| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2012 19:14 PDT
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I wanna know whats in the box lol shopping for peoples birthdays is always difficult, well for me anyways. And it was so sweet for Gin to call and make sure Evan had company for his birthday, even tho she just wants them to get together like the rest of us but still nice and thoughtful |
Reviewed By: Silly1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2012 16:38 PDT
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Damn! Cliffhanger. And it's a Friday, too. I'm going to be wondering what was in the box all weekend long. |
Reviewed By: Tashwampa [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2012 15:25 PDT
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Oooohhhh~ I wanna know what it is! So bad! I need to know. But you'll reveal when the times comes. I love this story though, really. It's made my day several times in the past. |
Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2012 11:33 PDT
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I love second-hand shops. There's just something said for a piece that you just can't find anywhere else that just needs a little love. Keep up the good work, dark |
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2012 09:37 PDT
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A Cliffy, you ended this chapter in a Cliffy...LOL, you haven't done a cliffy is SOOOOOOOOOOO LONG!!!! I love it. It's gonna kill me till you post again, I will be imagining ALL kinds of things from the leg lamp from "A Christmas Story" to what ever else my demented mind can come up with...I WUV YOU SUE!!!!! A CLIFFY |
Reviewed By: matsuri [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2012 08:20 PDT
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i cannot imagine anything better than new chapters! i'm so excited you finally updated! i'm so happy that the story is covering kaci lee and v's relationship and that evan is spoiling the shit out of them. good job evan! this story is absolutely perfect. please update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: ji-an [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2012 23:25 PDT
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^_^ Evan is just straight out spoiling Kaci isn't he. And Garret has a really bad case of "Older Brother" syndrome. I just hope that Kaci stops being so dodgy around Valerie. I hope they have a good heart to heart soon. Thanks for the wonderful chapter! |
Reviewed By: kamackie21 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2012 22:02 PDT
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yay updates!!! Email notifications of new chapters in this story make me smile! |
Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2012 18:59 PDT
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That was so cute! He's going to be a excellent big brother. I wanna make over like that |
Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2012 18:24 PDT
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Garrett would rather Kaci be wearing a abaya or mumu. I don't doubt that she looks pretty. I wonder where they're going to pick for dinner. Keep up good work, dark |
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2012 14:54 PDT
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Oh lord, the adventures of having a big brother...LOL, I had one of those, and he was just like that! Maybe by the the time Kaci goes home, she and V will, at least, be comfortable around each other. Hopefully V will let it slip that she has been following Kaci's public life online and that she is very proud of her. They have alot to talk about, I think. |
Reviewed By: Tashwampa [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2012 14:08 PDT
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Oh, God. Garret is hilarious. For the longest time I thought he was the youngest. I guess it was just Kaci's personality. But really I'm so excite about the chapters, and the fact that they're so close to my birthday, just makes it even better. |
Title: finally
Reviewed By: deeds [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2012 10:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
finally, last week i started reading this story. i love your inu-verse, and tho at times i question the choices made by the charachters, it is in the same vein as yelling at the tv when watching a show i'm caught up in. to me, it signifies how vested i am in the story. i can't wait to get to the end of your stories, but always enjoy the ride. subterfuge is no different. you are such a talented writer, the world you've created is amazing. i am not a frequent reviewer, but i am an avid reader. i've reviewed only a handful of writers, in keeping with the thumper code of ethics, and i have to say the sheer magnitude of your work is daunting even without the fact that it's damn good, too. i do have a complaint, too. i had to wait 167 chapters till my hero showed up! i just wanted to put my two cents in here. |
Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2012 05:40 PDT
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I am beyond happy that you updated!!! I have been checking every other week or so hoping that you would :). This is literally the only fanfiction series I still follow, and will continue to do so! I hope you at least finish this particular story, because I love Evan's character and would love to see him finally happy. Though I think it would be an interesting twist to see the all powerful rock god end up like his mom because V is so reluctant. Sooner or later she has to admit she loves him haha! So so glad you are back my dear! I hope you and your family are good! How is your son liking college?? Do you miss him like crazy?? |
Reviewed By: jessie6491 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2012 16:15 PDT
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I cannot tell you how ecstatic I am that you are updating again. I don't review often because I don't feel like I have anything constructive to add, but I've been following your work for about six years now. I don't read much fan fiction anymore, but I never miss checking for one of your updates. Although, I would hardly call this series fan fiction anymore. You've made this world your own. I do feel throughout the development of Evan and Valerie's relationship, it's become a somewhat human story. I'm looking forward to seeing it circle back around to his youkai heritage once they've worked through the human obstacles to their relationship. I hope all is well with you and your family. I want you to know I'll be a loyal reader until the day you decide the Purity series has run its course. |
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