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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: Tai Khan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2009 19:07 CDT
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While I think the girls would accept a pregnant Ranma-chan as just another girl amongst them - after all, how much more proof of femininity do you need than being pregnant - I don't see Ranma-chan attending PE after receiving a doctor's excuse. Instead, she'd likely be relegated to study hall (or in Ranma's case, specifically, and after certain teacher's become aware of 'her' condition, taking 'make up' classes that all girls are 'required' to take...I believe Planned Parenthood is a required course for girls in Japan, although I could easily be mistaken, it's optional for boys).
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2009 07:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great work like always. Your author's note made me laugh. I've thought the same thing more than once. Keep up the good work.
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Title: Further Experiments
Reviewed By: Tai Khan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2009 10:17 CDT
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A remarkably well done account of how Ranma convinces herself to try out sex with a male Nabiki, much better than most other such attempts. Can't say that I approve of Nabiki-kun's being 'larger' than Ranma-kun's, as it was already pointed out earlier that Ranma-kun's was 'impressive' in Nabiki-chan's opinion. 'Course, it could just be Ranma-chan's altered perspective, being overall smaller while female. Still favoring getting Shampoo into the mix, by the way. Nice touch with the doctor as well. Hmm, might there be a future visit by her to the Dojo to see how things stand with her own eyes? As for Ryouga...I have a bit of a love/hate opinion of him, myself. The anime episodes featuring the oni that took over and brought out the characters' 'dark desires' was a good indicator that Ryouga isn't at all clueless about sex, not if one of his dark desires was to rape Akane in the shower. Shy and easily flustered, yes; ignorant, no. Which is rather at odds with his fainting nosebleeds when exposed to female nudity. Still, can't really see anything occurring between Ranma-chan and Ryouga, even if Ryouga's having a few 'fantasies' now and then. Too, I could see Ranma-chan willing to see if she actually feels any...desire...when confronted with the option of a nude Ryouga-kun...at full attention. Ranma-chan leaving an aroused and horny Ryouga-kun in the furo, upon finding that he just doesn't do anything for her sexually, could be a good time for Akane to make one of her (un)intentional appearances in the furo, also nude and likely intending to ease a bit sexual tension herself. Then, before Akane can explode about finding Ranma-chan and Ryouga-kun together in the furo, nude, Ranma-chan blithely walks out and informs her that Ryouga's all hers and to enjoy herself. Will she or won't? With all of his blood presently occupied in the lower portion of his body, would Ryouga even be able to pass out with a nosebleed...even if he wanted to? Just some ponderings.
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Title: Chapter
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2009 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent. That was one hot scene. Although, Ranma probably wouldn't have agrred to try sex with a man so soon. But who knows what the hormones make you do. I like it. But please, no Ranma/Ryoga sex scene. Adding Kasumi and Akane though, I wouldn't mind. Seems to me that all of the daughters are big perverts.
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Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2009 23:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not much to say about this chapter except that I love it.
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Title: What happened to Ch 6?
Reviewed By: USAVet [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2009 18:40 CDT
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Good up to this point, but there is zilch in Chapter 6! Get it fixed. Nice read so far by the way
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Reviewed By: AMWOOD co [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2009 13:29 CDT
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Question about chapter 6. Where's it go? Perhaps it's just bad timing, but the chapter isn't here. Seven is, but... Anyway, I'll be back later to check again. I'm looking forward to reading more (as I said for chapter 5 before). From the offices of AMWOOD co
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Reviewed By: AMWOOD co [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2009 09:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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You're right, this story is a novel idea. Also, this last chapter reminds me of a song (sort of) called "Which to Bury, Us or the Hatchet?" by Relient K. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the rest of the story. From the offices of AMWOOD co
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2009 00:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 5. Excellent like always. Nice idea with Ranma using her ki to 'heal' morning sickness. Can't wait to see more.
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Title: Woo!
Reviewed By: adriannrod [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 20:52 CDT
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I checked vack to find a whole 2 more posts. This fic is love. :)
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Reviewed By: CelestIndigo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2009 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Some grammer errors, some spelling (name) errors, but overall a great fic. I like the concept of Ranma becoming self-impregnated, Akane getting a dose of her own medicine, and R/N matchups. Lookin' forward to your next chapter.
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Title: Put on the brakes!
Reviewed By: Tai Khan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2009 04:15 CDT
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Interesting. Judging from the comments you posted at the end of the fourth part you seem to be planning for Ranma to experience an accelerated pregnancy. Jusenkyo magic, again? Cologne made no mention of anything about such a pregnancy being unusual, other than the conception itself. Being hyper-fertile was mentioned, and understandable within the context of the story. An accelerated pregnancy is not. If it's not going to be accelerated, then it's highly unlikely that Ranma would begin experiencing morning sickness so soon. Or is this going to be a psychosomatic response to what she's going through?
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Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2009 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it. I don't think I've read many fics where the writer describes the pregnancy and its consequences in such great detail.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2009 13:20 CDT
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Oh, chapter 3 is less than 20 words. Wanna fix it?
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2009 04:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great new chapter. Can't wait for more. Oh, chapter 1 is gone.
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