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 Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 11, 2010 12:29 PDT
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Dear Lord. Evan is to die for. Sue you are brilliant!
 Reviewed By: anime_game_lover [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 11, 2010 10:19 PDT
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Awsome chapter. I Just Love Your Wrighting. I thought you might also get a kick out of know this little bit of info. i Have Even/Zel as my background on my computer, phone, and PSP.
 Title: Chapter 98: My heart is now officially lost to a fictional charater. **dreamy sigh**
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 11, 2010 07:59 PDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I. ADORE. Evan. I'm just...all mushed out and wanna hug someone! Go'on and spoil your mate, man! And I KNEW V was gonna drive that car! Sneaky wench! He really hooked her up for her birthday! yay!
 Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 11, 2010 05:23 PDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Sold! It has to be said Evan is a darling!
 Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 11, 2010 05:00 PDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Today is my birthday too! hehehe! I was hoping you'd post an update today and you did! I love Evan!!
 Reviewed By: Kynkii [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 10, 2010 22:57 PDT
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OMG! How awesome is he? I want an Evan for my birthday. Yup. *nods* That is all.
 Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: fanfic7inu [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 06, 2010 22:52 PDT
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$o$ no fairrrr V i want Roka's dough, too!!! (as of now, money>Evan, just cuz that shower scene [ha that sounds dirty even tho it's not 8D ha] is still stuck in my head... what with all this stress and finals and stress and etc... muh-nee would be goood. :D liked it as always. lol they've gotten close enough that Val can complain to Roka w/o her worrying that he'll shun her away forever..? xD waiting in stress-mode~FF7I
 Reviewed By: Tashwampa [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 05, 2010 19:54 PDT
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Thanks for updationg, love the chapters!! This story is absolutely my favorite.
 Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 05, 2010 08:16 PDT
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Great update! It's so obvious that V is soooo in love with evan and she doesn't even realize it. ONLY someone in love would leave all those random voicemails lol I feel like we've been building up V and evans relationship for sooooo long like almost 100 chapters worth lol and i've been lovin every min of it btw! now im ready for that classic BIG gesture that your known for where everybody lays all their cards on the table and lets each other know how they feel. When evan says I LOVE YOU and you can't marry that boringgggggggg marvin! and when V has to make a really big decision and really look at how she feels about about evan, Knowing her tho she's gonna get scared and make the the wrong one therefore hurting evan and herself :( ok im rambling lol GREAT chapters!
 Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 05, 2010 01:56 PDT
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I am impressed with Val's candor about wanting expensive for her birthday. But now I am being eaten with curiosity about what he is going to get her. I hope there is an answer before I go the way of my user name over curiosity. But I must say only true love will get a man out of bed to go running at 4 am, that or insanity.
 Title: I'm SOOOO Happy!!
Reviewed By: Titiana [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 05, 2010 01:46 PDT
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I cannot tell you how happy I am that you are able to update again! There aren't words to describe my joy at once again reading your new chapters!!
 Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 04, 2010 17:47 PDT
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Once again Sueric subterfuge has been one of the great highlights of my day. Oh Evan...Oh V :) I was excited to hear about how long this one is going to be!! Evan has always been my favorite character since the moment he was mentioned and I pretty much love love love this story. Its funny that after I'm done reading a story I always think damn I wish I knew how the rest of their life went...I wish this just continued... and you make that dream come true for me :D and unlike how some stories can get tedious when they're long...your's never ever does. I just hope that you never get bored with the purity stories and finish out the 12 because I HAVE to see Gunner get hitched!! :) thanks again Sueric!!! Mary
 Title: Chapter 97: Still cracking up at 'Myrtle'--Evan, you tickle me with those names!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 04, 2010 12:02 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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**wipes a tear** Okay, I'm good, now. Myrtle--pffft-AHAHAHAHAHAhAHAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!! Okay,seriously, I'm done. Evan is so accomodating that I just KNEW, tired as he was, he'd give in to V's request--all the hanyou energy comes in handy--and, well, he had an excuse to check out her rear, too! Heh heh heh... The fact that she felt that comfortable making such a request of her client, at that hour, while he was clearly half-asleep, speaks highly of her being used to Evan caring for her and her emotional dependence on him. I wonder if Marvin ever walked in on a meeting with the two, if he'd see their comraderie and closeness as a threat or take it in stride. I like Marvin, actually, and kinda feel sorry for the fact that eventually V will leave him (and, oddly, keep seeing him and Myrna Loy, but ignore that as the sugar rush it is--been cheating this week)...well, that's just odd rambling. Great chapter and funny! Those Biscuits, Sue! Damn, Evan can pack 'em in! He eats the way folks think I eat! LOL!
 Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 03, 2010 19:08 PDT
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WHOA MAMA! I have a feeling "Saturday" is gonna be intense! Awesome chapter!
 Title: Chapter 96: Evan was in a school play! Go fig...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 03, 2010 08:26 PDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Wow, Evan's got one heck of a great encourager in V, though, in this case, I understand him not pl;aying up his accomplishments--Sami's disappearance really DID rock the ENTIRE clan's foundations. Loved V's messages to Evan! Just like a girfriedn leavign random calls to her beaux--she really has no idea how emotionally involved with Evan she's become and it's endearing to watch this romance unfold. Great chappie and glimpse into Evan's past. I wish I could see a fanart of Evan and Madison from the yearbook... **hinthintwinkwink**
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