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Reviewed By: Sentiment Remains On: June 15, 2008 05:34 EDT
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I must say I'm enjoying the updates so far and your writing is still top notch love the h-scenes (Naru & Mutsumi awesome!) anyway hopefully we'll see some of the other girls next like, I guess Motoko would be nice to see snce she's gonna be married to Keitaro I think.
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Reviewed By: denisud On: June 12, 2008 11:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seems all the girls are gonna get their 'turn' as the day goes on. So whats gonna happen after dinner, Will the three Stooges burst the good thoights the Hinata Inn's guests have, and will we see More of Motoko next? ;-) Great job!
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Reviewed By: dragon_cloud16 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2008 22:32 EDT
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Another chapter that continues to slowly link other chapters together and keep the plot. I hope that you'll get the next chapters out soon.
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Reviewed By: Sentiment Remains On: June 03, 2008 01:14 EDT
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Nice, you updated and I'm glad you did cause my vacation was horrible and it's nice to finally come home and read something good.
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Reviewed By: Sicksorrow On: May 27, 2008 12:51 EDT
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Awesome Kanako finally got some action...six more to go. But we can't forget about Granny's plans, and what of Shinobu's psycho teacher? What about Shirai & Haitani? Hopefully they won't disturb things around Hinata Inn. Great Job looking forward to more!!
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Title: Kanoko down more to go.
Reviewed By: zerothehero On: May 25, 2008 18:43 EDT
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Loved the chapter. Keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: GrayBear32 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2008 00:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter. You seemed to have avoided the problem I am now facing with how the other girls sre going to react when they find out he has already taken one of them as his lover. coninue the good work and I hope to have another chapter up soon.
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Title: almost there
Reviewed By: someoneelse On: May 24, 2008 23:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank you for another chapter, and it seems like this story is coming down to the final stretch. will miss it when you are done with it
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Reviewed By: dragon_cloud16 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 16:10 EDT
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Some good chapters and the ending seems near. I like how you alter the storyline's in your fanfics to get the result's you want while keeping them to their roots.
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Reviewed By: Sentiment Remains On: May 12, 2008 10:29 EDT
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It seems we are getting close to the wedding I see, I wonder what's going to happen to the teacher and what's Granny Hinas' plan. Your leaving me in suspense here, Great Work!
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Title: O yeah
Reviewed By: someoneelse On: May 09, 2008 22:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its finally getting to the crux of everything, the resolution of it all. and it seems like all of keitaro's worries and hesitations are going to get completely destroyed in no time at all. let the weddings begin. shinobu will finally get what she deserves
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Reviewed By: zerothehero On: May 09, 2008 15:55 EDT
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Yeah it's getting good now .Their finally getting down to the brass tax of the marriage. I can't wait for the wedding and h-scenes.
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Reviewed By: Sicksorrow On: May 09, 2008 00:06 EDT
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Wow...and again awesome update love how this is turning out so far. I wonder what the girls have in store for keitaro? Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Sentiment Remains On: May 02, 2008 23:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Argh! Why did the chapter end it was getting good...Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: DrewB1442 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2008 04:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good. You remembered that while Naru has a unique cooking style, the others remark that it's good, it just doesn't look that great. Most writers like to make her a fandom Akane clone, which isn't entirely accurate. I'm quite impressed by someone getting it right for once.
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