| "She Who the Prophecy Foretold" Reviews/Comments [ 489 ] |
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Reviewed By: deviousauthoress1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 02:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!! MORE! MORE! MORE!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 01:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again you have proved you excellence as a writer. I had the feeling that the pups would be smart and articulate and adorable in person and you did a great job of proving that. I wonder if Shippo already has some sort of mark on Kagome, perhaps a kitsune variety preformed differently than the one the pups made... but I will have to wait... and then you had to go and make the wait all that more difficult with that cliffhanger! **pouts**
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Title: great
Reviewed By: Monk-MIko On: October 01, 2007 22:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh, this story is just getting to good. I thought one of Sesshomaru's sons would say something like that. I hope Shippo doesn't get into any trouble while he is out there alone. He must have a strong connection with Kagome. I can't wait for the next chapter. I will continue to read this story until the very end. I hope to see an update soon cause I just can't wait anymore.
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: October 01, 2007 18:14 EDT
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Oh! i'm loving it. Its amazing. And now what had kagome in such a state of shock? can't wait to find out what will happen next
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Reviewed By: little189 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 18:08 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwwwwwwwww..... i love it i love it.....it really is hard to find a good s/k fic that is really good......kudos to you....im sooo excited for this fic your don=ing and excellent job......have fun writing and update soon
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Reviewed By: Ladydot On: September 30, 2007 14:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is absolutely amazing! The plot is extremely creative. Its hard to find a good s/k fic without the same cross or borderline of same ideas and all. Your fanfic is wonderful and i hope you update soon so i can find out what will happen next!
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Title: Very Nice!
Reviewed By: Dragon from hell [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 03:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon!!! Your story is very good! ^_^
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Monk-Miko On: September 29, 2007 12:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story just gets better and better. I just can't wait and see what happens when Kagome wakes up. The suspence is killing me.LOL. I hope that there is a new chapter soon. I seen that you out done yourself and did 2 chapters in one day. When I got to the last chapter I was like Ohh man I have to keep reading this story. Hope there is another chapter soon. Can't wait to see it.
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2007 11:30 EDT
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this is a good story so stick with it and update!
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Reviewed By: deviousauthoress1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2007 22:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Really, really good so far! I love it, I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2007 19:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am delighted that you updated so quickly. I hope that you continue to do so. It seems like Kouga is very in character except that he has never shown any fear of Sesshoumaru that I know of. (I never read the manga, so if it's there, I wouldn't know) I don't mind this in the least of course, I actually like it. It promises some fun later on... So now we have Naraku and Kouga conducting a Japan-wide Miko-hunt... that image amuses me. I like the marks the pups put on Kagome... I can't wait 'till Sessh sees it... that should swill up his emotions nicely. I wonder what kind of marks he will put on her. Will Shippo? Poor Shippo... that was really nice of Inuyasha to get that pillow. I hope Inu can find happiness... If I could draw I would... well I can draw on paper, but I have no hope with computers... perhaps I will try my patience with my old scanner... your writing dose inspire some vivid imagery, though i still am unsure abut the mirror thing, I think I want to draw the pups first... that that mark. No promises though, I haven't tried my drawing skill in years. UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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Reviewed By: little189 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2007 16:47 EDT
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awwwwww sesshys fallin in love.....or at least figuring it out......exciting face......that whole dog pile thing was soooo cute......are we going to find out what exactly those line thing do to kags?........and ar you going to rearange them later.....she could look like sesshy that would be nifty....ny ways good job
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2007 05:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love the way you have done this story. I loved the dog pile at the end of he latest chapter! I too was sorely disappointed when there was not another chapter waiting for me and I hope that you update really really soon! The only thing that really bohers me... well I don't really like he Inuyasha and Kikyo stuff, but I am used to such things from Sess/Kag stuff... but as I was saying, I don't think that Sessh and Inu's dad would be so cruel to his son and mate... but oh well... I guess isn't a main focus in the story... I just like to think of the old dog as a kind an wise... eh, it doesn't detract from the fic and I don't think it would work without it... it's worth the sacrifice fo that character. So it looks like Sessh and Kagome and hs pups may just make a family... I think Sessh will have a hard ime avoiding it if he wants to with not only his beast, but 7 pups and Rin breathing down his neck over the subject. I can't wait to see Shippo take his place. This is going to be a big family... Well at least that is what it looks like... and is Kouga going to enter into this at all? Not that he is needed... he is after all an entertaining plot device...
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Reviewed By: little189 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2007 01:45 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oohhhh this is really good.....how exciting i love finding new interesting stories.....nyways keppe doing a great job and i am looking forward to new updates
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Monk-Miko On: September 27, 2007 17:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that this story is great. I couldn't have thought of a story like this. This story is just wow. I hope that you continue to write new chapters soon. I want to know what happens after all this. Hope to see a new chapter soon cause I just can't wait. I got to the end of the last chapter and was disappointed when I didn't see another chapter waiting for me to read. Hope to see one really soon cause the suspence is just killing me.LOL
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