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Reviewed By: Sicksorrow On: April 21, 2008 10:34 EDT
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Nice update and once again, Love the story and please keep up the good work, and always remember don't let life or anything get you down. Looking forward to more updates.
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Title: 25
Reviewed By: Tezzqa1502 On: April 21, 2008 08:43 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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You really do like to stretch things out, don't you. And I mean that in the nicest possible way. You're writing a bloody excellent fic here. It's just that at the end of every chapter I am left craving more info. What was the agreement between the girls? What is the curse? What is Shinobu's ex-teacher going to pull? Whats in the Annex? What are Kaolla's people up to? Have Tsuruko & Motoko flipped a coin yet? Just how many marriage ceremonies are going to be involved with Keitaro being wed? -- But enough ranting. As I have said, you are producing an awesome fic here! I'm just getting impatient, is all. -- It was nice to see Naru truly benefiting from her therapy. I'm surprised Keitaro didn't faint as soon as he heard her being so rational. Or maybe he did? I wonder how he will handle her being the new voice of reason at the Hinata. Her and Shinobu, that is. You go girl! As usual, eagerly awaiting further updates. Keep up the excellent work!! T
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Title: NOOOOOOOOOOO
Reviewed By: someoneelse On: April 21, 2008 00:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO... where is the rest of this chapter? i was expecting things to blow up and stuff. in any case thanks for another update. looking forward to next time
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Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2008 20:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Short and also neat in that we FINALLY hear what we've gotten hints on all through the story. I'm just wondering who's next with Kei and when will we know Haruka's preggers! Oh ... Where is thwe weirdo "EX" teacher?
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Reviewed By: DKGafgar On: April 19, 2008 09:12 EDT
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*sound of screeching tires* ...Wait, what? How did those two suddenly become hostile to Keitaro - oh, anime. Geez, were the two versions THAT different?
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Reviewed By: DKGafgar On: April 19, 2008 08:53 EDT
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It took me a while to figure out a few minor things I'd noticed popping up here and there, like Tsuruko not knowing about Motoko's little novellas. The difference in Kanako's introduction to the Hinata cast was what finally made me get the picture that this is based on the anime (which I've never seen) as opposed to the manga. No wonder I kept doing double-takes. Carry on then.
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Reviewed By: DKGafgar On: April 19, 2008 03:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*BLINK* Is Haruka dressed like REVY in this chapter?! INSTANT WIN.
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Reviewed By: Sentiment Remains On: April 17, 2008 12:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Since I've been on Fanfiction there is only one harem story that's complete but it's soo short and not as good as this story here. Your story is an example of how a harem story should be written. Great work.
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Reviewed By: Derbisol On: April 07, 2008 22:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ive read all of this over the last few days and its amazing, you have to write anotherchapter, i cant ger enough of this story!
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Title: 23 & 24
Reviewed By: zerothehero On: April 07, 2008 17:16 EDT
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Ah man the cat's out the bag now.Now this is going to get really interesting. nice chapters keep up good work
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Reviewed By: Sicksorrow On: April 07, 2008 14:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow looks like Keitaro has his hands full. Looking forward to the next update. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!
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Title: didnt expect that so early
Reviewed By: someoneelse On: April 07, 2008 00:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i didnt expect a fight to break out THAT soon. but good cliff, at least hes finally back and from this point on i guess everything will move at breakneck speed to the conclusion eh. thanks for the good updates. cant wait till next time.
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Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2008 22:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the fact that you update 2 chapters each time. Also I knew Kanako would be the one to fight first. I worry about the two idiots down the road and what they do will affect the new clan. Finally I oove you leaving us with that last line! Excellent!
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Reviewed By: Havoc80 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2008 00:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story. I hope that you update this ASAP. Don't make your loyal readers wait to long. Havoc.
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Reviewed By: Sicksorrow On: April 01, 2008 10:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story so far can't wait for keitaro return!! I can't wait to see what the girls have in store for Keitaro! All in all it's been a long journey. PLEASE keep up the great work!!! Oh and Vilkath if you had read the chapter selection you would have seen, (being a media miner member and all) that the story was updated on march 24 2008 and it has been continuously updated.
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