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 Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 18, 2011 05:06 PST
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Poor Evan, he should said he wasn't exactly sterile but had a vasectomy with plans to reverse it when he settled down.
 Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 18, 2011 04:05 PST
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Ahahahahahahaaha!!! I'm dying!! I LOVED this chapter!!! Ohhh Evan. Poor poor "sterile" Evan!!! Oh man that's too good! Can't wait until he has kids so he can be like "boom! Not sterile!". Hehehe too good :D
 Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 18, 2011 01:42 PST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Evan really is his Mother's son. I'm happy V can see just how much faith he has in her. She deserves it.
 Title: Aw!
Reviewed By: reina q [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 17, 2011 15:12 PST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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This chapter was just the cutest! The hugging was so fluffy and at the same time it was sad and heartfelt. I loved Gage's reaction, he totally wasn't expecting that! All these chapters are leaving me on edge O.O
 Title: ACK!b Amazingness
Reviewed By: Tashwampa [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 17, 2011 14:07 PST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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NOOOOO!!! There's more lies now! Grantedm, he can't tell her , but still!! It's a lie! And poor Evan, isn't sterile!!!I feel so bad, that his manhood is being questioned!! Sorry that I didn't review earlier, I just forget to check. Plus my computer was being mean and not letting me use the internet. But, no worries, I still love your story!!!
 Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 17, 2011 07:18 PST
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Thank you so so so much Su!! Your words mean a lot to me and sorry about my email!! I never get on here anymore except to read the purity stories haha it's lilswtheart9811@gmail.com though for future reference. Sorry I got so emotional, that's really not like me at all, guess I was feeling overly sensitive :/. But um AHAHAHAHA!! Once again laughed at an adult joke that I couldn't share with the boy I nanny!! Sterile though? Evan?! Hahaha :D. Oh so so good. I love maddikins hehehe I just want him to stomp over and say I'm not effing sterile I'm a dog demon!! Then stomp out. Ahaha V would be completely flabergasted and confused! I'm sure the look on her face would be priceless :D
 Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 16, 2011 19:53 PST
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Evan, you need a hug... and a bottle of Old Spice. *snicker* You poor thing! Welp, that's one way to get out of the blood test... but a sperm count test might prove to being his undoing as well... Keep up the good work, dark
 Reviewed By: renomaru [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 16, 2011 13:44 PST
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Hahahahaha STERILE!!!!! Poor Evan!!!!! Lol that is just too hilarious!! Maddy's right, he really should be thanking her. Ahh, I had a good laugh with this! Thanks for the update Suee! =D
 Title: :)
Reviewed By: inugurl338 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 16, 2011 10:00 PST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I CANT WAIT UNTIL V FINDS OUT ABOUT EVAN'S HERITAGE!! i was wondering if you could tell me if there will future (extensive) editions to the puriity series? 10, 11, 12.....
 Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 16, 2011 07:43 PST
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:) Love it. LOL Lost his manhood. Though, couldn't he take a blood test on his human night?
 Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 16, 2011 07:08 PST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I feel so bad for not leaving reviews... I've been following the Purity Arc for quite some time now... Unfortunately I don't have internet access at home... so the majority of my reading is spent on my little VX5200 flip phone. Whereas I could leave a review but then it'd be kinda hard since my phone won't process the number/letters at the bottom of the page... so I can see them. There as been SOOOOOOO many times I've been dying to leave a review for you but couldn't. Right now I am on the college campus... and just killing time before my next class. But once again... I think you are an exzceptional writer... I even wish this were a true Anime... Do you know exactly how many people would follow this arc.. uh... millions. So far I would have to say that my absolute favorite couple IS Valerie and Evan. Their relationship hits home on so many levels it's not even funny. And then the turmoil that they are going through is TOTALLY different from everyone else's turmoil. Evan knows that Valerie is his mate. Evan knows that he should never let her get away because of the previous horror story form Cain and Gin. But because they still have so much to accomplish on so many levels... I don't think Evan is even remotely close to telling Valerie who or what he truly is. Anyways, I need to step down off of this soap box. Purity: 9 is the best yet! And I'm UBER excited about Mamoruzen 'Gunnar' Inutaisho's story... what girl could POSSIBLY be perfect enough for hime o_O I wonder if it's Maddy... and they don't... realize it yet??? Lol! I'm just taking a few stabs in the dark ^_^ Keep up the wonderful chapters... and thank you so much for sticking it in with your adoring fans. You mean alot to us... even if some of us.. >_> (like me) don't always tell you. ^_^ You are loved Sue! Aijin Tusuke Kounami
 Reviewed By: Kynkii [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 16, 2011 02:50 PST
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OMG, that was freaking hilarious! Maddie is a genius!! Or I should say YOU are a genius! Poor Evvie, I'm still chuckling. "Got no backup singers", ROFLMAO!!
 Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 16, 2011 01:31 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Go Maddy! I adore that woman lol. I hadn't even thought of that but goes to show there is always some way out, though it may make you feel like an idiot. I kinda feel bad for Evan, V's pity at what he's admitted to would probably make me pissy to. Esepcially 'cos he's fibbing! Great chappie sugar!
 Title: Chapter 150
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 15, 2011 20:20 PST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I LMAO with this chapter. Poor Evan. At lease Maddy got him out of the blood test, but now V thinks he can't have kids and she feels sorry for him. I like the last part of this chapter when even his youkai was cracking up. Hope you had a great V-day
 Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 15, 2011 20:11 PST
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Sterile, Ho, no, you did not go there...sterile, oh man, I didn't think of that...do you know how hard to type it is when you are laughing so hard you're almost falling off your computer chair. Just for a moment, I had a vision of Even up on stage with a pink bow in his hair, and pink, ruffled butt panties covering HIS doggy diaper. You are one tuff, evil WENCH to emasculate him this way so close to Valintines Day. Oh, Kami, I'm gonna laugh myself stupid...my son just came in to see if I was having some kind of fit. Oh, my stomick hurts.
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