| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2011 21:07 PDT
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So V got her answers uh? well, I hope this helps her move on from where she was. She deserved to get that information from the source. Glad. This chapter was a nice inbetween. I liked it. Keep up the great work! :D MSMND |
Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2011 01:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm happy V got some answers and has the chance to be part of the family again. |
Reviewed By: WildCard2009 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2011 21:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I truly loved this chapter. Finally, the answers to all the questions. The secrets exposed to the only person she really trusts. Trust is a powerful thing. When the trust between two people is strong, it makes them closer, makes the bonds stronger. The walls crumble and It's ok because you know its gonna be ok |
Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2011 16:25 PDT
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great chapter. really heartfelt. glad to see V is finally getting some closure |
Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2011 16:25 PDT
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I should really review more but I love this series. Actually I love all of your fics. I can't wait to see what happens next. When will they finally get together? But I am curious about something in your most recent chapter. I could be wrong but I thought that in one of your previous chapters Valerie had told Evan that her parents never came to see her, that they had missed all of their appointed visits and she would be waiting for them but they never showed. But in this chapter she mentions a few visits, including where she had met her younger siblings. So which is it? Am I just remembering wrong? I tried to look but over 150 chapters is a lot of fic to search through. |
Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2011 09:19 PDT
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I agree that by that time, it would have been bad for Valerie's future to go back to her parents, but also, that she really should have been given the privilege to finally find out what exactly was happening. A lot of heartbreak could have been healed sooner if she would have known what was happening. Keep up the good work, dark |
Reviewed By: matsuri [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2011 07:01 PDT
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i knew her parents tried to get her back!!! i can't imagine how relieved v must feel. this is one of my favorite chapters of this whole series. i'm so glad v and her parents cleared the air somewhat and i'm so glad v finally knows they have always cared about her. this is just an amazing chapter. i had tears in my eyes lol keep up the good work and i'll check for updates everyday! |
Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2011 06:57 PDT
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I like how you handled Valerie's mom in this chapter...very heart touching, and I am sure, real. And Valerie's reaction, as she actually learns why... |
Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2011 06:27 PDT
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So, I know I'm rather late on this and that I haven't been reviewing constantly BUT I have been following and I haven't reviewed because I didn't want to say something off-collar when the answer to my frustrations might be just around the corner in the next chapter. As for the past few chapters, each one I have fallen in love with. in regard to this one, I like this chapter. V finally gets to be around her family and her siblings- despite Kaci and her attitude- and Evan gets to share that moment with her. I personally think that Garret knows who Evan is, if not have a guess that he might be. I like the progression of this so far. I missed saying this: you're an amazing writer! Keep up the good work! Can't wait for the next chapter! -MSMND |
Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2011 06:47 PDT
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Either that boy 'knows'/suspects something, or he's a little attracted to him. Kaci... I can try to look into what little I saw of her there, but then again, I probably shouldn't judge her at this point. She seems nice enough, but she has something along the way that, in her mind, told her that Valerie was bad blood. Then again, it would have been just too easy if everyone welcomed her with open arms, right? Keep up the good work, dark |
Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2011 01:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wonder what bit Kaci? She's like a sour lemon ;) I'm pretty certain Garrett know's something and I'm intrigued to know just what it is ;) Lot's of hugs to you hun! |
Reviewed By: Tashwampa [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2011 14:18 PDT
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Ok, I know this ins't fair, but I don't like V's sister much. I mean, tat child was just rude. Interrupting her mom, not even looking at V. Mmm, but I did like Garret, he just seemed so sweet, like a cute little teddy bear. I love V's parents too. They seem very down to Earth and accepting of everything. LOL, they seem more like Evan to me, a little. But I can see Valerie in them. Hope you feel better, and I wish your son luck, goodnight. |
Reviewed By: RubyJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2011 07:52 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Another great chapter, once again! Anyway, was it just me, or does it seem as if V's younger sister was kind of rude? Hmm...maybe she's just jealous or feeling afraid that V's reappearance might disrupt her role in their family. Well, she should try being in V's position, being abandoned and all, and then try being rude. Lol. I love how you portrayed her family's personalities, it was quite interesting to see how they were similar and different from each other. |
Title: Birthday Girl
Reviewed By: WildCard2009 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2011 19:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was born on April 9th twenty years ago. This chapter being finished was exciting for me. It's a sobering chapter, but necessary for the story to come. I look forward to reading more. I've followed the Purity series from the beginning and know your working hard to make this epic. I know what It's like to have health problems slowing you down. I wish you luck. best wishes, WildCard2009 |
Reviewed By: matsuri [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2011 19:31 PDT
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this chapter was absolutely amazing! i loved that we got to see how V's family behaves and how they treat each other. i can't believe her dad was talking about Evan to Evan and how her younger brother plays guitar and loves Zel Roka and Zel's freaking sitting on his couch! that had me laughing so hard! reading this chapter and seeing how her familiy acts and how they were so happy to see her makes me think that maybe they tried to get her back and something happened or something along the lines of that. i'm so excited that you updated and i can't wait for the next chapter!! |
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