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 Title: YES!
Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 18, 2012 12:52 PDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Thank you for posting another chapter! I miss the updates.
 Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 21, 2012 10:11 PST
Comment/Review:
For some reason it left out the rest of my comment!? D: It wasn't anything special (I loved the chapter and am excited for the next one, etc.) but I wanted it to be said! Anyway, glad to "hear" from you and from V and Evan, can't wait to see what mischief they get into!
 Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 21, 2012 10:08 PST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
An update!
 Title: I've MISSED YOU!
Reviewed By: shayner21 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 21, 2012 03:37 PST
Comment/Review:
I AM SO HAPPY! You're ALIVE! And writing. I have no idea what the circumstances were, but I am glad that you seem to be better. :] I think it's a good idea to write everything first and then post it rapidly. We've all been waiting for like EVER, but waiting a bit more is totally worth it. V better be okie tays. Maybe Evan is going to tackle her to the ground, they have hot passionate boom boom and everything is swell. BAHAHA. That would be a cheap ending...that's why I read stories instead of writing them. ANYWHO! Have fun writing, stay well and I can't wait to get that AMAZING email saying "New chapter added to 'Purity 9: Subterfuge'" -shay. :]
 Reviewed By: ecqsmail [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 20, 2012 20:14 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yippee, Another chapter!! I can't wait to read more. I understand waiting to post until you finish so it'll be just right though I'll still be holding my breath waiting for the rest of it. But don't worry, I promise not to let myself pass out, I'm currently reading the rest of the purities over again while I patiently wait for more. Hope you and your family is doing well, and although I haven't heard anything lately about rude reviewers, don't ever let yourself get discouraged. They're just jealous of your talent and therefor must be petty.
 Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 20, 2012 01:53 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Interesting... I can't wait till you start posting again :)
 Reviewed By: Tashwampa [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 18, 2012 06:22 PST
Comment/Review:
I thought you'd never reiew!(Not really, I knew you would) but I can't wait until the updates come faster than ever. I seriously love this stoy. It's starting to become an obsession. Evan is a wuss though. It's onl two chest hairs...I'm just so happy Sueric! You just made my day with this!
 Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 17, 2012 16:53 PST
Comment/Review:
You're alive! Well, one way that Valerie can get what she wants (those chest hairs), is to pluck one out to wake Evan up for the next two mornings as well. By the time that Evan got peeved about it, he'd wake up first, and her task would be complete anyway! I also have to give Garrett points. Its not always easy to play mediator between two siblings... or play mediator period. At least he's trying. I hope that you and your family are doing better and that we hear from you sooner next time! Dark
 Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 17, 2012 14:14 PST
Comment/Review:
Aww I've missed those two lol Evan is such a wuss if he thinks that hurts, he should get a bikini wax then he can complain about pain. And I look forward to the rest of the story :)
 Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 17, 2012 09:00 PST
Comment/Review:
Pulling out his chest hairs cause they tickled her nose...sounds like something I would do, LOL. The conversation between Garret and Kaci made me miss my siblings...it sounded so, so right! You post the story any way you want Sue, we loves you baby, nice to see your voice again, and nicer to see Val and hEVEN again. I've missed you all.
 Reviewed By: ji-an [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 17, 2012 08:40 PST
Comment/Review:
Welcome back Ms. Sue! I hope you're feeling better and it's great to have updates again! Wonderful as usual! Valerie pulling out Evan's chest hair was historical; I was laughing and getting weird looks in the coffee shop as I read that one. Poor Evan, he should have taken her offer, it seems like it's going to be a while before he and V can get even closer, considering that there might be someone following them! O_o I REALLY hope you update soon, because the suspense is going to kill me! I hope Valerie is not in danger! On a lighter note, I hope that Kaci Lea makes more appearances soon. I don't know, I'm an older sibling myself, and if there's one thing I love, it's when sisters are close and loving. Hope Garret can give her an offer she can't refuse! Till next time, Ms. Sue.
 Reviewed By: matsuri [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 17, 2012 08:38 PST
Comment/Review:
holy. shit. i full on screamed when i checked my e-mail and saw you had posted again!! i am so incredibly happy that there has been a new chapter!!!! evan and v are so damn cute together. i just can't get over it. i'm so happy we got to check in on them and see what they are up to. i wonder why kaci doesn't want to spend any time with v? i hope that you will update soon and i will still check for updates every day! thank you SO MUCH for the new chapter. i was having withdrawals lol
 Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 06, 2012 21:56 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I've been gone for awhile, life got in the way of fun, but I'm so glad I came back. I read this from chapter 1 to 179 in just under 4 days and cannot wait for more. I understand having familial and professional responsibilities. Eagerly awaiting more. WhisperingWolf
 Title: Happy 2012
Reviewed By: michellishelli [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 11, 2012 19:30 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this fic, and having noticed it hasn't updated in a while, I checked out your site. I'm so sorry to hear about your health problems! Here's hoping 2012 treats you a little better than 2011 :D As for the not-updating-until-the-story-is-complete, I totally get that. I did that with my own fic - it's called Life Through Sea Green Eyes on fanfiction.net, if you are at all into the Hunger Games - and I only posted each story arc after I was finished writing it and completely satisfied. From an authorial standpoint, it's a brilliant move, and I support you whole heartedly. And if you ever need a beta reader - and I bet you get this all the time! - I'd be more than happy to volunteer my services. Anyway, I just wanted to let you know that I think you're a fantastic writer, and while I have read all your Purity fics, this is by far my favorite. Something about Evan and Valerie just pulls me into the story. I've reread it several times, and will inevitably do so when you update again. So feel better, happy new year, and good luck in all your literary endeavors!
 Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: fanfic7inu [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 06, 2011 13:40 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey Sue! Long time no review! I stopped reading last year because of school etc. and I just caught up this past week, reading about ten chapters I've missed since last. One of the other reasons I stopped reading and reviewing, though, was because I was a little miffed about having one of my reviews deleted and it took me awhile to realize why it was. It had been a rare time I'd forgotten about your unsolicited critiques rule, and I apologize. Sorry I haven't read in so long. But finally! Progress in the Evan and Valerie story! I'm loving it! The almost kiss, Valerie's cute brother, Gin getting pregnant... all so great. You're one of the few online authors that actually make me laugh or chuckle aloud as I read, and I've missed that about you while I've been away from the Purity series. I'm incredibly tempted to go back and read my favorite Purity stories now-- such as Gavin/Jillie, Bas/Syndie, and my all time favorite: Isabelle/Griffin. I know it's been awhile since you've last written, and you're busy with real life problems such as health and sons etc., but hang in there! I notice you had quite a streak going, updating twice or three times a month during the summer. It's been a good four months, but hopefully when you have a moment to breathe in between preparing for the holidays, you can shoot out a quick fluff chapter as a Christmas present to the many who still follow you? :3 (puppy eyes) Of course, your real life has precedent, and I understand if it isn't possible. I just love reading your flowing style of writing, and I guess I just can't wait until Valerie dumps Marvin's sorry ass. (The Hojo-like name teasing... I love it. It's like Purity 1 all over again.) Anyway, I wanted to leave this long-ass review as an apology for not reviewing these past several months. HAPPY HOLIDAYS! Waiting eagerly but patiently, ~FF7I♥
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