrow. I'm cooking pancakes at the Latin Club Pancake Breakfast on Saturday, so that's out. grr... everything is out to kill my story. >.
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2007 17:27 EST
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How fun! Everyoone sleeping together like that! I love it! It's so cute! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: deviousauthoress1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2007 13:02 EST
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Hey...are you still alive? Just checkin'...
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Monk-Miko On: November 22, 2007 22:18 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry for the late update. Just getting out of school soon and there are alot of test which I am getting tired of. I just read the last two chapters and I must say wow. I have been trying to get to them but today was the first time I could get to them. They were so good. Especially with that little lemon. I really can't believe Kagome cut herself with Sesshoumaru's claws. And than she all of a sudden get claws. I think that she might just turn into a demon for Sesshoumaru since we all know now that she is meant to mate with him. I do wonder how Rin got healing powers and powers like a pristess. Ohhh I just can't wait to see why. I think that Rin might be the pristess that spoke the prophacy but also maybe Kagome's ancestor. That's the only thing I could think of that would make Rin have almost that same exact powers as Kagome but then if you think about it, if Rin had almost the same exact signiture then she may also be Kagome's daughter some how. Though I would go with my first two. I think that the children are getting along great and now Rin feels like she is needed. Sango was right to give Miroku that speech cause he really needs to act on his feeling. Sesshoumaru's beast told Kagome his darkest secret, I thought that it was so sweet that he told her. Now he knows that Kagome may mate with him. I do wonder what Miyoga has go tell Kagome that is so important. It must be from the dream of Sesshoumaru's mother. I just can't wait for the next chatper. It is getting so good. I can't wait to find out. Your chapters have been getting really good. And that thing with the jewel shards, I wonder what would happen if Naraku finds out, but then he may not find out because he killed Kanna. You have been doing a wonderful job cause each chapter goes into alot of detail and I like that. Hope to see another soon. Happy Thanksgiving I hope that it was really good.
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Reviewed By: inuluver4everhotmailcom [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2007 10:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It has a great story line. Its defiantly creative and enjoyable. As to the question about rin and kagome i think that kagome is actualy a reincarnation of rin not kikyo! at lease i hope so cuz shes so evil unlike kagome. it would make a lot more sense
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2007 19:57 EST
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So is your mom getting any better? I hope you both are. I'll start posting when I get my 10th chapter finished. By then, I should have someone to revise and edit it. I'm also posting it on my deviantART. jennifibber.deviantart.com is where it will be soon. I like this chapter. Hell, I like the whole thing. You're doing great.
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2007 15:09 EST
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I'm sorry you still don't feel better! But, guess what? I'm writing a story and my friend Sarah says she loves it. I love the chapter that you just put up. Can't wait for more. Have a happy, healthy Thanksgiving!
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Reviewed By: Little Rini On: November 20, 2007 09:51 EST
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Hey feel better soon. Don't die on us. Besides, there's a little girl in your house waiting on her mommy to get well. I always wondered if Rin was Kagome's ancestor. It would mean that Kagome really WOULD be made for Sesshoumaru because if he hadn't revived Rin she would never have been born. If she were Kagome's little sister then she wouldn't have been out alone. Anyway, Kirby says (>'.')> FEEL BETTER SOON!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2007 03:26 EST
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Heehee! I think I know what it is... In fact I thought I knew what it was a couple chapters ago. Rin is an incarnation of Kagome. And she's going to kick ass once she get's trained! (And marked) And her father has to be some sort of 'high class' person type thing. I can't tell if he's a demon or not. I think he is though. If he was one of the four lords then it would make sence for him to go back to the past and hide his feelings and the picture away. And, and...! Inuyasha's going to get trained by Sess! Along with Shippo! Yay! I also think Sango's gift will be to get her brother back, Miroku's gift will be to live in peace without his hand(Or keep his hand for protection and not have to worry about it swollowing him and everyone else up), and Sess's gift will be to have Kagome stay with him forever. As in, a long DEMON life. And they'll kick some spider butt and life happily-ever-after!!! Yay! She'll even stay in the past with Sess and her dad. But she will live long enough to go visit her mom in the future when 500 years pass her by. Hahaha! Look at me! Putting words in your story! ;p Anyway, I hope you feel better! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: dragonwitch2468nsi On: November 20, 2007 01:19 EST
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I have 2 guesses 1 being that Rin is the incarnation of Kagome which would be sad because then Rin would have to die before Kagome was born, the other is that Kagome's father is the Lord of the North or what ever wich one that Sessy said kept to himself and noone saw. It would also explain the instincts Kagome has and why it is so easy for her to accept Sessy youki. That would also explain part of the transformation that she will go through, also if he was a lord he would have servents and thoose would be the people surpriced when Kagome and the gang shoed up. I hope i am not spoiling anything for you though by giving this theory though. Update soon so we can find out what is to come.
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Reviewed By: deviousauthoress1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2007 00:48 EST
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Hmmm.....I think that Rin is either a relative (maybe a half sister or something), or yet another reincarnate of Kikyou.
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Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2007 23:54 EST
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yay! you're back!!! I missed you too! I didn't find a thing out of place, but then again, I was just trying to enjoy the story! mmmmm sesshomaru..... yum. hope you're feeling better! Once again, thanks for your grammar abilities!
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2007 23:47 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Chapter 50. I can't imagine that kind of dedication. I'm very thankful that you are so dedicated and I'm sure more than a few other's agree with me. Very wonderful chapter. I love how Sesshoumaru tries to reassure Kagome that she is the one he whats and no one else. It's so cute. He's so tender with her but the tenderness still holds so much passion. Anywho, here's my theory. I think Rin is somehow related to Kagome. I haven't figured out how yet but I couldn't help but catch that thing Kagome's father said about how they would all be suprised when they found out who Rin was. I really love that you included her. I can't wait for the next chapter. Get well soon.
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Reviewed By: little rini On: November 19, 2007 09:38 EST
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Feel better soon. Are you ok?
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Reviewed By: cassandralynn30 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 13:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I hope that you and your family get better soon. This is a excellent story. I started reading it and it just sucked me in. That's a good thing ..Well, please update as soon as you can. I look forward to continue reading this story. Cassandralynn30
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