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Reviewed By: darthme1011 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2011 14:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved reading this again wish there was more but thats always what i wish for when i really enjoy something |
Title: sorry to see it end, loved it too much
Reviewed By: pak40l46 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2009 22:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fantastic story, though 70 and 71 should have been switched. I can't wait until your next story. Thanks for the ride, Chris.
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Reviewed By: Sentiment Remains On: February 24, 2009 14:20 EST
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An Awesome end to an awesome story... I've been following with this story since the beginning and let me tell you it's kinda sad to see it end... a truly wonderful story. We'll now I'm gonna read some of your other works... LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE OF YOUR FUTURE WORKS!!!
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Reviewed By: adin On: February 24, 2009 02:06 EST
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damn you, I have stayed up 24 hours straight to read this story. I need more. Great story. Now on to the rest of your stuff
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Reviewed By: daous [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2009 00:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally, it's over! (I think?) Thanks for creating one of the BEST Love Hina fics of all time, and with my favourite pairing(s)! I can't wait to see what other stories you'll possibly have in store for us in the future! Your other stories are fantastic as well!
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Reviewed By: 2remember [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2009 21:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another fantastic story! The thing I like most about 'Legacy' and 'Miscalculation' is that the stories were interesting in and of themselves, not just because there were sex scenes in them. I hope you will write follow ons to both stories.
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Title: A fan from beginning to end
Reviewed By: Ryumi On: February 19, 2009 17:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading your Love Hina fic since the very beginning, being glad there was something fresh and enjoyable, as well as having a plot. I wish to truly commend you on such an AMAZING read! You know that feeling you get when you don't want something to end? Disappointment. But the good kind! That melancholy *sigh* you have when such a good thing must come to an end. And you made a hard decision to end it while the story trailed off. A decision all writers must take. I enjoy how you left things so open-ended. Possible for the reader to fill in their own gaps, or to make a sequel. I will be praying very diligently for the latter! Your writing is one of the few that I felt I must always keep my eyes peeled for, as I had checked every day for an update! I still want to see the Aoyama special techniques though; the ones only of bloodline could do. I know it must be very draining on you, all this work! If you were to make a sequel, or any sort of spin-off, I guarantee you'd have a cult-following right on your heels! Keep 'em cummin'! Ryumi~
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Reviewed By: jj On: February 19, 2009 10:59 EST
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loved how you tied in Negima in the end there. will there be a sequel? if not, then oh well, it was a great read to the end
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Title: Parting is such sticky sorrow...
Reviewed By: Tezza1502 On: February 18, 2009 09:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well dang, ya finished it. Seventy chapters of the best bloody harem-fic I have ever read. Love, lust, chaos, change, believable character evolution, several marriages, who knows how many kids on the way, and a satisfyingly involved MolMolese marriage ceremony/orgy to round it off. All that, yet still a few mysteries unwritten. Although I'm guessing Kaolla's brother just wanted to invite Keitaro to explore MolMol's ruins. And that weird bit when the Hinata Honies met up with Mei. (Perhaps a reference to another Anime?) -- Yep, pat yourself on the back. (Or, get someone to do it for you. Don't want those magic fingers of yours strained from all that awkward stretching now, do we!) This is a hell of a story. Be proud. Can't wait to see what you do next! T
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Reviewed By: rincewind2012 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2009 03:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was great and its a damn shame it had to end so soon. only real problem is that the last chap seemed a little anti-climatic (though that might be because i didnt want it to end lol)you didn't realy tell us what happened to the other girls. anyway the only thing that i think could have improved this was to have more kanako sex sceens but this was a great fic regardles
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Reviewed By: Vilkath [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2009 00:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is hard to truely comment on this story. It by far has more plot and character development then most smut fics I have seen over the years yet it still deals out pretty good romance and such as well. I do feel some girls got repeated performances with Keitaro a little to much while some other girls barely get one quickie. The other aspect I found slightly disapointing I suppose was the abrupt ending, after spending so much time on the Motoko, Shinobu and Haruka problems it just seemed way to quick of an ending. I suppose the author just got tired the story and decided just end it, which I suppose is better then nothing. But I really can't help but feeling the last chapter or two was not up the to the quality the rest the fic had.
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Reviewed By: anima_constrictor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2009 23:11 EST
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god damn it man you finished it up! if been reading this and your negima story for a long time now. though i am was kind of disappointed on how you ended that one, both fics were amazing. and to actually write 2 at the same time is impressive as hell. i will reread this from the begining, just as soon as i'm done with miscalculation. i look forward to reading your future fics
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Reviewed By: Weapon-01 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2009 21:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe it's over! I applaud your writing from beginning to end, and if it means anything to you, I bought the Love Hina DVD box set because of this story. I really enjoyed this and my time spent here was well worth it. Good luck in future writings, whatever they may be.
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Reviewed By: GrayBear32 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2009 23:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the best fanfics I have ever read. I found a few (very few) spelling errors but overall your story is one of the best I have encountered.
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Title: another good tie-up
Reviewed By: pak40l46 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2009 22:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
way to go on another good thread tie-up. nice to see nyamo again. also nice to see two of the idiots in a shrink's office, that's a real hoot. keep up the great work. chris
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Reviewed By: Sentiment Remains On: February 10, 2009 23:39 EST
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Go Keitaro...now Amalla is with him awesome!! You are wrapping things up nicely!! As always I am definately looking forward to more!!
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Title: how do you keep things straight
Reviewed By: pak40l46 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2009 23:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOW! oh well. more great tie-ups before the big night. can't wait to read when keitaro and koalla finally get it on. this story is also a lot of fun also. thanx, as always- chris
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Reviewed By: jj On: February 07, 2009 19:46 EST
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wait a minute, the only thing that bugs me in this is the lack of Nyamo. how will she fit into this harem.
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Title: CH 64
Reviewed By: Tezza1502 On: February 07, 2009 01:33 EST
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Hmmm... Methinks that you and your muse are feeling well and truly inspired this past month. Answers to old mysteries are being revealed thick and fast, although there are still a couple of big ones to go, i.e.; The Urashima side of the curse, what Hiatani/Shirai/Kentaro/Shinobu's teacher are up to, the MolMol wedding itself. As well as this new wrinkle about the concubines. But, we will see. -- And it was nice to see Kitsune getting some action again. Finally. The poor dear has been rather ignored lately. (After all, she's only had him twice now. The rest of them are all almost into double digits, aside from Kaolla. And you can bet that she'll catch up real quick!) -- Damn fine work as always. Eagerly awaiting more! T
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Reviewed By: USAVet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2009 21:08 EST
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Ah the joys of frequent updates. The past few updates have been nice and things moved quickly, almost quicker that I thought they would. Nice interactions at the Ayoma household and this seems to be a step to unifying the families to some degree. Nice job on the miscreants. Looking forward to more.
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Reviewed By: jj On: February 05, 2009 15:30 EST
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let's not forget nyamo
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Title: CH 59-63
Reviewed By: Tezza1502 On: February 05, 2009 08:28 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My-my-my, you are feeling inspired lately! Several chapters in such a short space of time. Then again, it is an exciting run of events over at the Shinmei-Ryu ancesteral grounds. Tsuruko and Motoko finally begin cleaning house to bring the family into the modern age. -- Shinobu's friend finding herself in a similar situation to the Hinata Honies, though just barely. (M/F twins, eh. Tasty!) -- And yet another modification to the wedding of Kaolla Su. (I'm honestly waiting for Tamma-chan and Shippu to be proposed to next!) -- As ever, a fantastic read. Keenly awaiting more. T
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Reviewed By: Sentiment Remains On: February 02, 2009 20:23 EST
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Awesome I love the frequent updates now... and so far everything is coming together nicely. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: pak40l46 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2009 16:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice tie-ups and buttkickings. i think motoko got the respect back from her family and keitaro, though trying to protect his concubine, still doesn't realize how powerful the aoyoma women really are. but, i think it was good though, because it gave motoko the chance to shine and show her true power. now, the trash is gone. why are you so good? i'm jealous of your style, but i love it also.
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