| "Of The Fallen" Reviews/Comments [ 99 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kakashisgurly (Logged off) On: August 30, 2010 06:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Honestly, I can't see how you could think you're making mistakes and need a beta. I think you're doing a fantastic job! I really think that you're doing a great job with how this story has been presented thus far. Not too much has been revealed yet, leaving us guessing and wanting more, but at the same time you haven't left us in complete darkness. Its a wonderful balance you've created here, I think I'm going to have to take notes from your style on how to better my own writing ~
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Title: Good revision
Reviewed By: J Luc Pitard [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2010 23:31 EDT
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Even more exciting.
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Title: regarding your needing a beta...
Reviewed By: LokoRamenDaily [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2010 21:09 EDT
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i get really annoyed when i see any spelling or grammar mistakes and not too mention im actually good at fixing them i would be more than happy too help.
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Reviewed By: frannnnn On: August 06, 2010 21:30 EDT
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amazing!! can not WAIT until you put the next chapter up! update ASAP, please and thank you sososososososo much!(:
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Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2010 12:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update!! Love the details!! Plz update soon.. u just started & it is a really great fic !
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Reviewed By: Eluwei [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2010 05:15 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was wonderful! Keep it up.
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Title: College Daze
Reviewed By: J Luc Pitard [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2010 14:51 EDT
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Yeah for gracious house guests and for surprise meetings. Where will they go from here? Maybe out?
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Reviewed By: AnotherSongstress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2010 00:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a great story, can't wait for your next update :)
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Reviewed By: Glily On: July 28, 2010 00:53 EDT
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I am loving your story so far and would be delighted to beta for you! :-) My email is goldenlily35@gmail.com if you want to send me a message to discuss it.
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2010 23:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful update. I realized almost right away that it was Miroku (and I'm assuming Sango at the desk?) even before he introduced himself, but I was not expecting Inuyasha to show up. Kagome was already putting the pieces together, but I figured it would probably take a little longer for him to realize that she was there. Then again, she was only visiting, and might not have gotten in. Don't think that'll be a problem now! Can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Kagome_rocks On: July 27, 2010 22:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: secret35 On: July 27, 2010 12:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAHHHH! cliffhanger :P! but im so glad you updated, and i really like this story, so heres a deal. every update gets a review hehe even if you post two chapters i'll review each one :P. anyway keep up the good work, i cant WAIT for the next one XD secret35
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Reviewed By: Kirara_Cutie316 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2010 10:58 EDT
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omg i love it! i love the plot and how easily you get everything to flow. but whyyyyy a cliff hanger. lol pleaaaase update soon. :)
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Reviewed By: xcuteanimegurlx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2010 10:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love this story!!! keep up the good work!
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Title: Keep Dancing
Reviewed By: J Luc Pitard [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2010 21:21 EDT
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Hm, a major twist coming up? I would've sworn the ofuda attack would've brought out the ears, but it was worth it for Grandfather to have to apologize and Inuyasha to need a haircut! The sexy teasing between Kagome and Inuyasha is also great. Did the imagined scene of Mama dressing down Sesshoumaru make anyone else laugh? And then himself showing up and being a royal prick? Well written!
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