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Title: amazing
Reviewed By: deepmisc On: February 01, 2008 00:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the best written and most interesting fics that I have ever read.While I initially thought the content would be pretty predictable, the introduction of a few new characters such as the teacher serve to keep things interesting. Not that the original plot wasn't interesting enough.. Keep it going!You obviously have a talent for writing..
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Reviewed By: anon2 On: January 28, 2008 17:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Minor spelling errors but nothing glaring. It's got great writing and a great plot. Hopefully you'll get some more titbanging and some footjobs in there. ;D
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Reviewed By: dragon_cloud16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2008 22:42 EST
Comment/Review:
It was a great chapter and it shows possible sub-pairings of potential alliances between characters with Naru,Kitsune, and Mutsumi teaming up for Keitaro. Motoko and Tsuruko are going for it. Shinobu, Koalla Su, and possibly Nyamo are a team now. Kanako and possibly Haruka could join in. Hopefully, you'll have a good way to make this a believable harem story. And besides, we know that Naru does love Keitaro, she just has problems admitting to that.
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Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2008 19:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its so obvious this will be a harem pic and the way its building up i see a few of the girls pairing off do kei won't be overwhelmed. Still Lucky SOB! Great story!
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Title: another fine chapter
Reviewed By: someoneelse On: January 17, 2008 22:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the quick and enjoyable update. I am assuming that the keitaro group will be heading back to hinata soon. cant that annoying teacher be blown up already? get su and nuke him a few times please.
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Reviewed By: Drol On: January 14, 2008 19:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hot and Awesome don't even come close to describing the glory of this story.
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: someoneelse On: January 13, 2008 01:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its good to see that characters that are usually neglected having a bigger role. these two chapters were, like the rest of the story, an enjoyable read. hope it continues. thanks for the nice updates.
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Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 21:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whats interesting was the fact that 2 of the minor characters have or are sharing 'time' with kei, while the girls are still working out their shared problems with the various marriage entanglements and 'Naru'! Hope we see them involved with Kei soon. Oh and nice touch on the ACC teacher! dennisud
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Reviewed By: GrayBear32 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2008 17:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I truly wish that I could write this well. my little story has taken forever and does not seem half as well developed as yours. You are an artist with words and I hope to see more of this soon.
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Reviewed By: Ace10 On: January 09, 2008 00:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon. I can't wait to see more. I have a request can you put Naru in situations more pervert?
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Title: Shadow Flash
Reviewed By: Yellow Flash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 14:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story, Please hurry up whit the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Nammu On: January 03, 2008 17:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is fantastic, I assume you're making the harem as large as possible but I wondered about some side characters. Sarah= the daughter of one of Haruka's rivals and Keiarto's boss? plenty of room for fun. Mei = just to really mess with Naru life. Amalla= possible, complete another set of sisters. Mutsumi's Mom= I could see her joining the harem to help her daughter keep all the other girls in line with lots of hot lesbian sex (as well as the occasional fling with kei). Nyamo= I assume she will be joining soon, possibly with help from Haruka. Keep on going!
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Title: thanks
Reviewed By: someoneelse On: December 27, 2007 01:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thanks for the quick and lengthy followup. it was great.
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Title: CH 6
Reviewed By: Tezza1502 On: December 26, 2007 23:50 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Several bombshells dropped here. Tsuruko lays the groundwork for accepting a place at Keitaro's side. Haruka seizes the moment. And the other girls begin to realise how deep Naru's problems run within her. All in all, a jam-packed chapter. Excelent stuff! So, Keitaro's first time happens when he's buried underneath a mountain. Heh. When I think about it, that's probably the ONLY way he could have a moment that the others couldn't interupt. (Historically, being on an island on the other side of the Pacific is just not enough when it comes to those girls!) The more I think about it, the more amusing it becomes to me. I wonder if Naru will take a swing at the shrink. If she even shows up, that is. And Keitaro's reaction to her hurting Mei will be interesting as well. Could just be the final nail in the coffin of his promise, that. And I'm guessing he will find out, at some point. Granny Hina as well. Any explanation as to why Naru was evicted would have to include a summary of the events leading up to it, I guess. Yes, another fine chapter here. May there be many more. T
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Title: KC6
Reviewed By: seph6 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 18:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. It would be funny if the psychiatrist that Mei recomended is a pervert, and when Naru tell then about that they all would believe that she is over reacting like always.
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