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 Title: Catching up
Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 02, 2012 17:51 PST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hi sueric, I just checked for updates last night and found that you'd added about 10 chapters since the last time I checked. Of course, I had to read them all right then and there. :) At about 5 in the morning, I finally finished with the best, most agonizing cliff-hanger ever! Wow. What is going to happen? I've been fantasizing all day. If she accepts marvin for a year or so, or maybe even two, or four years... gets married to that douche and then eventually realizes she can't take it anymore... And runs to evan where she is supposed to be! And meanwhile, evan would... what? Be so distraught, he'd give up music? His entire life, and person would change. And then they'd meet up again someday, and ... :D well. I'll leave the writing to you, lol. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapters.
 Title: Still Trucking
Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 26, 2012 19:19 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I just wanted to let you know that I have not stopped reading this fic. I realize that I fell off the charts with my reviews, and for that I am sorry. I LOVE this fic sooooo much, and I must say that Evan Zelig is by far my most favorite character out of all of your original characters... Keep up the good work and your father is in my prayers.
 Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 26, 2012 08:13 PST
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Oh my god, GAH!!!!! What is she going to do?!?!?!?!!! Love your stories, its so amazing the little world you have created, and how inter related each story is, you never forget all the little things from one story to the next. I can't wait to keep reading as you update and find out all the answers, not only to the rest of this story, but to things like why Kagome and Inuyasha youngest son is sick and everything else too! Keep up the amazing writing, and I can't wait to see what you come up with next! -a dreamer
 Title: Happy Thanksgiving
Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 21, 2012 13:35 PST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Big girl panties on now Val! You can do it! Praying for your father Sue, thank you for writing us a chapter even with all the crazy going on. Hope the week goes well for you.
 Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 20, 2012 23:32 PST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG HOW COULD U LEAVE US WITH A CLIFF HANGER!! BUT I'M SO HAPPY TO KNOW THAT YOUR GOING TO FINISH THIS STORY! I STILL THINK YOUR AN AWESOME AUTHOR! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND I HOPE YOUR DAD IS DOING GOOD! :)
 Reviewed By: Lynzi18 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 20, 2012 20:38 PST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
She has to make the right choice... EVAN!! She better not marry Marvin! lol You're keeping me on the edge of my seat and I can't wait to read the next chapter! Losing my mind! I hope you have an awesome thanksgiving :)
 Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 20, 2012 14:06 PST
Comment/Review:
Did I read that right? I really hope I didn't. Its the safe thing to do, yes, but is it the correct one? I almost wish that with her spontaneous trip, Valerie were to find out that she's the one that was being strung along and that Marvin has a family somewhere... but I guess that's just sadistic, mean and an easy out. And knowing your stories, an easy out is never what happens. Keep up the good work, dark
 Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 20, 2012 13:30 PST
Comment/Review:
I'm happy to hear your dads doing better, ill still keep yall in my thoughts. Maybe Marvins got another girl there so its easier to dump him :) we can only hope lol
 Reviewed By: Tashwampa [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 20, 2012 13:17 PST
Comment/Review:
Sueric why must you torture us?! My poor hear t can't take it anymore. I'm so emotionally invested in these characters that it's probably not healthy! I just want Valerie and Evan to have cute little babies. But thank you for updating. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving, sweetie, enjoy yourself!
 Reviewed By: Bitzer [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 20, 2012 12:57 PST
Comment/Review:
Please please don't tell that we have to wait for another chapter another 8 days!!! :)
 Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 20, 2012 12:23 PST
Comment/Review:
Holy damn holy damn holy damn! Really right there! You had to stop it right there! ~Cricket42
 Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 20, 2012 11:48 PST
Comment/Review:
Why make the trip if you're just gonna make a decision based off of fear. Smh. Gotta say it would be hilarious if Marvin was about to meet up with another woman or one was following him out of his room. It would just go to show that safety doesn't always come from those u would expect it to. Gosh I hate cliff hangers and all I can say is maddy was right. Leave Evan alone. Its as of she thinks he is incapable of real love. He deserves better. If evan took some time for himself it would be a nice twist. Cuz u never know what you've got till its gone. Well I hope u post again soon. Glad ur dad is doin better.
 Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 20, 2012 00:21 PST
Comment/Review:
A couple of things. 1 I'm quite proud of myself. I just finished rereading this entire story. Took me three days but I did it. 2 Please please please please update soon. 3 since you didn't finish last year's christmas story does that mean we get two this year? And 4 I hope everything is alright with your dad. You're in my thoughts. ~Cricket42
 Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 12, 2012 17:11 PST
Comment/Review:
That could have been bad, but here comes maddy to save the day! I really hope she picks Evan, Marvins just so... Blah lol. Hope your dad gets better soon, you'll be in my prayers :)
 Reviewed By: Tashwampa [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 12, 2012 15:45 PST
Comment/Review:
So it all comes down to this. This very moment in time. I would be more hyped up, but I'm just wanted to give your dad my blessings and prayers, for recovery. I hope you have a safe trip as well! Be safe!
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