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Reviewed By: Suzy Q 001 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2013 01:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is this abandoned I hope not because it is very good and I would love to it continued. |
Reviewed By: Suzy Q 001 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2013 00:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update this is a great story to leave forgotten. |
Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2012 22:16 EDT
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this is such a great story why did you not pick it back up? is it doomed to never be finished? |
Title: so cool
Reviewed By: Sakura333 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2011 22:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed it I've kinda been loo fic like this for years! And I'm not joking about that either! I love the fact there's no kikyou to hinder there relationship cuz inuyasha thinks he needs to be loyal to the dead woman. Also I love how the love how there relationship is not moving to fast I know some authors like to be a bit fast with it and I admit sometimes I'm like jeez can they just have sex already lol but yea I love how its goin! Anyway I can't wait to read more I hope you update soon!! |
Reviewed By: soliea0death [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2010 08:37 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like that your following the manga more, cause the peach tree was one of my favorite parts as well. It was good that you followed along the story, cause Miroku needed to learn about the new moon. It's also great that you made it where Kagome could keep the bow that could sustain her powers. Now they turn back to going after Naraku. I can't wait to read more. GREAT JOB!!!!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2010 21:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo-hoo! I love the subtle changes you did with this, even though you kept most of it the same. If memory serves, didn't the hermit/bow only last for the one shot in the canon before blowing away as dust? Not sure if that was only in the anime, now, but either way, I really like that you allowed her to keep the bow in this story. A bow made from a sage who alchemist-ed himself into the bow will be a very strong weapon, indeed! I also thought the way you tweaked it that Toukajin got his powers from eating his master was a nice touch, and it's consistent with traditional Japanese mythology that a human can become a youkai if they are evil enough in some way or another. Inuyasha better wipe thoughts of turning full-youkai from his head! Though I know you have a transformation planned up your sleeve, somehow or another. I remember you mentioning the dilemma because there will be no Goshinki. I'm sure you'll think of something. Also, I'm glad you mentioned that there was no buzzing, so that means that Naraku's insects didn't overhear Kagome explaining the new moon to Miroku. That's good. Really looking forward to the next chapter. Update when you can!
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Title: This is a good story
Reviewed By: ladysango2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2010 22:09 EDT
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I love this story of what if. The characters are still the same even if the plot isn't. I hope to read more
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Reviewed By: soliea0death [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2010 09:38 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yaaay!!!!!! Great job! I liked how Inu and Kag were able to talk some things over finally, and now things are right as rain with them. Well that was a clever way to include the painter without a shard. Now they clued in that there after the same person, and will be traveling together. Now I'm even more curious as to how your going to work some of their other adventures without the shards. I'm sure you'll do great. Hope to read the next chapter soon!! ;)
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2010 15:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this newest chapter. I don't think it was weird at all, having Naraku give the enchanted ink to the painter, and you made it make even more sense by having Miroku realize that the aura of magic he could feel from the ink was similar to his kazaana. Naraku did do that curse all by himself without a jewel shard, after all, so we know he's got to have some of his own magics. Being able to make that ink seems perfectly reasonable. Now I'm wondering what other events you will decide to incorporate and change around. I'm sure you'll find a way to have Sango make an appearance, but under what capacity I can't decide. After all, the whole original trick of luring the slayers away, slaughtering them while sending youkai to the village happened because of the jewel, but only really in part. He controlled Kohaku with a jewel shard, yes, but luring all of the slayers away and leaving the village vulnerable...that could still happen...and he could still blame it on Inuyasha. Hmmm...well, I'm sure you have your own ideas. I wonder if you'll find a way to do the peach man without the jewel shards. That was a really good arch, but just like you said, you can't just go through the whole manga damn and rewrite the entire thing. That'd take forever! I'm looking forward to seeing your future manga adaptations and original ideas... Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: soliea0death [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2010 08:11 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehehehehehe, Miroku always made me laugh, and it's good to know that they will meet up with him again. It's also good to know that some things can be cleared with Inuyasha and Kagome next. At least when you write it they actually talk about it, and settle things in case they jump to conclusions. But I'm sure Inuyasha will still have some difficulty talking about his feelings toward her. That's why I like the whole 'bitch' thing, cause it keeps her from feeling like a complete burden. I can't wait to read the next, and I hope it's soon. YOU ROCK XD XD!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2010 03:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well good, I'm glad Kagome's worries are going to be cleared up in the next chapter. I don't mind a little Kagome-angst in regard to doubting Inuyasha's feelings, but a lot of authors take it overboard. After all, Inuyasha just called her his bitch, and she already knows what that means. But then of course, that was in the heat of the moment, and so then later with Miroku when the monk asked it so boldly like that, I could see Inuyasha not wanting to declare his love if he views experiencing the emotion as a weakness or something. Then there's also always the possibility that he just sucks at expressing himself and is no good with words, and in his mind, riddled with inu instincts, he had claimed Kagome properly with that statement. Either way, really looking forward to the next chapter, when Kagome gets her head and heart straightened out - at least for the most part - and I'm also looking forward to when Miroku comes back into the picture again and Inuyasha and Kagome realize that Naraku is the baboon man. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: littleolmee [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2010 20:52 EDT
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Just found your story, I'm really enjoying your rewrite of the Inuyasha series. You're doing a great job. I like how you still have Kagome and Inuyasha struggling with their relationship even without the other issues they faced in the original series. Good work on the characters. Thank you for posting, I'll keep a look out for more. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: soliea0death [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2010 17:32 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it worked wonderfully with the argument and then the stream scene in the chapter. In all honesty, I couldn't decide which part I liked best, it was a very good chapter all together. Now Miroku finally showed up, and I can't what to see what happens next. Keep it up! XD XD
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2010 14:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I'm glad you updated this story! Yay! And I definitely enjoyed it a lot. Hope the next chapter comes easier!
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Reviewed By: soliea0death [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2010 11:32 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY Update! A nice one too. I can understand if things have been busy for you, but I'm glad you still had some time for this. So now the plot is thickening, and I'm willing to bet their meeting Miroku next, right? Well I guess I'll have to wait and see what happens next, but take as much time as you need. Wonderful Work! XD XD
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