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Reviewed By: Sentiment Remains On: February 10, 2009 23:39 EST
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Go Keitaro...now Amalla is with him awesome!! You are wrapping things up nicely!! As always I am definately looking forward to more!!
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Title: how do you keep things straight
Reviewed By: pak40l46 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2009 23:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOW! oh well. more great tie-ups before the big night. can't wait to read when keitaro and koalla finally get it on. this story is also a lot of fun also. thanx, as always- chris
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Reviewed By: jj On: February 07, 2009 19:46 EST
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wait a minute, the only thing that bugs me in this is the lack of Nyamo. how will she fit into this harem.
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Title: CH 64
Reviewed By: Tezza1502 On: February 07, 2009 01:33 EST
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Hmmm... Methinks that you and your muse are feeling well and truly inspired this past month. Answers to old mysteries are being revealed thick and fast, although there are still a couple of big ones to go, i.e.; The Urashima side of the curse, what Hiatani/Shirai/Kentaro/Shinobu's teacher are up to, the MolMol wedding itself. As well as this new wrinkle about the concubines. But, we will see. -- And it was nice to see Kitsune getting some action again. Finally. The poor dear has been rather ignored lately. (After all, she's only had him twice now. The rest of them are all almost into double digits, aside from Kaolla. And you can bet that she'll catch up real quick!) -- Damn fine work as always. Eagerly awaiting more! T
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Reviewed By: USAVet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2009 21:08 EST
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Ah the joys of frequent updates. The past few updates have been nice and things moved quickly, almost quicker that I thought they would. Nice interactions at the Ayoma household and this seems to be a step to unifying the families to some degree. Nice job on the miscreants. Looking forward to more.
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Reviewed By: jj On: February 05, 2009 15:30 EST
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let's not forget nyamo
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Title: CH 59-63
Reviewed By: Tezza1502 On: February 05, 2009 08:28 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My-my-my, you are feeling inspired lately! Several chapters in such a short space of time. Then again, it is an exciting run of events over at the Shinmei-Ryu ancesteral grounds. Tsuruko and Motoko finally begin cleaning house to bring the family into the modern age. -- Shinobu's friend finding herself in a similar situation to the Hinata Honies, though just barely. (M/F twins, eh. Tasty!) -- And yet another modification to the wedding of Kaolla Su. (I'm honestly waiting for Tamma-chan and Shippu to be proposed to next!) -- As ever, a fantastic read. Keenly awaiting more. T
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Reviewed By: Sentiment Remains On: February 02, 2009 20:23 EST
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Awesome I love the frequent updates now... and so far everything is coming together nicely. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: pak40l46 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2009 16:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice tie-ups and buttkickings. i think motoko got the respect back from her family and keitaro, though trying to protect his concubine, still doesn't realize how powerful the aoyoma women really are. but, i think it was good though, because it gave motoko the chance to shine and show her true power. now, the trash is gone. why are you so good? i'm jealous of your style, but i love it also.
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Title: MOAR!!!!!
Reviewed By: White Knight Leo On: January 31, 2009 14:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy the scenes with the Aoyama clan. I like the mix of formality and ..... reality, i suppose i'd call it. PLEASE MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WE MUST BE PERMITTED MORE PLZZZZ!!! Your writing style is excellent, and i really enjoy what you have done with the story.
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Title: you are too good
Reviewed By: pak40l46 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2009 00:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have to agree with the previous reviewer, you are too good at this and this story is addicting. too bad you didn't write the original story, with apologies to ken. i await the next segment on pins and needles. yours truly, chris
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Reviewed By: USAVet [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2009 23:33 EST
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Sometimes words can fail me, and this appears to be one such rare occasion. This is absolute torture waiting for chapters to come out. You are most assuredly on a roll. Some things are coming out into the open and other things are being dealt with in a formidable manner. Keep this up. You are most assuredly teasing those of us who have been reading. This is a good one and I can't wait to see where it ends up next.
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Title: CH59
Reviewed By: Tezza1502 On: January 28, 2009 02:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm...not sure what value could come from letting someone watch Motoko ravage Keitaro like that. But hey, it's your fic. And I'm sure it'll be good for provoking a reaction from some of the more hidebound of the Aoyama's. -- Something that's been bugging me; how is Keitaro going to support his wives? At last count, I think five of the girls have buns in the oven. And I know that between the MolMol royal treasury and the Urashina holdings that they will most likely be comfortable. But our man Keitaro doesn't seem to have given it any thought whatsoever. (If you've already covered this further back in the earlier chapters, feel free to ignore me completely.) -- Hmm...what's Kanako got planned with Kitsune, I wonder. Both with her articles and her future marital status. And there's still the question of what Kitsune wanted to tell the others ,i.e.; her theory about the Urashima curse. -- All in all, just another excellent chapter of a great fic. Keep it up. Later! T
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Title: you are too good at this
Reviewed By: pak40l46 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2009 18:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
where to begin. hmmm.... i see how loyal both sisters are to keitaro, which seems almost absolute. the revelation of tsuruko's is a good revelation to start the rebuilding of the aoyoma family. when it comes to protecting the family, kanako is like a pitbull. once she sinks her teeth into something she does not let go. i know of her absolute loyalty and love of her 'onii-chan'. it is scary at how she made the shrink cough naru's file and notes. again, she'd do anything for keitaro and protect the family that he loves. and, if granny and haruka are headed for kyoto i feel sorry for tsuruko's opponents at the dojo. plus, i wonder if amalla is pregnant??? be funny if she was. or, how about natsumi??? keep up the great writing, i'm hooked and addicted. (just like your 'ai yori aoshi' stories) 'til next time, chris
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Reviewed By: I Come Anon(ymously) On: January 18, 2009 15:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Since first discovering this story and reading through it, I've found myself checking back for updates every few days--and this has been going on for the last twenty-or-so chapters. It's a shame this story doesn't have many reviews, though I suppose your others don't have many either, despite you easily being one of the best authors on this site--at least the best that I have come across to date, that is. Normally, I only review to let an author know I'm displeased with something (usually mis-classifying a story, spelling/grammar errors, or absolute lack of plot) but I decided to make an exception to that rule. I would like you to know that we, your readers, appreciate the effort, attention to detail, and obvious love you've put into making this story--and the majority of your others--what it is/what they are. Thank you for taking the time to put out something so enjoyable.
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