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Reviewed By: The Ansem Man [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2008 16:27 EST
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You gets massive points for this fic. Unlike your Negima one, it actually addresses and fields all the disturbing implications, and there are less spelling errors to boot. I do wish you the best of luck as you conclude this. The plots you write are masterful.
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Reviewed By: fanficlvr On: November 22, 2008 03:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I/ve been rereading the whole fic and I discovered something. Early in the story, Su had stated she was going to marry both Keitaro and Motoko. The later chapters have it as Su marrying only Keitaro and Shinobu. I know That this is a long story but was that change intentional or an accident? Another question is at one point Amalla asked if Keitaro knew the Urashima fighting style. The reponse from Haruka and Kanako was a firm, secretive no. Are you going to explain why Keitaro can't learn the arts?
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Reviewed By: Sentiment Remains On: November 14, 2008 23:06 EST
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Just the same questions Tezza asked... the suspense is killing me. All aside the story itself is just how a harem story should be written; Not too short and unbelievable, but a long and detailed story. Excellent job so far... I can't wait to see more!!
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Reviewed By: Tezza1502 On: November 12, 2008 07:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oops! Been a while since I showed some courtesy and reviewed your excellent fic. (Have been busy/wallowing in apathy.) Anyway, I used to think that this was one of the best harem fics I've ever read. Now I know it's the best one I've ever come across! Somehow you just keep pumping out fresh ideas, with interesting twists on old ones. And while several questions have been answered, still more remain. What are Hiatani, Shirai and Kentaro up to? Is Shinobu's old teacher/stalker going to stage a return? How many more of the Hinata Honies will gain buns in their ovens before Keitaro calls for a time out? And will Kaolla become allergic to bananas once she finishes growing up? I can't wait to find out! Later!! T
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Title: great chapters
Reviewed By: pak40l46 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2008 22:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keeps getting better all the time. now that naru and mutsumi are pregnant it will be even more fun. i am glad you had haruka tell keitaro that she is pregnant also. a little nookie with a couple of the girls now and then would be welcome, but still this is a fantastic story. it is also welcome that they are coming together as a large family without too much friction. please, keep up the quality of your writing and i await the next installment(s). Chris
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Reviewed By: USAVet [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2008 21:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update. Three chapters and they seemed a bit short, but very welcome. Things seem to be progressing along nicely and it seems that Naru and Mutsumi are next to the altar with Keitaro. Keep plugging along as this has been an excellent read.
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Reviewed By: Sentiment Remains On: November 08, 2008 15:43 EST
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Taking care of the trash ehh pretty awesome so far love the way everything is coming together!
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Title: loosing trash
Reviewed By: pak40l46 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2008 21:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great way to take care of people who could ruin Keitaro's relationships. plus, it ties up a lot more loose ends. keep up the great writing.
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Reviewed By: USAVet [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2008 21:35 EST
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Looking good as always. Nice little update and as usual it is well written. Keep going, the story is quite enjoyable.
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Title: good tie-ins
Reviewed By: pak40l46 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2008 18:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good way to tie up more loose ends. only thing is, please don't end this fic like you did Ai Yori Aoshi one, where I was left hanging about which of the girls was pregnant. Be that as it may though, you stories are always excellent. i hope you continue the great writing because this storyis one of the best ever. Chris
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Title: best story ever!!!
Reviewed By: ulquirroalover666 On: October 27, 2008 17:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i cant wait for more of this masterpiece youre making!1!! i wonder whats gonna happen to kentaro and Shinobus teacher lolz i need more!!!!! :D
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Reviewed By: Spartan429 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2008 07:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, your writing is top notch! Definitely better than me! Keep up the good work, I'm really enjoying this story! Peace Out!
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Reviewed By: Sentiment Remains On: October 22, 2008 23:07 EDT
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The marriages have begun... and it seems all of Hina's Planning is coming together. As always excellent work, Looking forward to more!!!
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Reviewed By: pak40l46 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2008 05:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excellent story. good angle at using his imperial majesty. and great moment with the wedding couple on their special night. i can't wait to see the who's married next. Chris
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Reviewed By: Blackwolfhowls On: October 22, 2008 04:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story continues to flow together brilliantly (much like the ladies in the story). I have read this story over a number of times just to make sure I don't miss anything and it ensnares my interest, in style and creativity. I know it takes a lot of time to write a story, but I look forward to a hopefully long and enjoyable time reading many future chapters.
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